Hello lovely readers, this is your author georgies. This is my first book and I would like you guys to review and comment so that I can know your thoughts. Thank you
*** The States~ New York City***A limousine made its entry into a huge house, and a lady got down from it, looking stern. The guards surrounding the house bowed as she walked towards the door of the house planning to enter the houseThe young lady walked into the house dressed as professionally as ever, with her usual cold face. The maids kept bowing at her and greeting her, but as usual, she ignored them and kept walking steadily, her head up with prideShe is a well-known noble lady, though she has not been in the business world for long, her intelligence has earned her the respect and good name she has now gotten herself"Where are my grandparents?" She asked coldlyBefore the maid she asked could reply, Mr. and Mrs. Banks appeared in the large living room, they had been expecting her for longThe lady removed her shades and settled on one of the couches"Cold water," she said, and one of the maids brought it to herShe took it and gulped it down slowly before returning the glass
Queenster stopped her car and got down, she couldn't drive since her mind is not letting her do so in peace. She kept thinking of what her grandparents just said, her journey back to the country in which she vowed never to step foot in has become a headache for her. She couldn't have refused her grandparents either, they have been so good to her these past 5 years, and this is the first time they are requesting something from her, she couldn't have just refused them. She walked to a bridge and kept staring at the water under the bridge with an expressionless face She recalled all she had been through in Italy, her mother's death, her senior brother's death too, her father leaving her in the hands of a stranger, her only hope, her beloved brother who also abandoned her, and all a whole lot. All these puts together are the bad memories in Italy she wants to forget about but it seems fate has something else in store for her instead of supporting her, it's rather against her. She has
*******Seattle~ At the hospital***Damien and Lawrence came out of the car they brought. Lawrence moved to the driver and asked him to wait for them since they had their luggage in the car, as Damien waited for him to join him to say their final farewell to the Jones family. They walked into the hospital and headed straight to little Noelle's ward. They had gone to their house earlier, but they were informed by the security the couple had come to visit their daughter. They made their way into Noelle's ward when they got to it, Damien pushed the door gently not wanting to wake Noelle up in case she was sleeping. Unfortunately, she was not asleep, she was sitting on her bed playing games and giggling at herself as her parents sat near her bed watching her. Noelle refused to look up when the door screeched open thinking it was one of the nurses who is there to check on her and administer medication for her as usual. She hated to be in the hospital though, but poor her what can she do i
Dennis entered one of the washrooms and began shedding tears, Damien found him and walked up to him"You know she is just a kid right? Besides kids don't know what we go through just to make them feel happy. She pulled that stunt on you guys just for fun, she never meant for it to go this far, you don't have to get worked up with her actions all the time. What you just did get the little girl scared, although she is scared yet, she still thinks about you. She doesn't like you getting mad at all, just see her actions as childish and forgive her" Damien said"I'm not mad at her, I just don't want to make any mistake of losing her for any reason. She is very dear to me, whenever she does such a thing, it gets my heart racing. She is all I have got, that's why I want to make sure she is always fine" Dennis said as more tears kept rolling down his face"I don't know much about parenting but the little time I spent with my mom got me to understand the undying love your parents have for your
"Looking for someone?"She heard Damien say from behind her, she turned around and hugged him"I thought you left already," she said amidst tears"I told you I wouldn't leave without saying a proper farewell to you right, I am a man of my " Damien smiled at herShe dipped her hand in her pocket and stretched a box to him, he took it though he was surprised. He opened it and everybody was eager to know what it is. Damien brought out a diamond bracelet from it, and everyone's eyes widen in shock, wondering how a little girl like her got such an expensive bracelet"Where did you get this from Noelle?" Damien asked when he recovered from the shock"Tell me did you like my farewell gift too?" She asked happily"I do, though there was no need for it but I can't refuse it since it's from you. But tell me where did you get it from?" Damien said"It was a special request I made from my father's brother, Uncle Grey, on my birthday. You are a special person that's why I'm giving it to you as a f
"All passengers travaling to Italy on flight FR 6574 please have your boarding passes and passports ready for boarding. Flight FR 6574 now boarding at gate 16," The announcement came again for the fifth time. Damien gestured to Lawrence to bring their suitcases along as he took the lead."You can't be bossing me around, dude," Lawrence scoffed. He dragged their bags along as they got ready to go on board.The announcements went on and on as Lawrence sluggishly followed Damien.Another announcement came in right after the first one."This is the final boarding call for passengers, Mr. Kevin and Mrs. Queenster Smith,"An announcement came in making Damien halt on his track. Lawrence on the other hand kept on moving, ignorant of what was going on with his friend. He kept on walking till he could not feel Damien's presence behind him anymore. It was then that he turned around to see his friend looking lost and stuck at a particular place.He sighed and walked back to Damien."Are we not
