All Chapters of THE GREATEST REVENGER SYSTEM: Chapter 11 - Chapter 20
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[ARC QUEST: Julian Corbin] The Shipment Clue
Two days had passed since Thenma started the Physical Conditioning Program. His body had pushed past every limit—each set of push-ups, each sprint, each hold until his muscles burned. He was too focused on one thing: getting stronger. The pain was temporary. The end goal was what mattered. [Physical Conditioning Program] Objective: Complete exercises to improve strength, endurance, and agility. Exercise Focus: Push-ups, Sprints, Endurance Training. Current Status: Injured. Reduced efficiency. Exercise Results: Strength: +3 Endurance: +4 Agility: +2 But something wasn’t right. His left arm—the one still recovering from injury—was throbbing with sharp, painful jolts. His legs felt like lead, and his breath came in ragged bursts. Sweat soaked his clothes, dripping to the floor. [Warning: Current physical state is critical. Health at 35%. Continuing strenuous exercise could result in permanent injury.] "Just a little more," Thenma grunted, as he dropped to the floor f
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[ARC QUEST: Julian Corbin] The Detective's Daughter
Thenma stepping into the hidden room, he thought the figure already leave after the secret door closed. He chose to walked into the secret room after following the figure's way.The first thing that greeted him was a sea of pristine white boxes stacked neatly against the walls. He didn’t need to open one to know what they contained. The faint chemical odor and meticulous arrangement gave it away instantly.His eyes fell on the emblem stamped on the topmost crate: a jagged, fang-like symbol. In the bottom corner of the same crate, small numbers caught his attention."2808…" he murmured, frowning in thought. It clicked quickly. "Today’s the 26th. The shipment’s in two days."A flicker of satisfaction crossed his face, but the moment was short-lived. He turned his attention back to searching for any additional clues about the ship or its route.Before he could get far, the sound of heavy, hurried footsteps echoed through the room, heading toward the exit.Thenma’s instincts flared. He sp
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[ARC QUEST: Julian Corbin] Following Katarina Whittaker
The sky was clear, and the gentle hum of student chatter filled the air around Blackridge University. Hidden under the shade of a tall oak tree, Thenma sat in his car, his sharp eyes fixed on the school gate. His cold, calculated stare betrayed no emotion as he waited.“Reve,” he murmured. “Any sign of her yet?”[Scanning… Target detected: Katarina Whittaker. Exiting campus grounds.]Thenma’s lips twitched into a smirk as his gaze landed on the familiar figure stepping out of the gate. Katarina walked arm-in-arm with a group of friends, her laughter blending seamlessly with theirs. She looked carefree, happy, just another ordinary girl among the crowd.But Thenma knew better.“There she is,” he muttered. His voice was low, almost a growl, as he observed her.Moments later, a tall, broad-shouldered guy approached her, his brunette hair catching the sunlight. He reached out, grabbing Katarina’s arm gently at first. The gesture seemed harmless, but Thenma didn’t miss the flicker of uneas
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[ARC QUEST: Julian Corbin] To Win The Truthful One's Trust
The atmosphere in the VVIP room was suffocating, the tension thick enough to strangle. Thenma stood motionless, swallowing hard as the reality of his situation set in. Every fiber of his being screamed for him to leave, but he remained rooted, staring at Katarina.His system flashed a bright red warning across his vision:[Disguise attempt failed—do you want to give up?]Thenma’s jaw clenched as another prompt appeared.[Options: 1. Give up and save yourself. 2. Save the detective’s daughter with high risk.]He let out a shaky breath, his gaze flicking to Katarina. Her eyes met his, wide and glimmering with a silent plea. Thenma’s chest tightened. She reminded him of someone. Someone he’d sworn never to think of again.“Whatever,” he muttered, his voice cutting through the heavy silence like a blade. “I’m here to take her anyway.”The man who had been hovering close sneered. “Excuse me?”Thenma tilted his head, his piercing blue eyes locking onto Katarina as he pointed at her. “I’m he
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[ARC QUEST: Julian Corbin] Using Her
The car rolled to a stop in front of a modest two-story house. Katarina sat silently next to Thenma, her hands fiddling with the strap of her bag. Thenma turned off the engine and unlocked the doors, leaning back against his seat. Katarina hesitated, gripping the door handle, but instead of stepping out, she closed the door and turned back.“I forgot to say... thank you for saving me,” Katarina said, her voice soft, carrying a mix of sincerity and awkwardness.Thenma shrugged nonchalantly, barely sparing her a glance. “Don’t mention it. That’s my part to help my partner.”Katarina blinked in confusion while Thenma straightened his words. “My partner in the mission.”“I want to know,” Katarina began cautiously, “what your real goal is. You seem eager to have my father on your side. But you must know, he doesn’t stand on the wrong side of things. That’s why he refused to help your case.”Thenma let out a bitter scoff, his lips curling into a wry smile. “Your father said that?”Katarina
