FRONT OF THE MONICA HOUSE
Around our characters, workers are returning to their homes, and mothers are calling their children from the street to come back inside. Monica and Carina take a deep breath, not in the mood to see what Fabia Peres, 20, the classic dumb-blonde, but with a hot body wants. She has her arms crossed, huffing.
"What is it, Fábia?"
"I wanna know what the hell this garbage is doing here in front of my house!"
Monica looks at the floor: garbage, paper, and magazines are scattered on the sidewalk of her house. Fábia is a neighbor of Monica's left.
Monica is calm, somewhat mocking, "I'll explain, Fábia. This is not mine. It's yours."
"But, how can you throw something like that in my face? Are you calling me a pig, are you?"
"Pig, no; maybe, inattentive? Our garbage truck goes on Mondays, Wednesdays, and Fridays. If you put the garbage on Sunday or Saturday, the dogs come and tear everything up; even more so in your case, since you don't have a high basket to stop them."
"No, that can't be! I put that garbage on Saturday! This is his day. Fabinho told me!"
"Fabinho? Your boyfriend Fábio?"
Monica and Carina look at each other and think about how they are going to tell the news.
"You know, neighbor, I really got it right when I said you were inattentive. Your boyfriend's garbage truck runs on Tuesdays, Thursdays, and Saturdays because only one truck just can't handle the whole neighborhood, which is huge, and every year more people move here. And he lives farther away from us. Our route is different from his."
Fábia Peres keeps frozen, wide-eyed, and incredulous by her stupidity. She wants to curse Monica, but she knows she's wrong. On the other hand, Monica doesn't want to take it easy.
"Not to mention that I don't read this kind of magazine."
Monica kicks and stretches the page of one of the magazines, which opens. Carina reacts ashamed and covers her eyes.
The magazine with the name of Fábia Peres written in pen turns out to be of muscular men in tiny speedos.
"Your boyfriend who ordered you to throw them away, right?"
Fábia tries to compose herself, "Of course, I ordered in return to throwing away his girlie 'mags'."
Monica laughs, "Ah, okay, very sure he threw his magazines away!"
"He said he did..."
Monica is impatient, "Oh, girl, wake up for life and don't bother me. Come on, Carina, I'll pour you some coffee after that indecent sight."
Monica and Carina turn their backs on Fábia Peres and enter. Fábia crouches down, picks up the torn magazines, and goes back inside her house, kicking the air like crazy.
AT MALTHUS SNACK BAR
There's less activity on the site, and less food on the counter and in the showcase. Aurélio is already preparing to close. Annie is once again sitting at the counter, now checking the money to pay for the cake. The cake now only two slices remained.
Aurélio says, "I'm going to have to spend the night making another cake. You know that I am alone in this world, Annie."
"Wow, Seu Aurélio! Did you never get married? I'm sorry if I ask like that out of the blue, but we always see each other here and at the same time we hardly know each other. I just know that you are cool, you have one nice nose, and cook well."
Aurélio laughs but scratches his nose, "What about my nose?"
"It looks like a French nose."
"Maybe I'm a descendant —", someone enters, "we are closing, young man."
Annie turns to see who it is and is surprised: it's Jonas, 20, the son of the owner of the Cascais bakery. Jonas doesn’t die of love at the Malthus snack bar, like his parents. They think they will suffer competition. It annoys him even more that Annie is in the snack bar.
"Annie, it looks like you're stuck with glue there!"
"It's not like that, Jonas. I went home, had lunch, watched a movie in the afternoon, and came back. Ah, early in the morning there was a robbery, and it was just Monica the victim. Jeez, she needed the purse to go Downt—"
Jonas interrupts her, rude and sulky, "If you know the details, it's because you were here in the morning too. I was right, you live more trapped here than anywhere else!"
Annie remains sweet, "Own, Jonas, don't be like that! Tomorrow I stop by your bakery. Although your father complains that I always eat for free!"
"Oh, daughter, I say it, but it's a joke, okay?" Aurélio interferes by being smart.
"How much was it?" Jonas speaks angrily to Aurélio and points to the plate.
"I cut twelve pieces, one was missing, and now two are left... R$ 9.00." Aurélio is embarrassed.
Jonas takes out his wallet and takes out one R$ 10 bill. He puts the money in any way and does not expect to receive change, such a compelling and embarrassing mood.
"Damn it, huh, Annie! Me killing myself in that bakery trying to please you and you almost spending ten bucks here."