*The Banks Residence**"Do you think we did the right thing? I don't want her hating us for any reason, you know how bitter she can be," Mrs. Banks said with worry visible in her tone."She had to heal one way or the other. We can't keep her from her past forever, and besides her brother needs her as much as we do too," Mr Banks said trying to reason with her.The doorbell rang interrupting their conversation. Mrs Banks sighed and got up to get the door. She returned to the living room with a man behind her."Look who we have here?" Mrs Banks announced, drawing Mr Banks' attention."Oh Williams, you are here. We were not expecting you today. I don't remember calling for you either or did you?" Mr Banks said looking quite surprised as he directed the question to Mrs Banks"No I did not call for him, maybe he has something to tell us. Why don't we just give him a chance to speak first," Mrs Banks said looking at Williams.Williams has been the eyes of this old couple for quite some year
" Gary you can't do this to me! This is becoming too much for me to handle" Pheona pleaded with tears in her eyes. Gary looked at her with an expressionless face. Gary Smith is bent on marrying his mistress, Nora Lynn and there's nothing anyone can do to change his mind not even Pheona, his legally wedded wife. Pheona cried and pleaded with Gary not to go on with the decision he has taken as it will shatter their family. Damien walked towards his parents' room as he heard sobs coming from there. He got there and to his surprise, he saw his father shouting at his mother looking pissed. "I'm marrying Nora whether you like it or not. It's not like I need your approval to do anything"Gary spat. Damien was beyond shocked when he heard his father's confession. He has always known that Nora was up to no good the first time he saw her with his dad. "Dad!!!", Tell me it's a joke" Damien yelled. "We don't need that slut in our house!" Damien went on enraged by his father's decision. Gar
*The Banks Residence**"Do you think we did the right thing? I don't want her hating us for any reason, you know how bitter she can be," Mrs. Banks said with worry visible in her tone."She had to heal one way or the other. We can't keep her from her past forever, and besides her brother needs her as much as we do too," Mr Banks said trying to reason with her.The doorbell rang interrupting their conversation. Mrs Banks sighed and got up to get the door. She returned to the living room with a man behind her."Look who we have here?" Mrs Banks announced, drawing Mr Banks' attention."Oh Williams, you are here. We were not expecting you today. I don't remember calling for you either or did you?" Mr Banks said looking quite surprised as he directed the question to Mrs Banks"No I did not call for him, maybe he has something to tell us. Why don't we just give him a chance to speak first," Mrs Banks said looking at Williams.Williams has been the eyes of this old couple for quite some year
"All passengers travaling to Italy on flight FR 6574 please have your boarding passes and passports ready for boarding. Flight FR 6574 now boarding at gate 16," The announcement came again for the fifth time. Damien gestured to Lawrence to bring their suitcases along as he took the lead."You can't be bossing me around, dude," Lawrence scoffed. He dragged their bags along as they got ready to go on board.The announcements went on and on as Lawrence sluggishly followed Damien.Another announcement came in right after the first one."This is the final boarding call for passengers, Mr. Kevin and Mrs. Queenster Smith,"An announcement came in making Damien halt on his track. Lawrence on the other hand kept on moving, ignorant of what was going on with his friend. He kept on walking till he could not feel Damien's presence behind him anymore. It was then that he turned around to see his friend looking lost and stuck at a particular place.He sighed and walked back to Damien."Are we not
"Looking for someone?"She heard Damien say from behind her, she turned around and hugged him"I thought you left already," she said amidst tears"I told you I wouldn't leave without saying a proper farewell to you right, I am a man of my " Damien smiled at herShe dipped her hand in her pocket and stretched a box to him, he took it though he was surprised. He opened it and everybody was eager to know what it is. Damien brought out a diamond bracelet from it, and everyone's eyes widen in shock, wondering how a little girl like her got such an expensive bracelet"Where did you get this from Noelle?" Damien asked when he recovered from the shock"Tell me did you like my farewell gift too?" She asked happily"I do, though there was no need for it but I can't refuse it since it's from you. But tell me where did you get it from?" Damien said"It was a special request I made from my father's brother, Uncle Grey, on my birthday. You are a special person that's why I'm giving it to you as a f
