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Criminal mind The victims
Chapter 13Jay POV I groaned and held my head,I was feeling headache I hissed and slowly opened my eyes. I blinked my eyes and try to see where I was.'White wall,white ceiling,curtain and beds, I must be at the hospital' I thought. I raised up with difficulty and gritted my teeth to endure the pain."Why are you up?" Ariel stood by the door staring at me she looked annoyed."I'm fine just a lil beating won't…." "Lil beating,you were kicked till you fainted and you call it little.you must not value your body,you have to be in good health to solve cases,if you fell ill and die,our team will move on and we will still solve cases" she was trying hard to suppress her anger. "I know,I have to be well but I need to do…..""Who asked you to approach Azchem patient? Jay you might die if you aren't careful!" She yelled and sniffle,I don't see that coming I was shocked Ariel was crying.the ice Queen was crying"Are you crying?""It all your fault" she came beside me a
Criminal mind Miss Carmen
Chapter 15Jay POV "Any relatives of his? Or any friend of his?" I asked Drake. "The only relative he has was his sister and she lives alone,she works daily to feed herself and that was why she took him to the nursing home as to have time to make money and take care of him" Drake explained "then it must be her" I made a wild guess."What about her?" Drake looked at me confused. "She must be the one that was raped,remember how he reacted even though he has Alchezimer,it must be someone close to him and he only has one relative which is her so she must be the one and if am right she's 60 which means 40 then" I elaborated and Drake nodded in understanding."So we should find her right?""Yes we should" "Hmm her Address is… give me a moment" I watched as his hands danced on the keyboard,he's really fast.but not so fast I can tell every key he taps.He clicked enter,and all her information popped up.Name :Miss Carmen Drew Age : 60 years oldAddress : 16 FamigoRel
Criminal mind The truth about the matter
Chapter 16Jay POV"Vanessa was a cheerful, she quite energic for her age,she's always giggling she's the most happiest thing that happened to me, Steve himself loved her,even though I was a single mother I was happy,she was my joy"Miss Carmen had calmed down,she was cleaning her tears with tissue."If she is still alive now,she would be 38,she probably will be married and I could have had grandchildren, Steve won't have been this sick" she blew her nose and continued."That day my baby came home crying, in sweat,with smell of sex,she was bleeding from her private part.I had to take her to the hospital down the street.when Steve came back home that day.the first time he asked was who did it. Vanessa told him and he lost his reasoning. That day I thought my daughter was lying,Adams is a good man he's an angel" she broke into sob again,I didn't interrupt,I waited for her to let out the pain and anger."Steve took a machete planning to kill him that night,I followed him to stop him to t
Criminal mind Second victim
Chapter 17Jay POVMom quarreled with me when I got home last night, she nagged and nagged,explaining how important it is for me to get well.I tried as much as possible to explain to her that I am well but she wasn't hearing any of it.She locked the main door last night and kept the key but I jumped out of my window this morning and came to the station.I've got a lot to do anyways.It is time to find the person to uncover all the mystery.The last time I was checking the statement I saw the one of the neighborhood aunty she made a statement for everyone of the victims.Her statement was simple and clear,she did not support them nor did she accuse them she only said(Whatever they did wrong, no one deserved to be killed in that brutal way)I asked Drake to check on her and she lives in the neighborhood even though she has become very old now she must know something but I don't know if she can remember.Thank God she doesn't have Alc like Mr Steve. I can't afford to be beaten up again
Criminal mind Secret Mission
Chapter 18Jay POV"Mama Coco,just tell him,how will they catch the culprit if you hide her story?" Betty was helping me convince her."Her story shouldn't be heard,I don't want the culprit to be caught. He helped clear a lot of mess." Mama coco closed her eyesBetty pleaded and pleaded but she wasn't gonna tell."Mama coco,we need to find the culprit. The victim from the last 3 weeks needs justice. If the culprit isn't found, how will give her justice?" I use the last card I had.She slowly opened her eyes"Right Diana is innocent,she shouldn't be killed that way and the only way to make her rest in peace is to catch her culprit" I nodded and she looked down and fixed her eyes on the flowers planted beside the house."Gwen i must say is the most disgusting human being I have ever seen,she pretend to be mother Theressa in the day and a whore in the night""She helped women with house and feeding but pleasured herself with their husband behind their back. They thought she was doing the
Criminal mind The Caribbeans
Chapter 19Jay POVI yawned and stretched. we finally arrived in New York."Drake, Drake" I nudged him and he opened his eyes and closed it.I slapped him across his face and he woke up startled."We've arrived " Drake looked around and nodded,we took our bags and prepared to leave."Don't forget to come over to my café" the old woman remained"I definitely will," Drake vowed while I shaked my head.We came down off the train and started looking for the officers that were supposed to welcome us."Why are you ignoring me?" Drake askedI kept shut and continued looking."Jay""Jay am talking to you" I still ignored him."Because you cracked a few cases you must feel on top of the world" he scoffs,I don't know Drake is this stupid."You still don't get it,do you? You let us out and we might…." Before I could complete what I was trying to say.I heard a loud horn and screams from the crowd then aloud scream and just like that someone was gone."Did...did...you see...that?" Drake was sweat
