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Criminal mind The victims
Chapter 13Jay POV I groaned and held my head,I was feeling headache I hissed and slowly opened my eyes. I blinked my eyes and try to see where I was.'White wall,white ceiling,curtain and beds, I must be at the hospital' I thought. I raised up with difficulty and gritted my teeth to endure the pain."Why are you up?" Ariel stood by the door staring at me she looked annoyed."I'm fine just a lil beating won't…." "Lil beating,you were kicked till you fainted and you call it little.you must not value your body,you have to be in good health to solve cases,if you fell ill and die,our team will move on and we will still solve cases" she was trying hard to suppress her anger. "I know,I have to be well but I need to do…..""Who asked you to approach Azchem patient? Jay you might die if you aren't careful!" She yelled and sniffle,I don't see that coming I was shocked Ariel was crying.the ice Queen was crying"Are you crying?""It all your fault" she came beside me a
Criminal mind Miss Carmen
Chapter 15Jay POV "Any relatives of his? Or any friend of his?" I asked Drake. "The only relative he has was his sister and she lives alone,she works daily to feed herself and that was why she took him to the nursing home as to have time to make money and take care of him" Drake explained "then it must be her" I made a wild guess."What about her?" Drake looked at me confused. "She must be the one that was raped,remember how he reacted even though he has Alchezimer,it must be someone close to him and he only has one relative which is her so she must be the one and if am right she's 60 which means 40 then" I elaborated and Drake nodded in understanding."So we should find her right?""Yes we should" "Hmm her Address is… give me a moment" I watched as his hands danced on the keyboard,he's really fast.but not so fast I can tell every key he taps.He clicked enter,and all her information popped up.Name :Miss Carmen Drew Age : 60 years oldAddress : 16 FamigoRel
Criminal mind The truth about the matter
Chapter 16Jay POV"Vanessa was a cheerful, she quite energic for her age,she's always giggling she's the most happiest thing that happened to me, Steve himself loved her,even though I was a single mother I was happy,she was my joy"Miss Carmen had calmed down,she was cleaning her tears with tissue."If she is still alive now,she would be 38,she probably will be married and I could have had grandchildren, Steve won't have been this sick" she blew her nose and continued."That day my baby came home crying, in sweat,with smell of sex,she was bleeding from her private part.I had to take her to the hospital down the street.when Steve came back home that day.the first time he asked was who did it. Vanessa told him and he lost his reasoning. That day I thought my daughter was lying,Adams is a good man he's an angel" she broke into sob again,I didn't interrupt,I waited for her to let out the pain and anger."Steve took a machete planning to kill him that night,I followed him to stop him to t
Criminal mind Second victim
Chapter 17Jay POVMom quarreled with me when I got home last night, she nagged and nagged,explaining how important it is for me to get well.I tried as much as possible to explain to her that I am well but she wasn't hearing any of it.She locked the main door last night and kept the key but I jumped out of my window this morning and came to the station.I've got a lot to do anyways.It is time to find the person to uncover all the mystery.The last time I was checking the statement I saw the one of the neighborhood aunty she made a statement for everyone of the victims.Her statement was simple and clear,she did not support them nor did she accuse them she only said(Whatever they did wrong, no one deserved to be killed in that brutal way)I asked Drake to check on her and she lives in the neighborhood even though she has become very old now she must know something but I don't know if she can remember.Thank God she doesn't have Alc like Mr Steve. I can't afford to be beaten up again
Criminal mind Secret Mission
Chapter 18Jay POV"Mama Coco,just tell him,how will they catch the culprit if you hide her story?" Betty was helping me convince her."Her story shouldn't be heard,I don't want the culprit to be caught. He helped clear a lot of mess." Mama coco closed her eyesBetty pleaded and pleaded but she wasn't gonna tell."Mama coco,we need to find the culprit. The victim from the last 3 weeks needs justice. If the culprit isn't found, how will give her justice?" I use the last card I had.She slowly opened her eyes"Right Diana is innocent,she shouldn't be killed that way and the only way to make her rest in peace is to catch her culprit" I nodded and she looked down and fixed her eyes on the flowers planted beside the house."Gwen i must say is the most disgusting human being I have ever seen,she pretend to be mother Theressa in the day and a whore in the night""She helped women with house and feeding but pleasured herself with their husband behind their back. They thought she was doing the
Criminal mind The Caribbeans
Chapter 19Jay POVI yawned and stretched. we finally arrived in New York."Drake, Drake" I nudged him and he opened his eyes and closed it.I slapped him across his face and he woke up startled."We've arrived " Drake looked around and nodded,we took our bags and prepared to leave."Don't forget to come over to my café" the old woman remained"I definitely will," Drake vowed while I shaked my head.We came down off the train and started looking for the officers that were supposed to welcome us."Why are you ignoring me?" Drake askedI kept shut and continued looking."Jay""Jay am talking to you" I still ignored him."Because you cracked a few cases you must feel on top of the world" he scoffs,I don't know Drake is this stupid."You still don't get it,do you? You let us out and we might…." Before I could complete what I was trying to say.I heard a loud horn and screams from the crowd then aloud scream and just like that someone was gone."Did...did...you see...that?" Drake was sweat
Criminal mind Preparation
Chapter 20Jay POV"Drake let go" "No""Drake I need to see that man's condition" I almost pushed it away.He reluctantly let go of my arm and I crawled to the man that was shot.I felt his pulse,he's still alive, that was a relief.I tore his shirt and covered the bullet wound.It needs to be removed but we can't right now.I can hear children crying and women wailing,the men were trying to be strong though."Careful Jay" Drake yelled and I rolled on the floor away from the man who got shot.The bullet hit where I was earlier and I breathed in relief."I'm with the police everyone, backup will come in 10 minutes just hold on" I showed my ID and took out my phone."Jane,we need backup,the address is….""Sweet pastries right? we are on the way" she answered before I could continue."5 minutes,just give me 5 minutes," she added."Ok,we are waiting" I hung up and looked in the direction where the shots were coming from.It's a tall building opposite the pastries shop but I can't see or t
Criminal mind Gambling
Chapter 21Jay POV"Jay""Drake you got this" Jane encouraged us,I smiled. I know she's trying to make us feel less nervous. I'm not that nervous though,I have been in gambling den though as a gangster not this way. Drake was already sweating,he looked like someone I don't know.His mask was that of a man in "Stop sweating,your mask might fall off" Jane chuckled."Really? Gosh" he started blowing himself with his hand."I was joking" Jane let out a laugh and I also giggled."You must be having fun teasing me" Drake hissed and looked out of the window.The car became silent,only the music from the radio and Jane humming along."We are here" Jane announced and parked in front of the snooker court."Are you cameras in place?" She asked and I touched the camera on my button."In position" Drake nodded"The Bluetooth?"I touched my ear and the small ear bud was there."Ready? Here" she lifted a big bag and threw it at me.I caught it and opened it.Drake snuck in cold breath"Tha