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[ARC QUEST: Julian Corbin] Unnoticed Danger
Simon groaned as his eyes fluttered open, the dimly lit room coming into focus. He realized he was tied to a chair, his wrists bound tightly. Panic surged through him as he instinctively struggled against the restraints, but his efforts were futile. Terrified, Simon froze when he heard the sound of slow, deliberate footsteps. Thenma appeared from the shadows, his presence ominous and commanding. “Glad you woke up quickly,” Thenma said, his voice calm but chilling. Simon swallowed hard, trying to mask his fear with a facade of bravado. “What’s your problem with me? What do you want?” he demanded, though his voice wavered. Thenma’s expression darkened, his patience thin. “I’m sure you haven’t forgotten me yet. I’m here to make sure you can’t threaten Katarina anymore.” Simon’s eyes darted nervously. “What…? I have nothing to do with her anymore!” he insisted, his voice rising in a mix of fear and defiance. Thenma’s lips curled into a mocking smile. “Are you sure? Because she told m
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[ARC QUEST: Julian Corbin] This Is The Loser's Revenge
The cold, briny air stung Katarina’s senses as she slowly regained consciousness. A searing pain pulsed through her forehead, her vision blurred momentarily, but fragments of memory flashed in her mind—being dragged out of her house, the view of her helpless father—tied on the floor.“Dad…” she whispered hoarsely, her voice trembling with worry and fear. Her head turned frantically, taking in her surroundings. The damp, grimy floor beneath her was covered in salt stains and dirt, and the sharp odor of fish filled the air. Her heart sank as realization struck—she was in a harbor.She struggled against the coarse ropes binding her wrists, but they held firm. The sound of slow, deliberate footsteps echoed through the warehouse. A chill ran down her spine as the figure emerged from the shadows, each step exuding menace.“Ah, you’re awake,” Julian Corbin drawled, his voice as smooth as silk yet dripping with malice. He stepped into the dim light. “How’s your feeling, starlight? Can you hea
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[ARC QUEST: Julian Corbin] Burn Them All
Julian, sitting on the ground with sweat trailing down his temple, turned to glance at the growing blaze. The fire clawed hungrily at the dry wood, embers flying into the cold night air. He let out a bitter laugh, more out of disbelief than amusement.“What the fuck…” he spat, his voice sharp. “You want to burn us down here?"Thenma didn’t respond. He stood rooted in place, eyes fixated on the flames as though they held answers he had been seeking for years. There was something unnerving about the calmness in his demeanor—a silence so profound it made Julian’s skin crawl.Julian rose to his knees, his instincts screaming at him to fight back or flee, but before he could fully stand, Thenma’s boot connected with his chest, sending him sprawling back to the ground. The impact forced the air from his lungs, and he groaned in pain.Towering over him like an executioner, Thenma tilted his head, his dark eyes cold and hollow. Julian tried to meet his gaze but found it unbearable.“Shit,” Ju
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[ARC QUEST: Julian Corbin] The Quest Completed
The warehouse was an inferno, the air thick with smoke and heat as the fire consumed everything in its path. Thenma's body trembled, his blood pooling on the floor beneath him. His vision blurred as his consciousness wavered, the knife embedded in his shoulder burning like molten steel.[WARNING: Life-threatening injury detected. Immediate action required.][Purchase defensive weapon (20 points)?][Activate self-healing mode (10 points)?]But Thenma's fading consciousness made it impossible to focus. His trembling gaze looking over the options as the panel glitched, the words distorting and disappearing before he could make a choice.No, not now... I can't lose here...Suddenly, a loud crack echoed through the warehouse. Julian staggered, clutching his head as a wooden stick struck him from behind. His eyes widened in pain and confusion, his grip on the knife loosening."What the—" Julian hissed, stumbling backward.Thenma blinked through the haze of pain, his gaze locking onto Katari
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A Glimpse of Victory
Thenma’s eyes fluttered open, his head heavy as if weighed down by a thousand thoughts. Bright, sterile lights illuminated the room, and the distant hum of machinery filled the silence. The faint beeping of a heart monitor confirmed he was in a hospital.He tried to sit up, but his body protested. Pain radiated from his shoulder and torso, forcing him to settle back against the pillow. His mind raced as he struggled to piece together the events that led him here.Then it hit him—the warehouse, the fire, Julian.The memory of their brutal fight resurfaced, and a wave of satisfaction washed over him. He recalled Julian’s screams, the look of desperation on his face as Thenma delivered the final blow. For the first time in a long while, Thenma felt victorious.One of them. One of the bastards who ruined Adeline’s life had fallen.A lump formed in his throat. The victory wasn’t just for him—it was for her. For Adeline, his sister, who had endured more than anyone should. He clenched his f
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