Criminal mind Preparation
Chapter 20Jay POV"Drake let go" "No""Drake I need to see that man's condition" I almost pushed it away.He reluctantly let go of my arm and I crawled to the man that was shot.I felt his pulse,he's still alive, that was a relief.I tore his shirt and covered the bullet wound.It needs to be removed but we can't right now.I can hear children crying and women wailing,the men were trying to be strong though."Careful Jay" Drake yelled and I rolled on the floor away from the man who got shot.The bullet hit where I was earlier and I breathed in relief."I'm with the police everyone, backup will come in 10 minutes just hold on" I showed my ID and took out my phone."Jane,we need backup,the address is….""Sweet pastries right? we are on the way" she answered before I could continue."5 minutes,just give me 5 minutes," she added."Ok,we are waiting" I hung up and looked in the direction where the shots were coming from.It's a tall building opposite the pastries shop but I can't see or t
Criminal mind Gambling
Chapter 21Jay POV"Jay""Drake you got this" Jane encouraged us,I smiled. I know she's trying to make us feel less nervous. I'm not that nervous though,I have been in gambling den though as a gangster not this way. Drake was already sweating,he looked like someone I don't know.His mask was that of a man in "Stop sweating,your mask might fall off" Jane chuckled."Really? Gosh" he started blowing himself with his hand."I was joking" Jane let out a laugh and I also giggled."You must be having fun teasing me" Drake hissed and looked out of the window.The car became silent,only the music from the radio and Jane humming along."We are here" Jane announced and parked in front of the snooker court."Are you cameras in place?" She asked and I touched the camera on my button."In position" Drake nodded"The Bluetooth?"I touched my ear and the small ear bud was there."Ready? Here" she lifted a big bag and threw it at me.I caught it and opened it.Drake snuck in cold breath"Tha
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Final chapters of book 1
Chapter 50Jay POV "I think we might have got them this time," Ariel said, glancing at me but she quickly shifted her gaze to the road ahead of her. I frowned and can't help but feel bad about this"Are you sure?""Don't worry,my agent can't be mistaken"Ariel assured me,turns out she hired a private detective to investigate the Caribbeans.Now he called Ariel to tell her he found them and sent address to her but I was doubting it if it that easy I should have found the Caribbeans. I don't think they can found unless they want to be found but Ariel wasn't hearing any of this she believed her agent so I just decided to shut up until we get there. At least I won't be worried about Ariel since I came with her. "You aren't saying anything" Ariel pulled me out of my thought. "Let's just go and check" Ariel nodded and focused on the road,she stepped on the gas and speed up,she must be eager to know who and what the Carribeans are. We got to an abandoned factory"Is it here?"
- Criminal mind
Patricia
Chapter 49Jay POV "Were you trying to solve the case all by yourself?" I asked Ariel and she nodded."I can't risk losing you again,it's too dangerous," she replied."But it is not dangerous for you?" I can't help but be bluffed. She doesn't reply and really cares about herself, always worrying about me. "It less dangerous for me""What made you say that?""Because,you know nobody will have the heart to kill this pretty lady" she blinked her eyes and pouted.I can't help but laugh. She's just soo…. "Come on Ariel I can help just….""Nope I can't risk it" she disagreed "But what about you? What if something happens to you?""Nothing will happen to me moreover I'm investigating in secret""Exactly I will also help in secret"Ariel stared at me and sigh "You can't…..""Yes I can" I interrupt before she could refuse"I can't say no can I?""No you can't" "Ok,but in secret none of the teammate should know""Be rest assured, this is between you and I" she nodded and pa
- Criminal mind
That case
Chapter 48Jay POV 'Maybe I saw wrong,she can't be sneering or did she have a habit of sneering?' I shaked my head to clear the thought of Patricia. I just can't seem to forget the sneer she gave me.I can't shake off the feeling.I felt it meant something. 'Gosh Jay you are thinking too much' I groaned and dragged myself to the station. "You are back? Any clue?" Betty jumped in front of me as soon as I got in."I got nothing,but I need you to help me""What is it?""I need to check someone for me""Who?""Her name is Patricia, I don't get her surname""What about her pictures?""Nothing, I have nothing about her""That will be hard but it not impossible""Then let's get to work" I urged her and we both got to my desk and started working. "Here,check this out" I stared at the screen,and shake my head no"Not her,check again""There are so many Patricia's in America , you know," Betty complained, pouting. "I know but please check thoroughly""Ok" She muttered
- Criminal mind
Cordelia's
