

Jim J. Torrealba
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Novels by Jim J. Torrealba

The ultimate millionaire system
Jack is a humble young man working tirelessly at a pizzeria, saving up to buy an engagement ring for his girlfriend. But his dream shatters when he discovers her betrayal and is brutally beaten by her lover. Just when he thinks he's hit rock bottom, a mysterious voice in his head reveals a secret system that rewards him with enormous sums of money for completing certain tasks.
What starts as a strange opportunity soon turns him into a millionaire. Now, with unimaginable power and unlimited resources, Jack leaves his old life behind and sets his sights on a new purpose: revenge on those who humiliated him when he was poor. His ex-girlfriend, her lover, and everyone who looked down on him will feel the weight of his fortune… and his fury.
But as the system demands more from him, Jack faces a disturbing question: who—or what—is behind this reward game? And, more importantly, what will be the true cost of his revenge?
A story of wealth, power, and the thin line between justice and destruction.
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Chapter: Chapter 40
The wedding day arrived quickly. It was a cool morning with radiant sunshine. That morning began with the roar of several fighter jets flying very low over the mansion.Ricco Walton had paid for those private jets to fly over the Walton mansion and leave a trail of white smoke as a tribute to the marital union that would take place that day.The wedding designers and organizers were left completely deaf due to the powerful sound of the turbines as they passed.Guests began arriving one by one as the hours went by. And those guests were met with a decoration like no other. That afternoon, the Walton mansion looked more elegant than ever. Just as Ricco had requested, white dominated everything—flowers, table decorations, and the trimmed hedges.Theo Walton wore an elegant gray suit that made him look very sharp. His black sunglasses also protected him well from the sun’s rays.He was in charge of welcoming the guests and serving as the face of the event for all the important people arri
Last Updated: 2025-04-18
Chapter: Chapter 39
[CHALLENGE NOT COMPLETED!TRANSFERRING PUNISHMENT: 67%...]Hillary froze in fear at the thought of losing the use of her legs and stared at the screen as the percentage slowly climbed.As the percentage increased, she gradually lost the ability to move her legs. When it finally reached one hundred percent, Hillary was completely paralyzed.No matter how many times she tried to move her legs, they simply wouldn’t respond. She collapsed onto her bed and began to cry in despair. She couldn’t believe something like this was happening just hours before her big wedding with Ricco.She just lay there, staring at the ceiling, waiting for someone to come help her.A couple of hours passed, and finally, Hillary heard footsteps in the hallway. Several people were coming directly toward the room where she had locked herself in.They started knocking on her door with loud bangs that seemed strong enough to knock it off its hinges.“Hillary?” a woman’s voice called.“We need to fit your dress, darl
Last Updated: 2025-04-17
Chapter: Chapter 38
Hillary ran to her room and locked herself in. She shut the door with force and speed. As she threw herself onto the bed, all she could regret was ever exchanging words with Jack Stanton. In that moment, she hated him with all her heart, and wished Jack were dead, so he could never again interfere with her and Ricco's happiness.Many thoughts were racing through Hillary's mind at that moment. She even considered never leaving that room again, just to make Ricco happy, so that he could finally love her the way she had always dreamed of.Only her pillows and the shadows within that lonely room bore witness to the promises Hillary made to herself. All of it, for the sole purpose of winning Ricco Walton’s heart, as it was meant to be.Her door suddenly began to knock. Someone on the other side wanted to come in. It was someone standing in the hallway, speaking with a somewhat feminine voice. But there was no doubt it was a man.“Miss Lombardini. By Mr. Walton’s orders, I must begin stylin
Last Updated: 2025-04-16
Chapter: Chapter 37
The days went by quickly, and now there was only one day left before the famous and highly anticipated wedding between Ricco Walton and Hillary Lombardini. The press wasted no time in calling it "the wedding of the century" and turning it into the most viral news of the year. Everywhere, on every TV channel, on all social media platforms, there wasn’t a single place where this grand wedding wasn’t being talked about.Ricco Walton had invited the most important people in the world to attend his wedding—from billionaire magnates to presidents of various countries. Many influential figures would be at the Walton mansion that day to celebrate the marital union of the eldest Walton brother.Everything had to be perfect, exactly as Ricco had planned. There was no room for error. That’s why he decided to hold one last rehearsal the day before the wedding. And, of course, all his partners were present that day.Jack had gotten used to seeing the information from the millionaire system every t
Last Updated: 2025-04-15
Chapter: Chapter 36
Ricco was stunned, his jaw nearly touching the floor from the overwhelming shock of seeing Theo standing there. It was like seeing a ghost appear. Just a couple of hours ago, he had said he was on the verge of death, and now he was alive and speaking beneath the threshold of his private office door.Jack’s experience, however, was very different. The moment he saw Theo, the millionaire system went completely haywire and began sending strange information that originated from Theo.[RIVAL USER WARNING!NAME: THEODORE WALTONLEVEL: BEGINNERSTARS: 0POWER: 0SKILL: 0VITALITY: 100%FUNDS: $4,500,000,000KILLS: 0]Theo also began experiencing the same strange glitch in the system inside his head. That millionaire system that had just saved his life was now sending him mysterious data about Jack.[RIVAL USER WARNING!NAME: JACK STANTONLEVEL: CADETSTARS: 0POWER: 10%SKILL: 15%VITALITY: 81%FUNDS: $2,040,000,000KILLS: 1]Theo noticed that, for some strange reason, that information only
Last Updated: 2025-04-15
Chapter: Chapter 35
Jack was shoved out of the SUV by the bodyguards. That night, they were far more aggressive than usual. It was as if the drugs they'd taken were somehow tampered with."I can get out on my own," said Jack.Still, the men grabbed him roughly and dragged him across the Walton mansion’s garden, all the way to Ricco’s private office.They carried Jack like a sack of potatoes and threw him abruptly onto the office floor. Jack rolled and groaned in pain from the beating he’d taken on the way from his house to the Walton estate. His lip was busted, and droplets of blood marked his skin."That’s enough," said Ricco, raising his hand in a halting gesture. "You can leave. I’ll handle the rest.""Was the beating really necessary?" Jack asked, clutching his stomach as he lay on the floor."It’s strange. You were in that car with Theo, Max, and Kriss. But here you are... alive and without a scratch. So yes, the beating was necessary."Jack started laughing from the floor. His every move hurt, but
Last Updated: 2025-04-14
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