Annie turns to Aurélio, "See you, Seu Aurélio"
"See you tomorrow, Annie."
Jonas freaks out with "tomorrow" and pulls Annie out.
SNACK BAR ENTRANCE - NIGHT
Célio is still pasting posters. He glues one on the wall of the snack bar. Annie and Jonas go out, walk past him and don't read the sign or notice it.
"For sure they fought. But the fool lady is visiting the competition..."
Célio moves away. More customers leave the snack bar and do not read the poster, it’s because Célio placed it in a non-strategic position.
In the poster, it reads, "Meeting of residents this next Saturday to discuss improvements to the Praça da Granja, at 15:00, in the residents' association. Mayor Tito Aguiar".
The snack bar is already dark; Aurélio is closing everything and leaving. He does see and read the poster. He giggles and walks away.
"It's ‘assembly’ and not ‘meeting’, Tito..."
POLICE STATION
Carlos, still on duty, enters the cell where the prisoner is being held, waiting for the next procedure. He's nervous, but he tries to be strong. Carlos is experienced; he knows when he is facing small fish.
"Listen here, you declassed: our neighborhood is starting to grow, to take shape and life as the other neighborhoods in this city. And I won’t allow people like you to ruin the peace and happiness of good citizens! What you thought about stealing a young girl's purse who looked like going to a job interview?"
"That purse was so bulky, I thought it was money!"
Carlos reacts with a mocking smile, "Well, she explained that she is a writer and was going to the publisher to deliver the writing for publication. That is, an honest and hard-working young woman. Why don't you try something like that?"
The thief thinks this is weird, "What are you talking about?"
Carlos replies firmly, "I'm just saying that I don't think you have any experience or you’re a gang leader. I'd even say that you're not even 20 years old."
"I'm eighteen."
"At least you're not a minor. And then, what will it be like, are you going to talk? Is someone behind you, are they forming a gang in our neighborhood?"
The thief widens, did not expect this. His frightened face becomes uglier...
AT THE POLICE STATION - NIGHT Chief Carlos pins the thief on the wall; he wants to know if there is a gang forming in the neighborhood. There's tension and suspense. The thug starts to stutter and doesn’t look straight in the eye. "Y-you are going crazy, man! T-there are no gangs forming here, no. I did it on my own!" "What's your name?" "Uélton!" "Well, Uélton, I think I'm going to let you spend the night here to let you reflect on what you've done. If there's no one behind you, then you're just an inexperienced person. Think, reflect on what you want in your life." Uélton is almost crying, "Okay, "cop", it was my bad..." Carlos looks almost fraternally at Uélton; he could be his little brother. Carlos straightens up and leaves the cell, letting Uélton let out a sigh of relief. At the reception, Carlos walks slowly, going to his desk. It’s a small neighborhood police station, just for cases like these of minor importance. Some policemen are doing other things, answering the p
CARLOS'S LIVING ROOMCarlos is already bathed and wearing light clothes, a tank top, and shorts, sandals on his feet. He emerges from the kitchen with a beer can in his hands. Carlos is single; the house shows it by the furniture and the slight disorganization. Carlos sits on the couch and takes the remote to turn on the TV, but stops when he hears a woman's voice."Carlos? Can I come in?"Carlos leaves the remote and the can and goes to the door. She opens it and appears Miriam Abreu, 18, red-haired, helpful. She has a plastic bowl in her hands, indicating something to eat. Carlos smiles and lets her in."I brought it for you. It's my mother's recipe: iced coconut cake with lemon-flavored icing. I even scraped the peels to give them a green color.Carlos opens the pot and sees the generous piece."Thank you very much, Miriam. Do you want anything?""No, I came to see how you are doing. You know, Cassio told me that you prevented a thief from robbing Monica. Surprising.""Isn't that ri
MONICA’S LIVING ROOM - DAYNow Monica receives Annie. She is chewing on a bag of cookies, while Monica is satisfied with a cup of green tea. There is a cup for Annie on the coffee table. The two friends go on talking and eating —drinking at the same time."I didn't see you yesterday, my friend, after the incident. So, did everything do well?""If you are referring to me arriving at the publisher on time and delivering my manuscript, yes, of course, it worked. Now let's see if it will work out for me to be called by that phone and be informed that they are going to publish. And may they pay me at least R$ 2.00 per book.""Monica, this is very little! They will sell the book for at least R$ 20.00; why only two bucks for you?"Monica smiles smartly, "If I sell a million copies, I will earn TWO MILLION royalties, do you understand?"Annie chokes on the piece of cookie she chewed, "Yeah, I hadn't seen it from this perspective!""That's how you win in life, darling, thinking calmly and in th
