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2024-10-29 19:42:56Completely disregarding Mr. Tannell’s very clear instructions, Sarah Macly surged forward heading directly for the final remaining piece of the shelter that remained in place, shielding our view of the demon that had made it through the portal located in Mrs. Tannell’s living room. This was a complete contradiction to what we were told to do and clearly an insubordinate act for the sake of showing off by being absolutely reckless.
Before any of us could intervene, Sarah fired a bright orange basketball size flame ball at the remaining lone piece of structure. Jennifer had already begun an 'I wish' statement towards Sarah, but it was too late. Her flaming ball of hate and destruction had already begun its expedited journey towards whatever beast was waiting behind the tattered structure.&nbs
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With absolutely zero hesitation, those of us on the front line (Me, Jennifer, Jackson, and Sarah) began taking turns attempting to fatally wound the demon that had made it through the portal and past all of the mirrors set up to destroy it upon entry into this world. Each person took a turn and to me, they all seemed to be way too passive with the demon. Nothing seemed to be working effectively, the three headed beast was just growing annoyed. If you take a second and think about being sick and not going to the doctor. You self-diagnose and determine you are sick with a cold, so you treat the illness as if it were a cold. Turns out, you had the flu the entire time and have been treating a few symptoms but not actually treating the main source of the sickness. We just had to determine the s
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The demon’s chest cavity, dark and shriveled, was wide open. Each bone Todd encountered had hundreds of small spines growing from them, like thorns on a rose bush. For some reason, we all disregarded the gruesomeness of what we were looking at. It was a relatively human type of corpse, except for the extra heads, legs and arms. You had to use your imagination to really let the demon have some type of place in your heart, human wise. Todd was being as delicate as possible, moving slower than the slowest three toed sloth. "I have read that one prick from any of a demons thorns results in immediate excruciating death. Please, keep your distance and do not rush me," he said. The entirety of Mrs. Tannell’s home had become entrenched in an odor I can only describe as fresh shit out of water. If you do not know, let me enlighten you. When you defecate into a toilet bowl full of water, the liquid acts as a capsule of sorts and
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The screaming from outside subsided suddenly, as if the person that was screaming had passed out or flat out vanished from the face of the Earth. A dragging sound could be heard getting louder and louder as time passed. The large front door burst open, covering the area with a heavy calming moonlight but that light failed to ease our nerves because of how intense and frightening the screaming from outside was. I had only ever heard a scream like that before once in my lifetime and it was from a small woman on the side of the road when we went on vacation as a family. We saw her pulled to the left on the highway which was almost a certain death sentence. My father pulled over in front of her and went to see if he could help her. She said the engine was acting funny and was about to pop the hood. When she did, my father discovered a tattered mess of an animal splattered throughout the engine bay. Turns out, it was her childhood cat tha
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The portal began to hiss and rumble so loudly that it felt as if the devil himself were coming through. Todd was still working away, delicately dissecting the dead demon while Nurse Helen took the yellow orb that we obtained from the murdered woman from Mrs. Tannell. Mrs. Tannell removed her metallic box that somehow used the orbs' energy to give her spiritual power and set that beside Jennifer. Nurse Helen grabbed the metallic box, opened it and added the yellow orb to the box. My mind instantly questioned why she had done that until she pushed a hidden button on the side and two long clear holes slithered out from either side of the metallic box. These hoses would act as IVs for Jennifer, installing the power from the yellow orb into her body and hopefully bringing her back to the land of the living. We desperately needed this to work as the portal was certainly transporting something large from hell right to our feet. I sa
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Jennifer finally came back to us, slow and sluggish, but she was back and aware of all that had happened. Sarah Macly, our telekinetic mastermind and my childhood enemy, was unharmed by my actions and the actions of the wickedly huge, winged demon. Mrs. Tannell was not concerned with what we thought of her, at least that is what her face said, and delighted in the fact that we had been pressed against the wall and fought our way back using strategy and tactics. She said, "That was an impressive display of teamwork folks. There are always going to be a few areas we can improve upon, no matter what the circumstances are but overall, we did great." I suppose she caught me rolling my tired eyes when she spoke because I became the center of her attention. She had done something very wrong but for a good reason, that did not make it right in any way, shape, or form.The Wall would not survive any sort of negative actions, espe
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The fall through the portal was seemingly instantaneous and nonstop at the same time. I know that makes no sense but that is just how it felt to me. I knew I was doomed as soon as I fell into the portal to hell, but I was going to make sure that the devil got to know my face, that was for damn sure. I can tell you one thing that may help you in the future if you are ever falling into a portal to hell, there are a ton of dead babies. All of which ate in varying forms of decomposition. My eyes could not shield my mind from the sights of all the dead babies. The fall was nonstop, and it felt as if I were staring through water to see all the terrifying sights on my way down. When you think of hell, we tend to think of red, orange, fire, and pain. So far, I had yet to land, but all I saw was blue and dead babies with mortified looks on all their undeveloped faces. Having never had a baby or been pregnant, hell, I had n
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With heavy eyes, I realized I was being pulled by a chain that was connected to a set of shackles with spikes on them that had been wrapped around my wrists. Thiswas less than pleasurable but the onset of the extreme pain seemed to pass as quickly as it had come, same with my consciousness. The worst part was the smell, the two grunts clearly could not control their bowels, like a horse walking in a parade, they just dropped huge piles of feces on the ground and subsequently dragged me through it. That was the straw that broke the poor camel's back. My jeans were now the shade of dark brown and you could literally see the odor vapors wafting off of them. The demon dressed as royalty was walking behind me and would growl every time one of the grunt demons released its stomach contents into his pathway. The joke was on you special looking demon guy. The demons dragging me never turned around, they never acknowledged me and always kept
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Laying outside the open double doors that had just ejected some poor person in the air split in two pieces, my eyes desperately danced from side to side trying to capture a glimpse of Lucifer in the flesh. The grunt demons that dragged me to this location diverted their eyes and knelt down on one knee. This was definitely the right place, well, the wrong place for me as I did not want the devil to see how many pieces he could split me into. The air leaving the room was thick and sharp, it was hard to inhale the almost visible air because it seemed to contain more than just gasses. Each breath inflicted a barrage of painful stabs upon my nostrils all the way down to where my esophagus met my lungs deep inside my chest cavity. Tears came to my wide-open eyes as the pain ate at me from the inside. The decorated demon was still behind me standing tall with his head raised in the air, it seemed he was not afraid of the big boss but inst
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