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CHAPTER 15: THE FINAL TRANSMISSION
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The silence of space was absolute. The stars stretched endlessly, cold and indifferent, as Kiera and Jace drifted away from Mars at faster-than-light speed. Their ship, The Horizon’s Edge, hummed steadily around them, the only sound breaking the quiet. The Red Planet was gone, reduced to a distant ember in the void, its fate sealed.

Kiera leaned back in her seat, her body sore from the battle, but her mind refused to rest. The weapon was destroyed. The core was gone. Mars was free.

So why did it feel like something was still watching them?

Jace sat at the controls, his fingers tapping against the dashboard, adjusting the ship’s navigation. He glanced at Kiera, his brow furrowed. “You’re thinking too much again.”

Kiera smirked, but it didn’t reach her eyes. “Can’t help it. Doesn’t feel real yet. After everything, after the war, the Guardians, the core… we just fly away? Like it never happened?”

Jace sighed, leaning back. “We won, Kiera. We saved Mars from itself.”

She nodded but couldn’t shake the feeling creeping up her spine. Something was wrong.

Then the ship’s console beeped. A single, sharp chime that sent a ripple of unease through the cockpit.

Jace frowned. “We’re picking up a signal.”

Kiera straightened. “From where?”

Jace’s fingers flew across the control panel, bringing up the transmission details. His face paled slightly. “It’s… coming from Mars.”

Kiera’s heart stopped. “That’s impossible.”

Mars was dead. The core was destroyed. Nothing should have survived.

Yet, the signal was there—steady, pulsing, waiting.

She inhaled sharply. “Put it through.”

Jace hesitated, his jaw tightening. “Kiera, this—”

“Put it through, Jace.”

He exhaled and tapped the console. The cockpit lights flickered for a moment, and then a garbled, static-laced voice filled the ship.

A voice they should never have heard again.

"Ke…ra…Jace… can you hear… me?"

Kiera’s blood ran cold. She knew that voice.

Jace froze, his grip tightening on the controls. “That’s not possible.”

The voice was distorted, layered with static and interference, but it was unmistakable.

Commander Xara.

But Xara was dead. She had died on Mars, during the battle for the core. Kiera had seen it happen.

Kiera’s breath hitched. “This has to be a recording. Some kind of residual data left from the destruction.”

Jace shook his head. “No. The signal is live.”

The cockpit’s atmosphere thickened with dread. Kiera swallowed hard, forcing herself to stay calm. “Boost the signal. See if we can clean it up.”

Jace tapped a few keys, enhancing the transmission. The voice became clearer, though it still carried an eerie distortion.

“…You need to… listen… you didn’t… destroy it.”

Kiera’s stomach dropped. “What?”

“…The core… it wasn’t just… Mars… It was connected… something else… waking…”

A chill crawled up Kiera’s spine. “Xara, if that’s really you, where are you?”

Silence.

Then, a single word came through. A name.

“…Titan…”

Then the transmission cut out.

The cockpit went deathly silent, save for the steady hum of the ship’s systems.

Jace stared at Kiera, his face tight with disbelief. “What the hell just happened?”

Kiera gripped the edge of her seat. Her pulse pounded in her ears.

Titan. Saturn’s largest moon. A cold, inhospitable wasteland. A place where humanity had once tried to establish a colony—before the settlers mysteriously vanished.

If Xara’s transmission was real—if she was alive—then Mars wasn’t the end.

And worse… they had awakened something bigger than they ever imagined.

Kiera exhaled, her grip tightening. “Set course for Titan.”

Jace hesitated. “Kiera, think about this. It could be a trap. We barely survived Mars—what if this is worse?”

Kiera’s gaze hardened. “We don’t have a choice. If Xara’s alive, we need to know how. And if she’s right… then we’re not done fighting.”

Jace clenched his jaw, then nodded. “Setting course.”

As the ship changed trajectory, the void of space stretched before them, vast and silent. The echoes of Mars had not faded.

They had only just begun.

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