CASCAIS BAKERYAnnie goes inside the Jonas family commerce. The man himself is at the counter, delivering bags of products to satisfied customers who leave. The place is tidier than the Malthus snack bar and has more varieties of pasta. Annie goes to the showcases, shelves, crates of sweets, cakes, cookies, and homemade pieces of bread.Jonas arrives from behind and begins the dialogue, "I haven't seen you that happy in a while."Annie suddenly turns to him, "Oh, Jonas, you scared me!""Sorry, it wasn't my intention." He is kinder than yesterday, "What will it be today?""Is your father there?""He went to pay bills at the Lottery. I'm glad you arrived on time."Annie talks and goes to a table. "Yeah, start with one of those capuchins that only you know how to prepare the way I like it, and those sugar-filled donuts I saw there.""Your wish is my command!"Jonas smiles sweetly at Annie and leaves.Annie, also smiling, starts to think about the conversation she had with Monica, "Poor li
MALTHUS SNACK BAR - DAYMonica and Célio are sitting at the table, which has already been served. They eat and talk.Célio begins, "Monica, I understand that you have been brave since we met, but... Now we are in other domains. We left our parents' skirts. So I ask you to be careful when facing certain people.""Oh, are you worried about me, Célio?" Monica reacts with emotion.Célio reacts by shaking his head, "N-no, Monica, what’s is it? Your father will be here shortly after, knocking me down. I respect you, I'm not flirting with you."Monica launches a joke, "Especially because in flirting you are not very good."Célio did not catch, "Anyway, that Ricardo worries me. Mysterious, creepy, alone... He has already got into some trouble and you know that he cannot be trusted. Today you were with Carina and Fábia, but... Imagine, one day you’ll go there alone, at night..."Monica says thankfully, "I appreciate the concern, Célio, but I'm not that careless. I’ll never be alone with him at
MALTHUS SNACK BARCélio and Monica pay for the lunch and say goodbye to Aurélio."I received it from Seu Tito and I came to honor you soon.""I thank you for your preference, Célio. With this money, I’ll buy a broom, as the citizen said."Monica replies, "Ah, don't you mind that guy, Seu Aurélio. Yes, clean up your business, for hygiene and customers, but not for him." She turns to Célio, "I need to stop by the Cascais bakery.""I’m gonna see Cássio in the square".Monica is thrilled, "Thanks for the invitation, Cé. I loved it." She says to Aurélio, already leaving, "Bye, Seu Aurélio!""Bye!" after she left, he is mocking Célio, "how is it? 'Cé'?"Célio adds dignity, "Hey, Seu Aurélio, it’s not a good tone to make fun of a lady.""Am I missing something?"Célio talks almost to himself, "IT´S ME who is losing if I don't act soon. Time is cruel.""I can get nothing with this philosophy."Célio speaks when he leaves, "We’ll talk later, Seu Aurélio."Aurélio laughs and takes a flannel to c
IN THE POLICE STATIONCarlos is at his desk in front of Tito. The mayor wants to know what's going on in the neighborhood. The conversation already started.Tito is reacting surprised, "What? Daylight robbery?""Exactly! The boy spent the night here in the cell. But, I checked his background. Nothing. He debuted in the criminal world and paid for it. I don't think he ever tries again.""God help me not. Today's youth... Why did they say the 1980s were the lost decade? It didn't have half the problems today.""Young boy, he could be working as a supermarket assistant, or in his father's workshop... But, no, they are unoccupied today... They don't even want to watch television, nowadays they are all restless.""Do you think it's an isolated case?""He said categorically that he was not under the command of any gang. But, I trust not very much.""It was just what I needed, gangs killing each other in our neighborhood.""With the necessary tools, we will do a good job."Tito does not captu
