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Volume 6 - Subatomic chicken (1)

Keywords: Advanced/deadly/laser beam of subatomic chickens/water bottle/apocalypse/lounging (part 1)

Emily's breath was echoing in the corridor.

She was one of the scientists of this special station. It was secretly built by the galaxy's government to study other galaxies' technologies and develop new weapons to use to gain an advantage against them.

The Milky Way's Union technological disadvantage was well known by humans. This is why its existence was made secret.

She turned at a corner and stopped to take her breath.

It was made secret, but yet…

The Darkness found out about it. If they were able to access such confidential data, mankind was certain

ClemCa

This is a really good chapter even for my standard at the time. I had not much to rewrite, I was really surprised overall. This feel at the same level than current chapters of my other novel quality-wise. I could make a whole novel about this story and it would probably be great. I introduced two characters with good alchemy, I wrote good dialogues, I described enough details, I gave infos on the backstory, I created mystery... I wish I could have written this kind of first chapters earlier oO

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