Let me know how the progress so far is? Criticism and advice is much appreciated.
'Who was that?' {Whoever they were, they could easily crush me.} Neo remembered the feeling he got when the desert trembled like the grip of death itself was over his neck. He shook his head as he got rid of those feelings and looked at the notification before him. 『 Acquire the Sands of Time (Grade AA) (Complete)』 『 Second Fable: Sands of Time (Complete).』 『 Checking the Completion rate.』 Then the calculations started. Selene was completely worn out and was sleeping soundly with her head on his lap. Neo's gaze, leaning back on the sofa, was on the notifications that started appearing before him. 『 Find the Mirage Maze [Complete: Grade A+]』 『 Confront the Sandstorm Sentinel [Complete: Grade A+]』 『 Decode the Oasis of Illusion [Complete: Grade S]』 『 Travel through the Quicksands [Complete: Grade A+]』 『 Endure the Scorching Sun's Trial [Complete: Grade AA]』 『 Decipher the Whispering Dunes [Complete Grade AA]』 『 Navigate the Caverns of Lost Time [Complete: Grade AA+]』 『 Def
『 Aqua Heart 』"I take it back when I said that this skill was awesome."Blaze was annoyed, as recently, [Inspect] was failing to live up to its title of "Max." He then consulted with the sealed knowledge to find out what this 『 Aqua Heart 』 was.{According to a forgotten lore, how is it forgotten if it is written here?}'… '{Aqua Heart was born from the convergence of celestial and terrestrial waters. It is said that when the purest essence of water and the divine energy of the heavens merged, Aqua Heart materialized as a gift, the gift according to the lore, born with the very start of the emergence of celestial and terrestrial, Blah Blah Blah. Seriously, let me just go to the good part.}{Here's something useful. Its ability includes Healing Water, Elemental Synergy, Adaptive Resonance, and Water Manipulation. Oh, I gained something this overpowered, and I didn't know about that.}Blaze focused on using [Water Manipulation] but after waiting for a while, nothing happened.{And her
Blaze looked at the red notification floating before him. He vanished and appeared before the Divine Realm gate, and it had the same requirement.{Didn't know it had something like that.}He went back to Selene and told him about it. She contemplated over it and said, "You need only one more person to access the floor?"He nodded, to which she smiled and said, “I want to be strong enough to protect my loved one.”Her cheeks reddened when she uttered those words, while Blaze's eyes flashed, the rings in them rotating as he asked, "What do you desire, Selene Hawthorne?"Notifications appeared before Selene, but her eyes were on Neo as she said, "To protect my loved one."『 Selene Hawthorne's Desire: Power.』『 -1,000 to all stats. 』{A/N (Not from Luck, Perception, and Willpower)}.『 -30 Chaos Point.』『 Entering Evolution.』Nether Energy started gathering around her, and she was fully covered by it, like a cocoon. Neo stared at this and wondered.'Can I use it on myself?'{Would be pretty
『 Received: Merge.』『 Received: Combine.』『 Received: Blood of Transcendent.』『 Received: Regenerative Genesis.』『KX9C9 have etched.』『 All stats have been promoted.』『 Collector has held his end of the bargain.』The darkness receded and everything cleared up as Selene opened her eyes. Everything about her changed once more.With a flawlessly sculpted face, Selene's cheekbones were high and defined, lending her a regal air. Her skin became smooth and porcelain, glowing with a gentle radiance, akin to moonlight kissing her complexion. Although pale, her skin emanated a warm and inviting aura.Her eyes were truly mesmerizing, shimmering like precious sapphires. A deep shade of blue with red glowing from time to time. It's as if Selene locked her gaze with someone she could see into their very soul, revealing secrets and understanding beyond one’s comprehension.Her hair cascading down in waves. Selene's lustrous locks possess a celestial quality. Touched by the ethereal glow of the star
Philip hadn’t even finished his sentence when everything in the room started trembling, everything was enveloped in a pressure so strong that even taking a breath in there was proving to be difficult, it can squish a person like an ant, but Philip stood there like a rod which wouldn’t bend. He kept his stare on the guy, the senior also stared at him for a while. The stand-off remained for a while before the senior removed that pressure, he leaned against the chair as he sighed. "You are a good guy, Philip. Don't involve yourself in this mess." Philip looked at the senior for a while, standing there for a moment before leaving his office. He was very disappointed by what was happening and even more so that their department, whose sole purpose was to prevent such situations, was allowing it to happen. "What happened, captain?" Diana followed Philip, who was thinking about what to do next. "A hunt" Diana was confused at first about what he meant, but then her expression changed dras