IN MALTHUS SNACKEd enters the snack bar. He passes by and does not look at Cássio and Sandra talking at one of the tables in the background. He goes straight to the counter."What do you want now, Ed? Something more than a pastry?""What I ate this morning was the best cheese pastry in my entire life. And yes, I want one more."Aurélio looks at his wristwatch, "For kids like you, isn't it almost dinner time?""Then why can they?"Ed points to Cássio and Sandra’s table. The two continue talking."Because they are past your age," Aurélio explains to him.Ed laments, "Complicated."Aurélio laughs, "And to drink?""A cane juice cup!"Already calmer, Aurélio will prepare the juice. Ed takes the plate with the pastry with some ketchup squirts, and goes to the table in front of Cássio and Sandra. With his back to them, he starts to eat, but his ear connects to their conversation.Cássio asks her, "Are you sure you were not mistaken, honey?""Are you calling me blind or a liar?""Blind, no, a
BAKERY CASCAIS - DAYFábio enters the bakery and is amazed by what he sees: Monica prostrated in the chair, finishing crying, with Annie sitting next to her, comforting her and assuring her that she was not a bad friend for Carina. Jonas continues to serve customers, sometimes taking a look at both.Fábio approaches the two girls with concern, “Monica! What happened?”He kneels to her. Monica smiles slightly, touched by his concern, “It’s okay, Fábio. I was worse. I just remembered Carina and the worst step she’s going to take in her life.”“You are thinking about the lunch she has with the damn parents.”Annie explains, “It’s just that Monica is feeling guilty for not preventing Carina from going to that lunch.”Fábio caresses Monica’s hair, “My love, you tried, but Carina needs to make her decision. After all, everyone has to carry their load.”“She is going to suffer, Fábio. At least I asked her to keep an eye on the family. She could take advantage of the fact that she is going to
PENHA’S HOUSE - DAYEverybody took the day to ask Ricardo trick questions. However, he felt it was not the time to answer or lie to the inquirers.He just weaves his classic silly little smile and avoids the subject, “Calm down, Penha, you don’t need to create conspiracy theories. The guy disappears from the bar for three days without giving any satisfaction. I thought he moved out of the neighborhood. I didn’t understand the disappearance.”Penha narrows her eyes, hardly believing what she heard. He kidnaps Wellington and then asks “why did he disappear?”“I hope he disappears. I always thought he was too good for your business. You were in danger of being reported by him.”Penha already knew the truth, since Wellington had told her. She just teased Ricardo, as if she had fun with it. She wanted to see his reaction.Ricardo was more nervous, tense, taking a deep breath, and “counting to three” so as not to reveal himself more than he did at the Malthus snack bar. Not with Penha.“Any
MALTHUS SNACK BAR - DAYAurélio is teaching Luís how to properly serve customers. Wellington is sweeping. Nobody notices the window, where Ricardo is looking at the three with dismay.Ricardo goes back a few steps and enters the snack bar even with the “closed” sign on the door. The three men turn their attention to the door opening and closing and are surprised.“Ricardo?” the owner says, “We haven’t opened it yet, but we already have snacks in the showcase.”Ricardo looks with disgust at the snacks, “I don’t want to be a victim of the ‘Salmonella bar’ anymore. What are these two doing here?”Disgusted, Wellington drops the broom and approaches him, “You can ask us, directly. We are here!”Aurélio gestures for Wellington to calm down.Ricardo goes on talking, “And you, Wellington? Are you working here now? Aren’t you going back to the bar? Rubens is waiting for you until now!”Wellington looks at Aurélio in doubt, Aurélio responds affirmatively with a slight nod.“No, Ricardo, I won’
PENHA’S HOUSE - NIGHTPenha is disgusted by Ricardo’s unexpected visit just to ask if she is going to lunch tomorrow. Because she had no intention of going.Even with her clear body language: pouting, arms crossed and one foot hitting the ground, Ricardo does not undo the classic little silly smile.“Did you interrupt my movie... for this?”Ricardo sits in the armchair closest to the coffee table and puts his feet on top. Penha can see from the soles of one of his shoes that Ricardo stepped on ox feces.“Get those dirty feet off my coffee table!”“You haven’t confirmed me yet, sis. The dress that Carina chose is beautiful. Did you choose yours?”“Get outta my house now!”Ricardo threatens to rub his foot with his dirty shoe, showing that he knows the situation of his shoe.“Come on, sis, say yes! A family lunch, with dad and mom...”Penha is about to cry, she is very nervous. She just wants Ricardo to leave, “Please, Ricardo, stop this clowning! I’m not going to show up for lunch to h
