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Genius Detective With Broken System 17. Contract
Two days later.Louis tidied his things into a suitcase and occasionally checked the watch on his left hand."Soon" Louis said.[Mission][E: Murder of an old woman in a narrow alley, Event: Walking][E: A boy's body was found under a bridge in a pathetic state, Event: Walking][...]The mission is still running indicating that the case has not been resolved, but Louis doesn't seem to care much about the case.There are far more important things now that Louis will do. After being released from prison by Campton, Louis' name was cleared and Dave was made the scapegoat as the source of all this trouble.Even so, not everyone accepts that fact, even though Louis can continue his usual activities, he is now faced with a new problem."Urgh, she seems still mad at me. This must be Howard again inciting her" Louis muttered.Louis sighed and then opened the cellphone that was given to him earlier. Louis opened an app and showed a map."map"A translucent blue map hologram appeared around him
Genius Detective With Broken System 1. The Case
Intelligence, lying, cunning and luck are the skills most needed to solve cases.But sometimes intelligence is not accompanied by luck and makes a detective always failThe four concepts are things that must always coexist. If one is missing, it will be difficult to fill the void.Whether it's a difficult case or even an easy case, it definitely requires these four concepts.However, some people also have all four concepts but take a different path from the detective.Therefore, in today's criminal world, detective work is the most sought after and at the same time the least considered.Have you ever heard of a child who, when asked about their aspirations, said they were a detective?Does not seem. Doctors, teachers, astronauts, police, soldiers, or company leaders are the general answer in the environment.But the presence of a detective becomes a pillar for peace in the criminal world as it is today.......Sydney, Australia, January 29, 2004.A complicated case that requires detec
Genius Detective With Broken System 2. Books and School
California, May 30, 1998Louis is 14 years old."What the hell is that... this is the fourth time you've been kicked out of a different school""I didn't give birth to you to be a burden like this!" The loud voice of an old woman snapping at a child in front of her."I didn't do anything wrong, I just said a different opinion than the old teacher" Said the boy. That kid was louis when he was 14 years old.* PpakkkA hard slap right on Louis' right cheek made his ears buzz."You dare to answer like that? I never raised you to be an insolent child like this" The woman took Louis' hand and entered Louis' room."Think about your mistake." The woman locked the bedroom door and let Louis inside.Louis just kept silent, it wasn't because he was shocked or felt sick, but because he was used to it. Slap wasn't the only thing he ever received from his mother. When Louis makes a little mistake he will definitely get a punishment that refers to physical violence.This is normal life for Louis. Ph
Genius Detective With Broken System 3. Psychological Disorder
It was getting late and Louis was walking back to the apartment where he lived."Mmm, in the end it was me who got reprimanded" Louis spoke to himself."But, the fact that the fat guy is the headmaster's nephew won't change no matter what" He continued.Louis walked until he finally arrived at his apartment area. There, many people had gathered there as well as several parked police cars with their sirens still sounding.Louis approached the crowd and looked ahead. Whispers could be heard from the people around him."Poor thing...she just moved here" Said one of the people standing there."I heard that she moved here to send her child to school," said another person.Louis entered the crowd and stood right in front of the police line. In front of him was an ambulance and a plastic bag which Louis knew exactly what was in it.And from inside the apartment someone was taken out with handcuffs on his hands. That's Louis's father."She was already dead when I came... I just wanted to see
Genius Detective With Broken System 4. An Uncaring Child
It was getting dark and Edward and Louis were still at the crime scene."The owner of the apartment? This morning I saw him leave in a hurry," said a woman who lived in the vicinity.*BeepBeepEdward's cell phone vibrated in his pocket. Edward carefully picked up his cell phone then looked at the screen."Peters?" Edward took the call from Peter."Her husband will be used as a suspect... if you have evidence, bring it here quickly." Peter's voice sounded a little shaky due to the telephone line."The detention will start tomorrow" Peter said over the phone."Don't worry, everything will be clear soon" Edward said then hung up the phone."Louis" Edward called Louis who was looking around with a flashlight in his hand."Yeah..." Louis replied."Let's check the apartment one more time" Edward said as he walked up to the crime scene.Edward and Louis came in and turned on the lights and checked around.“No fingerprints at all...” Edward muttered.After a while they finally found nothing t
Genius Detective With Broken System 5. White Room
*BeepBeepThe sound of a telephone ringing on a table in a restaurant."Are you sure that's not important?" A woman is seen saying while reaching for a drink on the table.A woman with short, shoulder-length black hair and clothes that were considered quite valuable at that time sat at one of the dining table."No, it's okay, just ignore it" Louis in front of the woman was also enjoying the food in front of her."Hmmm, are you sure you're not going to school?" Louis asked the woman."Mmm no, my brother doesn't let me go to a normal school" Said the woman."It's fun to be rich, isn't it..." Louis leaned back on the chair."Mmmm it depends on people's views. Sometimes people might like that, but to be honest I don't like that." The woman seemed to have a withered expression."Getting an easy life but having to sacrifice freedom is not fun at all," continued the woman."Mmmm" Louis stared at the woman narrowing his eyes slightly."Ah, then I'll go first, I have to pick up my brother at t