𝘓𝘢𝘥𝘪𝘦𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘨𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘭𝘦𝘮𝘦𝘯, 𝘮𝘺𝘴𝘵𝘪𝘤𝘢𝘭 𝘣𝘦𝘪𝘯𝘨𝘴, 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘦𝘴𝘵𝘦𝘦𝘮𝘦𝘥 𝘢𝘥𝘷𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘶𝘳𝘦𝘳𝘴 𝘧𝘳𝘰𝘮 𝘧𝘢𝘳 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘸𝘪𝘥𝘦, 𝘸𝘦𝘭𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘨𝘳𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘢𝘳𝘦𝘯𝘢 𝘰𝘧 𝘸𝘰𝘯𝘥𝘦𝘳𝘴! 𝘐, 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘥𝘦𝘭𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘵𝘧𝘶𝘭 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘤𝘩𝘢𝘳𝘮𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘩𝘰𝘴𝘵, 𝘢𝘮 𝘵𝘩𝘳𝘪𝘭𝘭𝘦𝘥 𝘵𝘰 𝘩𝘢𝘷𝘦 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘧𝘰𝘳 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘦𝘹𝘵𝘳𝘢𝘰𝘳𝘥𝘪𝘯𝘢𝘳𝘺 𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘯𝘵 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘸𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘭𝘦𝘢𝘷𝘦 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘣𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘵𝘩𝘭𝘦𝘴𝘴 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘢𝘯𝘵𝘪𝘤𝘪𝘱𝘢𝘵𝘪𝘰𝘯.The crowd erupted in excited cheers and applause.𝘉𝘦𝘩𝘰𝘭𝘥, 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘸𝘩𝘪𝘮𝘴𝘪𝘤𝘢𝘭 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘭𝘮 𝘸𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘧𝘢𝘵𝘦 𝘪𝘯𝘵𝘦𝘳𝘵𝘸𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘴 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘥𝘦𝘴𝘵𝘪𝘯𝘺, 𝘸𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘭𝘦𝘨𝘦𝘯𝘥𝘴 𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘧𝘰𝘳𝘨𝘦𝘥, 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘸𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘥𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘮𝘴 𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘦 𝘢𝘭𝘪𝘷𝘦! 𝘈𝘴 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘨𝘶𝘪𝘥𝘦 𝘵𝘩𝘳𝘰𝘶𝘨𝘩 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘮𝘦𝘴𝘮𝘦𝘳𝘪𝘻𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘴𝘱𝘦𝘤𝘵𝘢𝘤𝘭𝘦, 𝘐 𝘢𝘴𝘴𝘶𝘳𝘦 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘺𝘰𝘶'𝘳𝘦 𝘪𝘯 𝘧𝘰𝘳 𝘢𝘯 𝘦𝘯𝘤𝘩𝘢𝘯𝘵𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘦𝘹𝘱𝘦𝘳𝘪𝘦𝘯𝘤𝘦 𝘭𝘪𝘬𝘦 𝘯𝘰 𝘰𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳.The host's adorable e
Neo kept his eyes on the host for a while, while the host maintained his smile. He then walked back toward Selene and sat next to her, waiting for the first round to start. The leader of rock folks also came out of his daze and went back to his seat, still trembling by what he experienced. His companions were the same as the Fear Aura enveloped everyone of them. They didn't utter a word, in case it irritated the devil and he would use that skill/ability on them again. Neo looked at the participant and saw the arena trembling. He found the area of the arena increasing as the walls rose and a giant maze formed. 'Space Expansion?' {I would say Space Distortion.} Whatever it was, the arena expanded to a mile long and a mile wide as for the height. It was hundreds of meters high, but the participants and spectators outside could see everything like it was happening before their eyes. It was like they were walking alongside the participant. 𝘓𝘦𝘵 𝘵𝘩𝘦 "𝘎𝘢𝘮𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘊𝘩𝘢𝘴𝘦" 𝘤?
"Let's add some fire into the mix." Blaze walked toward the hurricane, carefully to not get swept by it, but still got swept by, so he activated [Technomantic Shield.] It swung him around more and more up. The crowd was stunned by this act of recklessness. He voluntarily entered the hurricane, which was strong enough to shred everything in that arena to pieces. Just then, they saw the wind hurricane slowly turning bright as it got caught on fire and the next instant, the wind hurricane turned into a fire tornado as everything in the arena got incinerated. Not even leaving the stones, as they also had become so hot that it felt like lava was flowing. The tornado stayed there for a while, but the host couldn't take it anymore and just harrumphed. The tornado went out like a candle as everything became clear to the spectators, and they saw the culprit standing in the "eye of the storm," his clothes regenerating, making females blush and males envious as they saw his physique. But Bl