PENHA HOUSE - NIGHTAfter Penha and Wellington cancel the lease agreement, the two say goodbye and Wellington leaves. Carlos leaves behind, without saying a single word, just smiled mysteriously at Penha, as if he knew she had just slept with Rubens.Then she takes a forgotten flannel in a corner and begins to try to clean the spilled coffee on the sofa, as it has practically dried, staining the fabric. Rubens, sensing the empty house, leaves the room furious and in long strides.Rubens takes Penha violently by the arm and makes her turn to him. Penha is startled by being taken by surprise and widens her eyes.“Hey, what are you doing?”“What did that kid come to do here?”Penha tries to get rid of Rubens, but he won’t let her go.“Let go of me! He just came to end the lease! He won’t be living in the kitchenette anymore!”“Did you send him to the bar today?”“I was so shocked by his decision that I didn’t even remember!”Rubens squeezes Penha’s arm tighter and she screams more, “You
WELLINGTON KITCHENETTE - DAYCarlos cornered Rosa asking her to explain to everyone how Penha is Ricardo’s sister. She gulps, nervous.Wellington looks at her more deeply than the others.Finally, she decided it was time to end the mysteries. She gets up to explain better, “Yes, people. It’s true. Ricardo is Penha’s younger brother. However, since they moved here and built the building, they have presented themselves as lovers.”“But, why is that disgusting lie?” Everybody notices Wellington’s afflicted and distressing tone.“Because Ricardo believes that by presenting himself as a boyfriend, he prevents other men from flirting and taking Penha to bed.”The girls are embarrassed.Annie blushes and asks, “Doesn’t Penha know how to simply say ‘no’ to the perverts?”“No. She deliberately accepts to sleep with anyone who invites her. She has a boyfriend who is in Europe doing a Master’s or Doctorate and doesn’t even dream that his darling is horning him.”Wellington is very ashamed of him
RHODIA AVENUE - AFTERNOONMore people gather to see Célio’s rescue, which hung in the window of Wellington’s kitchenette. Even Aurélio and his clients left the snack bar to see.“Guys, these windows... Who was the idiot who bought these big windows?”Monica, Sandra, and Annie exchange mocking gazes: they all imagined it was Ricardo’s idea with the masons.WELLINGTON’S KITCHENETTECarlos strides in and goes to the window.“Hang in there, boys!”With another strong man, it was easier to pull Célio back safely. When they finally succeed, he can hear the palms and cheers of those present from below. Célio runs to Wellington’s bathroom to throw up, he’s still scared.Wellington and Luís laugh out loud. Carlos then notices the boxes and suitcases, “Hey, what’s going on here?”Wellington stops laughing and announces to Carlos, “Officer, I’m moving out of here. I don’t think is right to live in the place where I have to pay rent for my kidnapper’s girlfriend.”Carlos smiles in understanding,
PENHA’S HOUSE - DAYPenha opens the door for Rubens, who hurries in and looks worried. She closes the door and signals him to sit down.“I was going to offer you coffee, but you need chamomile tea.”“This is no time for jokes, Penha! The situation is getting more complicated.”Penha purses her lips in indifference; everyday things are complicated. She sits in the other armchair, “Every day you live in confusion. You guys don’t seem to want to live in peace. And if I guess, it has to do with Monica and her friends.”Rubens doesn’t like the tone of Penha’s voice and replies harshly, “It has to do with that bastard Wellington who didn’t come to the bar neither Wednesday nor yesterday! What is he thinking?”Penha, on the outside, remains calm and indifferent; but inside, she is overflowing with relief. It was what she wanted most, for Wellington to get out of that snake’s nest, “You’ll see, he found a better job and couldn’t even tell you.”“We paid above the minimum!”Penha is irritated
MIRIAM’S ROOM - DAYMiriam is talking to Fábia Peres. The two got on well again after Sandra’s advice. Cleverly, Miriam leads the conversation to the topic of lawsuits.“Oh, Fábia, you don’t know the worst: I talked to Carlos and he said that he won’t insist on objecting to his fate at the trial. That he will acknowledge that he was wrong and accept the punishment.”Fábia Peres is gaping. Then the officer who always behaved like a warrior, dropping the towel so easily?“What does the officer have in mind, Miriam?”“He said he doesn’t mind losing the case, as long as he can get Ricardo behind bars. He’s gathering proofs and evidence.”“And is Carina going to marry this guy?”“Hopefully, she’ll fall flat on her face when she finds out the whole truth on her honeymoon, with the police invading their suite, ha, ha!”The two girls giggle maliciously.“Girl, on the subject of the trial, I’ve been thinking about something. If the officer is not offended, I can ask my father to pay the compen