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The Investigation
Author: Anggin Kenari
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" Lupine ! " Max ran after her , and worry if he lost her in the crowd .

Fortunately, lines of people led them coincidentally met at one point .

" What is up ? "

Max controlled his breath before,

" You managed the writing composition for kids ? "

" Yeah .." Body and Earth " ...how is it going? "

" You mean sponsor ? Ashby Foundation of course "

" It's not kinda group discussion of kids ..no "

" The winners will be invited to be shown up on a tv show "

" Great ! I will tell my brother.."

" It isn't permit able...for us to involve our family in this competition,Max "

" Oh alright,l forgot. We are insiders and administrator"

"Yep ..we are organizers of the Writing Contest..the reward is quite desirable .. scholarship till college "

" Caricature competition...with theme ..."

" The Rich and The Poor "

Max chuckled.

" If l can take part. ...."

" Me too ! But rule is rule ..

" What if we...cheat ...using someone ' s name "

"Ashby .mm...what do you think he would do if he knows h
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