Dennis entered one of the washrooms and began shedding tears, Damien found him and walked up to him"You know she is just a kid right? Besides kids don't know what we go through just to make them feel happy. She pulled that stunt on you guys just for fun, she never meant for it to go this far, you don't have to get worked up with her actions all the time. What you just did get the little girl scared, although she is scared yet, she still thinks about you. She doesn't like you getting mad at all, just see her actions as childish and forgive her" Damien said"I'm not mad at her, I just don't want to make any mistake of losing her for any reason. She is very dear to me, whenever she does such a thing, it gets my heart racing. She is all I have got, that's why I want to make sure she is always fine" Dennis said as more tears kept rolling down his face"I don't know much about parenting but the little time I spent with my mom got me to understand the undying love your parents have for your
*******Seattle~ At the hospital***Damien and Lawrence came out of the car they brought. Lawrence moved to the driver and asked him to wait for them since they had their luggage in the car, as Damien waited for him to join him to say their final farewell to the Jones family. They walked into the hospital and headed straight to little Noelle's ward. They had gone to their house earlier, but they were informed by the security the couple had come to visit their daughter. They made their way into Noelle's ward when they got to it, Damien pushed the door gently not wanting to wake Noelle up in case she was sleeping. Unfortunately, she was not asleep, she was sitting on her bed playing games and giggling at herself as her parents sat near her bed watching her. Noelle refused to look up when the door screeched open thinking it was one of the nurses who is there to check on her and administer medication for her as usual. She hated to be in the hospital though, but poor her what can she do i
Queenster stopped her car and got down, she couldn't drive since her mind is not letting her do so in peace. She kept thinking of what her grandparents just said, her journey back to the country in which she vowed never to step foot in has become a headache for her. She couldn't have refused her grandparents either, they have been so good to her these past 5 years, and this is the first time they are requesting something from her, she couldn't have just refused them. She walked to a bridge and kept staring at the water under the bridge with an expressionless face She recalled all she had been through in Italy, her mother's death, her senior brother's death too, her father leaving her in the hands of a stranger, her only hope, her beloved brother who also abandoned her, and all a whole lot. All these puts together are the bad memories in Italy she wants to forget about but it seems fate has something else in store for her instead of supporting her, it's rather against her. She has
*** The States~ New York City***A limousine made its entry into a huge house, and a lady got down from it, looking stern. The guards surrounding the house bowed as she walked towards the door of the house planning to enter the houseThe young lady walked into the house dressed as professionally as ever, with her usual cold face. The maids kept bowing at her and greeting her, but as usual, she ignored them and kept walking steadily, her head up with prideShe is a well-known noble lady, though she has not been in the business world for long, her intelligence has earned her the respect and good name she has now gotten herself"Where are my grandparents?" She asked coldlyBefore the maid she asked could reply, Mr. and Mrs. Banks appeared in the large living room, they had been expecting her for longThe lady removed her shades and settled on one of the couches"Cold water," she said, and one of the maids brought it to herShe took it and gulped it down slowly before returning the glass
Noelle kept giggling as she raced up the stairs, her father chasing her. She missed a step and rolled down the stairs"Noelle...." Dennis screamedEverybody turned their attention to the father and daughter little play but was shocked to see little Noelle rolling down the stairs while her father was standing halfway on the stairs on the other side. The stairs were two, one on the left and another on the right. Noelle was fast enough to climb the right stairs which were the closest while Dennis chased her. She was already on the other staircase on the left when Dennis tried catching her on the right staircase. Due to the excitement of running around, she missed a step when she tried to look back at her father."My baby!!!!" Laura screamed in agonyEverybody rushed to the stairs but Damien was faster, he picked Noelle up and headed out immediately. He dropped her in Dennis's car and they all got in boozing off to the hospital. ***At the hospital**Laura couldn't stop crying since Noelle
They all turned to the doorway to look at the owner of the voice. Laura's eyes widen in shock as she saw the person standing there with tears, the look in his eyes was one she had never wished to see, the look of disappointment. "How could you be this wicked and heartless? I would have never believed it if anyone had told me the woman I'm married to was this evil" Dennis said, as tears of disappointment kept running down his face The person who happened to be standing in the doorway was Dennis, Laura's husband. He had forgotten some files in the house and he decided to come and pick them up quickly and leave for work. In a hurry and not to bother the security too much, he packed his car outside the house and came in instead, which is why they didn't notice his presence. He had been standing outside listening to all their conversation as he happen to have heard the part where she had connived with Nora to bring Queenster to the States, he paused and decided to listen to everything. N