

Jim J. Torrealba
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Novels by Jim J. Torrealba

The ultimate millionaire system
Jack is a humble young man working tirelessly at a pizzeria, saving up to buy an engagement ring for his girlfriend. But his dream shatters when he discovers her betrayal and is brutally beaten by her lover. Just when he thinks he's hit rock bottom, a mysterious voice in his head reveals a secret system that rewards him with enormous sums of money for completing certain tasks.
What starts as a strange opportunity soon turns him into a millionaire. Now, with unimaginable power and unlimited resources, Jack leaves his old life behind and sets his sights on a new purpose: revenge on those who humiliated him when he was poor. His ex-girlfriend, her lover, and everyone who looked down on him will feel the weight of his fortune… and his fury.
But as the system demands more from him, Jack faces a disturbing question: who—or what—is behind this reward game? And, more importantly, what will be the true cost of his revenge?
A story of wealth, power, and the thin line between justice and destruction.
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Chapter: Chapter 10
Jack was returning to Mr. Don Vito’s restaurant after a long day delivering pizzas all around the city. He was completely exhausted and just wanted to go home.He checked the time on his phone and noticed that his shift had already ended. Finally, some good news on this crappy day for Jack."Finally, you’re here," Don Vito complained. "Where the hell have you been?" he asked."I’ve been delivering the pizzas you ordered. I delivered over a hundred pizzas all over the city today. I’m drained, and I just want to go home," Jack demanded, completely overwhelmed by the day he had had."Don’t talk nonsense!" Don Vito suddenly shouted."Excuse me?""You can’t go home. I need you here to work overtime. There are still plenty of pizza orders to deliver," Don Vito demanded selfishly and carelessly."But Don Vito..." Jack complained, but was quickly interrupted by his boss again."I don’t want excuses, you little useless brat," Don Vito said angrily. "This country is full of ungrateful parasites
Last Updated: 2025-02-01
Chapter: Chapter 9
[YOU REJECTED AN OFFER.YOUR PUNISHMENT IS: 3 HOURS WITH AN ERECTION]At that exact moment, Jack's penis tensed in a way it never had before. It was very visible to everyone. No matter how much he tried to hide it.From a distance, he saw that the crane operator was arriving exactly at that awkward moment for him."Perfect!" Jack said, looking at the sky and raising his hands sarcastically.Jack immediately noticed a strange posture in the way the man walked as he got off the crane. However, he never liked to judge a book by its cover."Hello!" the man exclaimed in a very feminine and unmanly way.His voice was high-pitched, and his body movements were really fragile for a man who operated a crane."Are you Billy?" Jack asked, a little uncomfortable as he scratched his head."Yes, I'm Billy the friendly one. I'm from the gay tow truck service."Jack couldn’t believe it. In the midst of his stress, he had called a gay tow truck service without realizing it.At any other time, he wouldn
Last Updated: 2025-02-01
Chapter: Chapter 8
Jack's car was now nothing more than a pile of scrap. The crash had rendered it completely obsolete. All the members gathered around, curious to see the accident.Max stumbled out of his car, holding his head. He was dizzy and had a hard time standing up."Are you okay?" Hillary asked, very concerned.She held Max with her arms and helped him sit down.As for Jack, he quickly approached to see how his car had fared. He didn’t really care about the vehicle. He could buy another one if he wanted.What bothered him was the malicious intent behind the act. It was clear they had done it on purpose."Are you worried about your car?" Hillary snapped at her boyfriend."Look what they've done to my Lamborghini!" Jack shouted, extending his arms."You’re unbelievable. Max needs our help, and you’re only worried about a car."Jack was very angry. He clenched his fists in rage. The Walton brothers had spent their entire lives humiliating people, and Jack was their favorite victim."He doesn’t nee
Last Updated: 2025-02-01
Chapter: Chapter 7
The 1880 Club was the most exclusive place in the entire city, a playground for the heirs of the most powerful millionaires.Jack was lucky enough to get in because he was dating Hillary Lombardini. Otherwise, he would never have been able to access such a place."Here we go!" said Jack after taking a deep breath.It was his first time arriving at the club in a luxurious car. He had always shown up on his old delivery bike, making him the laughingstock of all the club members.The bright sun, the green lawns, the crystal-clear water in the immense pools, and all those young millionaires flaunting their perfect bodies.Hillary Lombardini was always surrounded by her good friends: the Walton brothers and Max Scolari. Scolari also never went anywhere without his stunning girlfriend, Kriss.That afternoon, they had decided to sunbathe in the club's magnificent gardens, lounging on reclining chairs.For those millionaires, seeing a Lamborghini entering the 1880 Club was nothing out of the
Last Updated: 2025-02-01
Chapter: Chapter 6
"Let me go!" Jack shouted as he struggled against those men.However, they were much stronger and managed to lift Jack as if he were a paper doll."Get that lunatic out of here!" the secretary said, laughing at the spectacle unfolding at the bank's entrance.The bank manager heard the commotion from his office and decided to step out to see what was going on."What the hell is happening here?" asked the bank manager.The secretary immediately wiped the smile off her face and returned to being the submissive employee at the manager's service."Mr. Dexter..." the secretary said nervously."What is this commotion? Where are you taking that man?" Dexter Fornt, the bank manager, asked.The security guards stopped and exchanged glances before setting Jack down."We’re throwing out this poor devil who was trying to enter your office, sir.""Does he have a briefcase?""My name is Jack, and I’ve come to pay my debt to the bank," Jack quickly said, taking advantage of the moment he was allowed
Last Updated: 2025-02-01
Chapter: Chapter 5
"Help!" Jack screamed with all his might.However, the streets were completely deserted due to the torrential rain that was falling at that moment.Jack was landing and feared he would be disabled for the rest of his life.He began to drag himself as best as he could until he reached the bottom of a bridge, hoping to shelter from the rain."This can’t be happening, this can’t be happening," he kept repeating over and over while trembling from the cold.It was then that he decided to regain his composure and think calmly to find a solution to his problem."Alright..." he took a deep breath and tried to remember what the screen had said when he was penalized.He recalled that the penalty was only for an hour."An hour... Alright. I just have to wait one damn hour," he said, terrified at the thought of never walking again.He pulled out his phone and started a timer with one hour as the time limit."Come on... Come on..." Jack leaned back against the column of the massive bridge, and the
Last Updated: 2025-02-01
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