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Chapter 41Jay POVAriel looked different. She had cut her hair and her eyes became sharper. I can sense it. She has lost weight.she looked drained and there's a scar on her neck. I won't have noticed if she didn't cut her hair. She moved closer to me as tears filled her eyes.she almost fell down but caught on my bed for support. "You are awake,I thought…..I thought" she broke into sobs and shakily touched my face."I thought I lost you" she muttered and grip my hands tight. She was crying and wailing loudly but I just layed down motionlessly I felt useless Why wake up?It doesn't make any difference anyways. "Gosh I thought I really lost you,you almost died that day,I was devastated, I was…" she broke into sobs and her tears fell on my hand. I tried to touch her but my arms weren't moving,I really wanted to touch her to feel her but I couldn't. "Why….? Why... aren't you saying anything?" She hiccupped and stared at me "Ariel" I whispered"What did you say? I
Criminal mind Recovery
Chapter 42Jay POV"I'm sorry Jay, I have to go,I will be back" Ariel pecked me on the cheek and left in haste.I was alone again,I sighed and stared at the ceiling.I don't know how long I will be like this.it tiring and lonely. Why did I wake up when it won't make any difference? "Jay love,how was your night?" Mom whom I don't even know when she came in said. I turned my gaze to her and she looked better than yesterday. She looked less hagard and the circles under her eyes was disappearing. My accident must have bothered her a lot. "I made your favorite but I was told you have already eaten. Your team brought food for you,you know I wanted to ask,is she just your team leader or she's more than that? When you first got into an accident she rushed to the hospital crying, she cried for two days straight and refused to eat" Mom paused and placed the flask she brought with her on the table. "I was surprise, even I your mother looked more relaxed than her.she was
Criminal mind Back to work
Chapter 43Jay POV I'm finally going home today. Have been in the hospital for more than 6 months and I can go home now. "Jay love pass me the flask"Mom was packing some of the things she brought to the hospital. I passed the flask to her and she put it in her bag."Done,let's go"She turned and walked to the door while I went after her. It took time and exercise to walk again We went to the receptionist for final discharge and I was free to go. Mom called for a taxi and we both got in and left for home. "What do you think?"Mom stood in front of me smiling awkwardly while I looked around"It's perfect" I complimented and she giggled.She was showing how she decorated the house. I must say she put in a lot of work "Did you have your housewarming party?" "Housewarming ? When my son is at the hospital? What sort of mother does that?" She shook her hand and opened the door of my room. I peeped in and it looked clean and tidy."You cleaned my room?""Yes I
Criminal mind Bank murder case
Chapter 44Jay POV "Have been in this team for about 2 months now after my training, Team leader herself took me in since I have no one." Betty continued blabbering but I wasn't listening. I was shocked and surprised Ariel took her in,I remembered she didn't like Betty much. "Jay,are you listening to me?" Betty bent her head to my eye level"Yes I can hear you,so how do you feel as a cop?""It's amazing,we cracked two cases after I came here and believe me it was thrilling.it felt good,no wonder detectives love their job,I also love this job" Betty grinned as she explained. "I was worried about you for no reason. It's good you love this job,well I have to know more about that so if you would excuse me" I pointed to the case file and Betty nodded in understanding.She went back to her desk while I continued with the file. "Claire, can I go to the scene? I need to see the cash""I'm afraid no,the team leader ordered not to allow you to go near the scene" Clair was typing on
Criminal mind The suspect
Chapter 45Jay POV "Did you find anything?""Nope we still have to wait for the result"Drake spoke from the other end of the phone. "Ok,I see" I hung up"Did they get it?""Nope""But are you sure the culprit left his or her print?""I'm sure" I replied while grinningClaire sighed"Whatever you say,if it doesn't work then we use another method""But why do I have a feeling it will work?" Betty said, staring at me and Claire."Let's wait and see" Claire rolled her eyesBut I'm sure from my analysis there's no way the culprit cleaned his prints on the money.Everything was done in a haste so there's no way he won't have left his prints behind. I might just wait for the result because I have no idea who it might be "Jay,heard you got something" Ariel came into the invigilating room."Yes I did but let's wait for the result" "That was quite fast,I feel like sending you home but I can't you are just so useful" "I know right" I winked at her and she blushed"Hmmm" Claire clear
Criminal mind The Cosmetic store
Chapter 46Jay POV"What did you think.you were doing? He's clearly the murder"Derek yelled but I ignored him. "You can't always be right,know this and….." Derek's voice faded off as I was deep in thought. 'If it is not Felix then it is who?I should interrogate all his employees and more importantly Felix himself,he should know something,I was thinking because the culprit was in haste he won't be able to cover his tracks but he did. He must be a professional but there must be a detail or loophole he wasn't able to erase if…..'"Jay!" I was jolt awake from my thoughts"Are you even listening to me"Derek shouted and I frownedWhat is wrong with him, he has been behaving out of character since I woke up from coma. I saw Felix opposite the building in front of the station,he was on the phone. I realized him.we can't keep him here anyways. Since I need to talk to him,I stood up "Where did you think you are going?" Derek tried to stop me. "Seems like I have been too easy on