Genius Detective With Broken System 6. Incident
*KreekLouis opened one of the doors of the room.“Looks like it's been here a long time” Louis started sorting out the scattered human bones."What exactly happened here?" Edward muttered in shock at the sight.The state of the place looked like it had been abandoned for years. the bones in the room gave Edward chills.After exploring the room, it turns out that not only there, but also a room that goes underground and also contains exactly the same room but a lot more."This... much more than the first hotel..." Edward said as if in disbelief."What did they do to these people?" Edward walked down the hall with Louis."No matter how you look, this is a research laboratory" Louis looked at the room one by one."Is the government behind all this?" Edward was curious.Louis turned on his flashlight and started looking around, Louis found a room that seemed different from the others. The room contains a large photo frame.The white walls and the lights that didn't turn on made the photo
Genius Detective With Broken System 7. Third Building
Ohio, April 27, 2000.In a remote building on the outskirts of the forest.Fill the building with the same shades of white as the other two places."At the age of 16 you can already be an assistant detective... Is it because your parents have influence in the police?" An old man with half bald hair, round glasses and a slightly pudgy stature.The old man held a cane in his left hand and a gun in his right which he pointed at Louis.Instead Louis sat in a chair with his hands and feet tied to the chair and a cloth covering his mouth. He looked resigned to being tied up in that place."Nnnngg" Louis tried to say something but the cloth on his mouth was interfering."Actually we have investigated you young man, your mother was killed and your father is in prison, so I'm guessing you're an assistant detective not because of the influence of your parents" said the man reading a file in his hand."Detective Ed took custody of him and was appointed assistant detective a few years later," con
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17. Contract
Two days later.Louis tidied his things into a suitcase and occasionally checked the watch on his left hand."Soon" Louis said.[Mission][E: Murder of an old woman in a narrow alley, Event: Walking][E: A boy's body was found under a bridge in a pathetic state, Event: Walking][...]The mission is still running indicating that the case has not been resolved, but Louis doesn't seem to care much about the case.There are far more important things now that Louis will do. After being released from prison by Campton, Louis' name was cleared and Dave was made the scapegoat as the source of all this trouble.Even so, not everyone accepts that fact, even though Louis can continue his usual activities, he is now faced with a new problem."Urgh, she seems still mad at me. This must be Howard again inciting her" Louis muttered.Louis sighed and then opened the cellphone that was given to him earlier. Louis opened an app and showed a map."map"A translucent blue map hologram appeared around him
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16. Conversation
Two days passed after the call with Campton and solving the mystery, Louis fingered the blue screen in front of him while lying on the bed with a thin sheet and iron underneath which made Louis sometimes uncomfortable.The dim light from outside the prison cell illuminated a small part of the room but not where Louis was lying, but that didn't mean Louis couldn't see the blue screen in front of him.The blue screen looked bright in Louis' eyes like a cellphone screen.[Mission][E: Murder of an old woman in a narrow alley, Event: Walking][E: A boy's body was found under a bridge in a pathetic state, Event: Walking][...]The two missions on the screen show a case that is going on around Louis, and solving those cases will give Louis an advantage.Without realizing it, Louis closed his eyes and fell asleep later. The next day, not much changed, Louis was still in the garden reading the newspaper with another prisoner not far from him.However, from a distance someone was seen approach
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15. Conclusion
6 February 2004Louis opened his eyes and found himself in a strange place, several nets hanging from the side of the wooden house and a bare wooden bed that made his back hurt.A small room with one door, Louis rubbed his eyes before noticing a blue screen in front of him.[Rechannel starts][Revival]Louis rubbed his left eye and looked back at the blue screen. Besides that notification, there was also information about it on the left side of the screen.[Name: Louis][Race: Human][System Type: Crime Solver][Shops: ...][Karma: 2500][Skills: God View, Lie Detector,...][...]Dizziness was still faintly felt by him, therefore he did not get up from the hard bed. Louis looked left and right.[Net is broken][Wooden table][...]Some information appeared the moment Louis looked at the objects around him.Soon, Louis remembered something, about the picture he got while underwater, Louis was confused."Was it just a dream?"Even so in his mind he didn't think so, everything was so rea
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14. Chess
