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Later, I go back to our camping site with a bunch of mushrooms. I’m not even sure if they were all edible I only pick mushrooms that didn’t seem poisonous. When I arrived the three girls look at me with confusion. My clothes rip apart and blood stain. “What in the world happened to you?” Princess asked. Charlotte’s eyes lit up and said: “Did you go wrestle with the wild beast? No fair! I want to see you get beaten down.” Why in a world would I do that? Gore is not something you should be wishing to see. Lastly, Kisara is being silent. She seems to have worried at first and averted her face away from me seating down on the log. “Glad that you are safe… You wrestle with a beast and you only got mushrooms. For your information non of us eat mushrooms. Those mushrooms would be wasted.” Kisara said in a drained-sounding voice. She took a can of tuna and place it on top of the newly cooked rice. Still popping out the white steam. “Sit down… You’re exhausted, right? Sit down and ha
What’s with that sound? I shifted my head down to the foggy forest nearby. Kisara put down her half-finished bowl of rice and stood up. “Where are you going? It's dangerous there…” “I know you were injured earlier because of them, right? I don’t have any idea what they look like. But this ominous feeling floating in the air is without a doubt a sign of danger.” Kisara said. Flames gathered in her hand and formed her flaming scythe. “Earlier, I fought with a copy of yourself. She can use the same ability as you.” I explained. Giving her information before the battle starts will help. “A copy of myself… Let me guess you're defeated.” “...” I'd put silent for a moment. I feel embarrassed saying that I lost a girl. I don’t want to admit it, especially to her. Kisara does know the answer already and, with a high-stacked attitude, she speaks. “Don’t be embarrassed, it's natural that you can’t defeat me… I’m super strong after all. Just sit down there and finish your dinner. I’ll
A blade of flames unleashed through Red’s dagger going directly to Sieg’s head. Before it made a direct hit, Seig manages to grab Red’s arm and flip him over to the ground. Followed by an energy-covered fist aimed at Red’s back. The happening was too fast even for Kisara to react. Everything was simply unexpected and most of all everyone was caught off guard. The lack of presence when Sieg arrived could only be pulled by someone knowledgeable enough to conceal their energy. The feat was so hard only a few in history could do it. Being hit by Sieg’s fist Red shouted, but not a sound of voice slipped into his mouth. His pupils nearly rolled upwards in shock. Seig looked at Red’s face with familiarity. This boy is the same boy that day… Could it be he the heavenly knight of Terra? He thought and brings his eyes to Princess. Flames dancing in a spiral attack Seig’s. “Spiral flames!!” Kisara chanted and together she charges forward with her artifact in sword form. Delivering a heavy
After escaping from danger, the heroes accidentally reach the city of Senna. Currently, they come to visit a restaurant to stuff their bellies with food. Eating like there is no tomorrow was Charlotte munching every meal in front of her. Kisara was eating a ton but not as lively as Charlotte. Princess meanwhile was eating normally like always does. Prim and elegant as always. “Do you know that man?” Kisara asked Red. Red finished biting the bread on his hand first and took a sip of his juice before answering. “I don’t know him personally, but his the one who killed my one and only friend before… Last night was still a surprise to the four. Kisara whose very confident in her combat skill was defeated so fast. Charlotte failed to kill him. Leaving them no choice but to flee from the battle. Fleeing doesn’t matter to the three girls as long as it's the logical way to survive. But it was an entirely different story to Red. Last night was his chance to have his revenge on the man who
“GUAAAAAAAAAAA!!” Red howled, his body completely covered by flames and his body burned down like coal. His head completely transformed into a demon-like creature. Two curled horns like a ram on his head. There were no eyes only mouths filled with a log-sharp fang. Nico gazes at him like it was to be expected. True, this is something he was expecting to happen. Nico, when he buried his palm into Red, messes up with Red’s inner core or we can say the soul. Awakening the demon kind within Red’s heart. This is all part of his plan. His plan wasn’t evil all he wanted is to see and know the result. The outcome of this battle will lead Nico and his master to a decision. The ground breaks and Red disappeared from his position. “His speed increased drastically…” Even still that was the case. Nico easily blocked the upcoming attack. On his back, left, right, left, left, below, and above. All of the attacks were blocked or dodged. He confirmed that his speed is still far superior to what de
After having some time resting, Red returned to Senna city before sunset. Arriving at the parking lot they place their truck. An unpleasant expression was thrown toward him by Kisara. In contrast to Princess whose having a sense of relief after seeing Red. The explosion everybody heard earlier made the girls worried. Not everyone, because the little blonde girl was dozing off inside the truck. Last night's fight drained Charlotte’s energy and she’s unable to sleep. Now she’s taking her time to catch some sleep. Kisara was supposed to do the same, but forced herself to stay awake just in case they’ll put in danger again. Examine how messy Red’s clothe loots like. Kisara and Princess were sure that he was caught in another battle. Causing Kisara to make a sigh of resignation and her hand put on her head to relieve some aches. “Are you a black cat? Why are pulling so much misfortune?” “I was training and I met an unexpected person. Things ended well so you don’t have to worry about
“The flow of your energy is wrong. There is too much excess coming out of your hand into the dagger. Putting things simply, you’re putting in more energy than you need.” Sister Maria lecture me. But the only thing that I didn’t understand was why I was tied to a log of wood and placed above giant roaring flames. I’m currently at the back of the orphanage mansion, huge open space, and a river stream. This is what I call torture! “Aaaaaaa! Hooootttt!” Now that I recall it, she is Kisara’s master. Of course, she has that sadistic personality too. “Don’t be afraid of flames, embrace the flames.” Is this woman insane? Who in his right mind will hug these giant flames? I feel like a poor little rabbit put into a skewer. Looking at my side, Charlotte seemed to be having fun playing with other kids in the orphanage. The princess is busy cooking and Kisara is looking at me with joyful eyes. “Tame him properly with fear and he will never cheat on you.” Sister Maria said to Kisara. Kis
Four pursuers assaulted us during our shopping trip. The civilians immediately took cover and there are almost none of them on the streets anymore. Glad that was the case. I had my fist in flames and bolted directly to their leader who was standing next to the car, cool as a cucumber. His face was stiff and emotionless. Isn’t he afraid of being attacked? I shoot flames aiming at him but get blocked by the huge boomerang. The man with knuckle brass dashed forward, moving with consecutive side steps. He threw his left and immediately shifted to the right punch. His fist was so heavy. I managed to block his punch at the last moment, costing my left arm. That knuckle brass must be an artifact. When the knuckle brass made a hit, it was glowing golden in color. An artifact that can enhance one's strength. Very fitting for lean muscular men like him. Looking at his body aesthetic, he seems to be very athletic. He must put lots of effort into conditioning his body to its desired shape. I