Criminal mind Cordelia's
Chapter 47 Jay POV"Here,this is her" Felix passed me a fileName: Cordelia SwiftAge: 28Address : 03 Aviles streetsWeight :53kgHeight: 162.36cmOccupation everything necessary was includedI scanned through the document and handed it back to Felix."Thanks man,I appreciate""Please make sure to find the culprit" Felix pleaded"I thought you don't like your uncle" "I don't like him but at least thanks to him,I'm not starving moreover I don't want my uncle to be murdered that way and the culprit go scot free""Ok I promise to find whoever it is""Thanks officer Jay""Noo I should be thanking you"we came out of the CEO's office,that was the office of the late Mr. "Who will become the next CEO?" I asked and Felix grinned."I of course,I'm his only relative so what were you expecting""Goodluck, I will let you know if I need your help again""Ok,byeeee make sure to keep your promise" Felix escorted me to where to get taxiWe bid goodbye and I left in a taxi. I got home
Criminal mind That case
Chapter 48Jay POV 'Maybe I saw wrong,she can't be sneering or did she have a habit of sneering?' I shaked my head to clear the thought of Patricia. I just can't seem to forget the sneer she gave me.I can't shake off the feeling.I felt it meant something. 'Gosh Jay you are thinking too much' I groaned and dragged myself to the station. "You are back? Any clue?" Betty jumped in front of me as soon as I got in."I got nothing,but I need you to help me""What is it?""I need to check someone for me""Who?""Her name is Patricia, I don't get her surname""What about her pictures?""Nothing, I have nothing about her""That will be hard but it not impossible""Then let's get to work" I urged her and we both got to my desk and started working. "Here,check this out" I stared at the screen,and shake my head no"Not her,check again""There are so many Patricia's in America , you know," Betty complained, pouting. "I know but please check thoroughly""Ok" She muttered
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Chapter 50Jay POV "I think we might have got them this time," Ariel said, glancing at me but she quickly shifted her gaze to the road ahead of her. I frowned and can't help but feel bad about this"Are you sure?""Don't worry,my agent can't be mistaken"Ariel assured me,turns out she hired a private detective to investigate the Caribbeans.Now he called Ariel to tell her he found them and sent address to her but I was doubting it if it that easy I should have found the Caribbeans. I don't think they can found unless they want to be found but Ariel wasn't hearing any of this she believed her agent so I just decided to shut up until we get there. At least I won't be worried about Ariel since I came with her. "You aren't saying anything" Ariel pulled me out of my thought. "Let's just go and check" Ariel nodded and focused on the road,she stepped on the gas and speed up,she must be eager to know who and what the Carribeans are. We got to an abandoned factory"Is it here?"
- Criminal mind
Patricia
Chapter 49Jay POV "Were you trying to solve the case all by yourself?" I asked Ariel and she nodded."I can't risk losing you again,it's too dangerous," she replied."But it is not dangerous for you?" I can't help but be bluffed. She doesn't reply and really cares about herself, always worrying about me. "It less dangerous for me""What made you say that?""Because,you know nobody will have the heart to kill this pretty lady" she blinked her eyes and pouted.I can't help but laugh. She's just soo…. "Come on Ariel I can help just….""Nope I can't risk it" she disagreed "But what about you? What if something happens to you?""Nothing will happen to me moreover I'm investigating in secret""Exactly I will also help in secret"Ariel stared at me and sigh "You can't…..""Yes I can" I interrupt before she could refuse"I can't say no can I?""No you can't" "Ok,but in secret none of the teammate should know""Be rest assured, this is between you and I" she nodded and pa
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That case
Chapter 48Jay POV 'Maybe I saw wrong,she can't be sneering or did she have a habit of sneering?' I shaked my head to clear the thought of Patricia. I just can't seem to forget the sneer she gave me.I can't shake off the feeling.I felt it meant something. 'Gosh Jay you are thinking too much' I groaned and dragged myself to the station. "You are back? Any clue?" Betty jumped in front of me as soon as I got in."I got nothing,but I need you to help me""What is it?""I need to check someone for me""Who?""Her name is Patricia, I don't get her surname""What about her pictures?""Nothing, I have nothing about her""That will be hard but it not impossible""Then let's get to work" I urged her and we both got to my desk and started working. "Here,check this out" I stared at the screen,and shake my head no"Not her,check again""There are so many Patricia's in America , you know," Betty complained, pouting. "I know but please check thoroughly""Ok" She muttered
- Criminal mind
Cordelia's