The eight hours spent by the prisoners in the outside environment. The External Environment in question is a special land that is prepared for prisoners to breathe fresh air. The place is called a garden.Apart from these activities, there are several activities such as manual labour, breakfast, dinner and lunch which are also carried out outside the cell.Louis sat on one of the wooden chairs on the outskirts of the garden while feeling his right eye, on the other hand several other prisoners paid little attention to Louis' movements.Despite feeling his right eye, Louis was actually looking at a blue screen in front of him that only he could see.[Mission: Solve the human experimentation case][Difficulty: A][Time: 10 days][Reward: 5000 Karma Points][Progress: Running]"There is no more time"Stuck in this prison makes Louis run out of ideas to solve the case. Besides the few things he got from the warden, he has no other clues that could lead him to the mastermind behind the ser
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13. Prison
5 february 2004.Louis opened his eyes at the bottom of the sea, though his vague vision was getting clearer and clearer. Louis had difficulty moving so he could only look around.Louis realizes he is in a strange bubble, even though he is at the bottom of the sea, Louis is able to breathe despite the difficulty, and that is because of the previous bubble.Several screens appear around him showing him several years ago trying to find out about a previously dangerous organization."Was it me? did this ever happen? why did I forget about it? I never remember it happening" Louis wandered in his thoughts.A moment later a school of small fish seemed to be rushing at Louis and bursting a bubble near him, for a moment the water came in and made Louis have trouble breathing.Bubbles coming out of his nose and mouth indicate that water has entered his body.when the fish passed Louis, a large net caught Louis and dragged him some distance forward...."Pull the net!" A man shouted a signal to
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12. Night Incident
30 minutes earlier.Louis and Edward didn't talk much in the car. But while the car was driving, in the middle of the dark night and the silence of the road with forests on both sides, a bang was heard from behind the car.For a moment the car became difficult for Edward to control and slowly stopped at the side of the road."A flat tire." Edward held the flashlight and pointed it at one of his tires.Before long, car lights appeared from behind and stopped right in front of Edward's car. It's Dave."What is it?" he asked."My car has a punctured tire, I don't have a replacement tire" Edward said leaning against the back of his car.Dave looked very strange in Louis's eyes, and sure enough, Louis saw the bullet path right at Edward's heart.Louis pulled Edward towards him and the bullet passed them.Edward looked down at the sound of gunshots and Louis immediately backed away and pulled Edward with him. But a bullet hit the fuel tank of Edward's car.Dave stepped back and shot the two
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11. Bait
May 1, 2000.New Jersey."I told you I didn't know about it." A middle aged man looked battered with a few tears running down his cheeks. Meanwhile Louis was holding the man's hair with blood all over his body.The scene was horrific at that place, The stench of blood from the pile of corpses around Louis made it look terrible."Mm," Louis took a rope that was around him then tied the middle-aged man.After that he took out a phone that he had bought earlier and made a call.Soon the phone was connected and Louis immediately said, "I need your help"The person on the phone sounded familiar, it was Howard's voice."How did you know this number?" asked Howard."Rinn, yes.." Howard continued to answer his own question."I sent you an address, bring your car here as soon as possible," said Louis then hung up the phone.Although Louis and Howard have enmity but they are bound by a secret, Louis and Howard each know each other's secrets.Because of that, Louis was sure that Howard would com
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10. Mission
"Joking? That's not funny" Rinn panicked and annoyed at the same time."Haha, after all the gun wasn't filled with bullets anyway" Louis pointed at the gun in Howard's hand.Howard was silent for a moment. Louis walked up to Rinn and started talking to her."I'll be a bit busy due to some cases, so I might not be able to help you much, sorry" Louis said to Rinn.Rin nodded with a slightly disappointed expression. Louis turned and waved at Howard. Howard showed a smile at Louis even though inside his mind right now he was furious."I just came here to say that, I can't reach you by phone because my cellphone is broken" Louis said to Rinn.Louis said goodbye to Rinn and Howard then left the place.“Rinn” Howard said coldly.Rinn showed a sad face and turned her head in a different direction."I was never told that the people you are referring to are the police" Howard sat down in the chair with a glare on Rinn."No, he's not a cop, he only works for a private detective agency, so he has
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9. Side Goal
WEEE-OOOO WEEE-OOOO!The sound of police sirens began to be heard approaching where Louis and Edward were.Dave got out of the car and rushed into the building carefully. On the first floor he didn't see any movement of people or anything strange."This is the place, where is Ed?" Dave muttered.Soon, Dave and his troops climbed the second floor. They were shocked by the corpses in front of them, dozens of corpses with blood splattered on the floor decorating the second floor hallway."Ed!" Dave called to find out Edward's position.Edward and Louis went down to the second floor with one of Vincent's subordinates tied hand and foot.Louis' appearance also looks cleaner, although there are still some bloodstains on his clothes.And he also closed his right eye again using a black cloth. Dave lowered the gun and put it to his waist."Ed... this place..." Dave looked around."Yes, there's no mistake this is a kind of lab" Edward said."And you didn't tell us about this place before inves
