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Chapter 25: Fingers Crossed
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At last, they've arrived at the closest village. Two men left the carriage, and is followed by Geo, who ran outside; filled with excitement.

"Zaly, go." Bane leaned against the wall, as he noticed Zaly, who was not leaving the carriage. "Sure, but........" Zaly stopped, while he looked at Bane's wide body.

Bane leaned closer, asking for what's the problem. "Since we've gone for treasure hunting, everything goes downhill. Does father even know what he's doing? He made my life hell, for these couple of days!" He continued, and looked at Bane's eyes with anger.

"Understand your father! He's a better man than you are! Don't disrespect your father like that! He had done anything to make you happy!" Bane got closer to Zaly, as he tightened his fist.

"Well, whatever, I'll be going now." He turned around with his book, and walked down the stairs. But, before he could left, he said his last sentences to Bane.

But before he could leave, he quickly uttered his final words to Bane. "Promise me, do
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