Chapter 47 Jay POV"Here,this is her" Felix passed me a fileName: Cordelia SwiftAge: 28Address : 03 Aviles streetsWeight :53kgHeight: 162.36cmOccupation everything necessary was includedI scanned through the document and handed it back to Felix."Thanks man,I appreciate""Please make sure to find the culprit" Felix pleaded"I thought you don't like your uncle" "I don't like him but at least thanks to him,I'm not starving moreover I don't want my uncle to be murdered that way and the culprit go scot free""Ok I promise to find whoever it is""Thanks officer Jay""Noo I should be thanking you"we came out of the CEO's office,that was the office of the late Mr. "Who will become the next CEO?" I asked and Felix grinned."I of course,I'm his only relative so what were you expecting""Goodluck, I will let you know if I need your help again""Ok,byeeee make sure to keep your promise" Felix escorted me to where to get taxiWe bid goodbye and I left in a taxi. I got home
- Criminal mind
The Cosmetic store
Chapter 46Jay POV"What did you think.you were doing? He's clearly the murder"Derek yelled but I ignored him. "You can't always be right,know this and….." Derek's voice faded off as I was deep in thought. 'If it is not Felix then it is who?I should interrogate all his employees and more importantly Felix himself,he should know something,I was thinking because the culprit was in haste he won't be able to cover his tracks but he did. He must be a professional but there must be a detail or loophole he wasn't able to erase if…..'"Jay!" I was jolt awake from my thoughts"Are you even listening to me"Derek shouted and I frownedWhat is wrong with him, he has been behaving out of character since I woke up from coma. I saw Felix opposite the building in front of the station,he was on the phone. I realized him.we can't keep him here anyways. Since I need to talk to him,I stood up "Where did you think you are going?" Derek tried to stop me. "Seems like I have been too easy on
- Criminal mind
The suspect
Chapter 45Jay POV "Did you find anything?""Nope we still have to wait for the result"Drake spoke from the other end of the phone. "Ok,I see" I hung up"Did they get it?""Nope""But are you sure the culprit left his or her print?""I'm sure" I replied while grinningClaire sighed"Whatever you say,if it doesn't work then we use another method""But why do I have a feeling it will work?" Betty said, staring at me and Claire."Let's wait and see" Claire rolled her eyesBut I'm sure from my analysis there's no way the culprit cleaned his prints on the money.Everything was done in a haste so there's no way he won't have left his prints behind. I might just wait for the result because I have no idea who it might be "Jay,heard you got something" Ariel came into the invigilating room."Yes I did but let's wait for the result" "That was quite fast,I feel like sending you home but I can't you are just so useful" "I know right" I winked at her and she blushed"Hmmm" Claire clear
- Criminal mind
Bank murder case
Chapter 44Jay POV "Have been in this team for about 2 months now after my training, Team leader herself took me in since I have no one." Betty continued blabbering but I wasn't listening. I was shocked and surprised Ariel took her in,I remembered she didn't like Betty much. "Jay,are you listening to me?" Betty bent her head to my eye level"Yes I can hear you,so how do you feel as a cop?""It's amazing,we cracked two cases after I came here and believe me it was thrilling.it felt good,no wonder detectives love their job,I also love this job" Betty grinned as she explained. "I was worried about you for no reason. It's good you love this job,well I have to know more about that so if you would excuse me" I pointed to the case file and Betty nodded in understanding.She went back to her desk while I continued with the file. "Claire, can I go to the scene? I need to see the cash""I'm afraid no,the team leader ordered not to allow you to go near the scene" Clair was typing on
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Back to work
Chapter 43Jay POV I'm finally going home today. Have been in the hospital for more than 6 months and I can go home now. "Jay love pass me the flask"Mom was packing some of the things she brought to the hospital. I passed the flask to her and she put it in her bag."Done,let's go"She turned and walked to the door while I went after her. It took time and exercise to walk again We went to the receptionist for final discharge and I was free to go. Mom called for a taxi and we both got in and left for home. "What do you think?"Mom stood in front of me smiling awkwardly while I looked around"It's perfect" I complimented and she giggled.She was showing how she decorated the house. I must say she put in a lot of work "Did you have your housewarming party?" "Housewarming ? When my son is at the hospital? What sort of mother does that?" She shook her hand and opened the door of my room. I peeped in and it looked clean and tidy."You cleaned my room?""Yes I
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Recovery
Chapter 42Jay POV"I'm sorry Jay, I have to go,I will be back" Ariel pecked me on the cheek and left in haste.I was alone again,I sighed and stared at the ceiling.I don't know how long I will be like this.it tiring and lonely. Why did I wake up when it won't make any difference? "Jay love,how was your night?" Mom whom I don't even know when she came in said. I turned my gaze to her and she looked better than yesterday. She looked less hagard and the circles under her eyes was disappearing. My accident must have bothered her a lot. "I made your favorite but I was told you have already eaten. Your team brought food for you,you know I wanted to ask,is she just your team leader or she's more than that? When you first got into an accident she rushed to the hospital crying, she cried for two days straight and refused to eat" Mom paused and placed the flask she brought with her on the table. "I was surprise, even I your mother looked more relaxed than her.she was