Chapter 47 Jay POV"Here,this is her" Felix passed me a fileName: Cordelia SwiftAge: 28Address : 03 Aviles streetsWeight :53kgHeight: 162.36cmOccupation everything necessary was includedI scanned through the document and handed it back to Felix."Thanks man,I appreciate""Please make sure to find the culprit" Felix pleaded"I thought you don't like your uncle" "I don't like him but at least thanks to him,I'm not starving moreover I don't want my uncle to be murdered that way and the culprit go scot free""Ok I promise to find whoever it is""Thanks officer Jay""Noo I should be thanking you"we came out of the CEO's office,that was the office of the late Mr. "Who will become the next CEO?" I asked and Felix grinned."I of course,I'm his only relative so what were you expecting""Goodluck, I will let you know if I need your help again""Ok,byeeee make sure to keep your promise" Felix escorted me to where to get taxiWe bid goodbye and I left in a taxi. I got home
- Criminal mind
The Cosmetic store
Chapter 46Jay POV"What did you think.you were doing? He's clearly the murder"Derek yelled but I ignored him. "You can't always be right,know this and….." Derek's voice faded off as I was deep in thought. 'If it is not Felix then it is who?I should interrogate all his employees and more importantly Felix himself,he should know something,I was thinking because the culprit was in haste he won't be able to cover his tracks but he did. He must be a professional but there must be a detail or loophole he wasn't able to erase if…..'"Jay!" I was jolt awake from my thoughts"Are you even listening to me"Derek shouted and I frownedWhat is wrong with him, he has been behaving out of character since I woke up from coma. I saw Felix opposite the building in front of the station,he was on the phone. I realized him.we can't keep him here anyways. Since I need to talk to him,I stood up "Where did you think you are going?" Derek tried to stop me. "Seems like I have been too easy on
- Criminal mind
The suspect
Chapter 45Jay POV "Did you find anything?""Nope we still have to wait for the result"Drake spoke from the other end of the phone. "Ok,I see" I hung up"Did they get it?""Nope""But are you sure the culprit left his or her print?""I'm sure" I replied while grinningClaire sighed"Whatever you say,if it doesn't work then we use another method""But why do I have a feeling it will work?" Betty said, staring at me and Claire."Let's wait and see" Claire rolled her eyesBut I'm sure from my analysis there's no way the culprit cleaned his prints on the money.Everything was done in a haste so there's no way he won't have left his prints behind. I might just wait for the result because I have no idea who it might be "Jay,heard you got something" Ariel came into the invigilating room."Yes I did but let's wait for the result" "That was quite fast,I feel like sending you home but I can't you are just so useful" "I know right" I winked at her and she blushed"Hmmm" Claire clear
- Criminal mind
Bank murder case
Chapter 44Jay POV "Have been in this team for about 2 months now after my training, Team leader herself took me in since I have no one." Betty continued blabbering but I wasn't listening. I was shocked and surprised Ariel took her in,I remembered she didn't like Betty much. "Jay,are you listening to me?" Betty bent her head to my eye level"Yes I can hear you,so how do you feel as a cop?""It's amazing,we cracked two cases after I came here and believe me it was thrilling.it felt good,no wonder detectives love their job,I also love this job" Betty grinned as she explained. "I was worried about you for no reason. It's good you love this job,well I have to know more about that so if you would excuse me" I pointed to the case file and Betty nodded in understanding.She went back to her desk while I continued with the file. "Claire, can I go to the scene? I need to see the cash""I'm afraid no,the team leader ordered not to allow you to go near the scene" Clair was typing on
- Criminal mind
Back to work
Chapter 43Jay POV I'm finally going home today. Have been in the hospital for more than 6 months and I can go home now. "Jay love pass me the flask"Mom was packing some of the things she brought to the hospital. I passed the flask to her and she put it in her bag."Done,let's go"She turned and walked to the door while I went after her. It took time and exercise to walk again We went to the receptionist for final discharge and I was free to go. Mom called for a taxi and we both got in and left for home. "What do you think?"Mom stood in front of me smiling awkwardly while I looked around"It's perfect" I complimented and she giggled.She was showing how she decorated the house. I must say she put in a lot of work "Did you have your housewarming party?" "Housewarming ? When my son is at the hospital? What sort of mother does that?" She shook her hand and opened the door of my room. I peeped in and it looked clean and tidy."You cleaned my room?""Yes I
- Criminal mind
Recovery
Chapter 42Jay POV"I'm sorry Jay, I have to go,I will be back" Ariel pecked me on the cheek and left in haste.I was alone again,I sighed and stared at the ceiling.I don't know how long I will be like this.it tiring and lonely. Why did I wake up when it won't make any difference? "Jay love,how was your night?" Mom whom I don't even know when she came in said. I turned my gaze to her and she looked better than yesterday. She looked less hagard and the circles under her eyes was disappearing. My accident must have bothered her a lot. "I made your favorite but I was told you have already eaten. Your team brought food for you,you know I wanted to ask,is she just your team leader or she's more than that? When you first got into an accident she rushed to the hospital crying, she cried for two days straight and refused to eat" Mom paused and placed the flask she brought with her on the table. "I was surprise, even I your mother looked more relaxed than her.she was
