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MadRevenantHello, I forgot to post an author note before. As you can see, I've started another story that I will also do my best to update once a day. Just like with my other story, I hope to eventually do more chapters like maybe 2-3 a day instead, but we will ahve to see.
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Rise of the Commoner: Johnny Burns's The Lost Heir Chapter 23: Finding the Culprits (4)
The girl eagerly said, "Mom and dad told me to stay put and behave. Anthony was there too, but he was so annoying, so I didn't want to play with him. Then Uncle Charles showed up. He looked really angry, so I stayed away. Then Uncle Charles talked with Anthony. Then they walked out together, and that was it."As she told her story, she waved her arms around excitedly. More than once, she almost smacked Johnny across the face because of how excited she was. It was surprisingly simple and not hard to understand. Johnny had been worried that he would have to endure some convaluated child's tale, but apparently he had been worried over nothing."So you're saying Uncle Charles took Antony away? Which room were you playing in? Was it the same room as before?" he asked."No, I can show you," she said.Johnny nodded and allowed her to lead them out of the room into another. The room they entered looked like an actual playroom. He hadn't known about this room earlier, but he supposed it was be
Rise of the Commoner: Johnny Burns's The Lost Heir Chapter 24: Horror of Children
While Johnny was shocked by Zoey's sudden change of heart, he was relieved that he didn't have to worry about figuring out how to convince her. Now that he had her on his side, he should see if he could get more information out of her. He didn't truly believe Charles was the mastermind behind the whole thing. The plan he enacted was too sloppy.As he was about to start interrogating her, he heard a shout, "Hey, that hurt!"Looking away from Zoey, he saw the kids were shouting at each other. He had missed what caused the fight and wasn't sure if he should get involved. It wasn't like he was their parent or was tasked with watching them. If something happened, it wasn't his fault. Well, he supposed he should do something since they were family.As he grumbled to himself about how this wasn't what he expected when he joined the family, he was shocked out of his thoughts when he saw the kids throwing fire at each other. His mind could barely process what he was seeing. Weren't they a litt
Rise of the Commoner: Johnny Burns's The Lost Heir Chapter 25: Discussions
"What did you mean earlier?" Johnny asked.[The system doesn't understand where humans got the idea that there are restrictions on who can obtain a power.]Johnny took a moment to make sure no one was listening to the conversation before asking, "What do you mean? Of course, there's a restriction. Otherwise, everyone would be able to get a power."It was something everyone grew up knowing, and nothing had proven that idea otherwise. Only the elite got to encounter the divine power system and obtain a power that would enrich their own lives. There were rare exceptions, but he wasn't one of them outside of getting more than one power. However, the system was acting like that was wrong. He couldn't wrap his mind around it.[The system now understands the confusion.]"And?" Johnny asked when the system didn't continue right away.[Everyone is capable of obtaining a power, but the system can only give power to a select few for several reasons.]"Can you tell me what they are?" he asked as
Rise of the Commoner: Johnny Burns's The Lost Heir Chapter 26: Exposing the Culprit (1)
Johnny looked Zoey straight in the eye and asked, "What on earth did you tell her?""I was just letting her know you're good and that we're going to clear things up before the family gathering is over," she said with an innocent look on her face.He didn't believe it for a second, and he narrowed his eyes. Zoey and the mother had snuck away to talk in private for a few minutes before returning. The mother had gone through a complete one eighty and allowed Hannah to act as his witness. Obviously, something more had happened while they had been separated, but he didn't know what.After a moment's hesitation, he decided to drop it. He didn't want to push his luck now. If he said anything wrong, the mother might change her mind. Of course, that didn't mean he was going to drop it. He was definitely going to corner Zoey after this was all over to discuss exactly what she did to bring Hannah's mother to his side."You know, I never did ask what your power was," he said, changing the topic.
Rise of the Commoner: Johnny Burns's The Lost Heir Chapter 27: Exposing the Culprit (2)
Johnny couldn't believe his luck. He needed to inform Zoey right away so she could meet back up with him, but he was shocked to see them not bat an eye in his direction. They were already walking around him, intending to go on their merry way. Wouldn't the other party get angry and demand an apology in this situation? Neither of them had even batted an eye.Snapping out of his daze, he called after them. "Wait."The duo proceeded to give him a look that basically screamed what did he want. They were clearly not in the mood to talk with him at all. Johnny was a bit intimidated. He felt as if one wrong move could get him killed, but he quickly shook those thoughts away. There was no way they would kill him for saying something wrong. It wasn't because he thought they didn't have the heart to kill someone.He was pretty sure they had blood on their hands, even though he had no evidence of it. No, he didn't think they would have a problem dealing with him if they decided they wanted to ge
Rise of the Commoner: Johnny Burns's The Lost Heir Chapter 28: Exposing the Culprit (3)
As everyone gathered around in the hall, several people were deep in conversations with one another. Standing in front of everyone on the stage were Madison and Gabriel, who were anxiously wondering where their son could have gone. They hadn't heard from him since the nasty incident from before. The thought that their son could be bullied crossed their minds.The couple was immediately overcome with bloodlust. They wished they could have done something more, but they couldn't raise a hand since the grandfather had gotten involved. If their son didn't want to make him an enemy, he had to go along and complete the grandfather's request. Madison nibbled on her nail as she contemplated what other problems her son might face.Flames leaked out of her body, causing those nearby to eye her warily. Gabriel was the first to snap out of it and place a calming hand on her shoulder. Realizing what she was doing, she reluctantly reigned in her bloodlust and got her flames under control. This wasn'
Rise of the Commoner: Johnny Burns's The Lost Heir Chapter 29: Exposing the Culprit (4)
However, the only way Johnny could think of resolving the issue was to use what he had seen so far. Taking a deep breath, he erupted into flames. His action was so sudden that everyone immediately fell silent. Those near him actually took a step back to avoid being hit by the sudden burst of flames. Several gave him calculating looks, while others looked impressed. Now that he had everyone's attention, he stopped releasing his flames and said, "Now that I have everyone's attention, I want to say that Isaiah will be in charge of the investigation. He will ensure that every single person involved will be caught." "Every single person?" someone muttered. Another person said, "Doesn't it sound like Charles isn't the only one?" As the whispers got louder, Isaiah stepped forward, and Johnny stepped back. "I'm afraid that I can't say anything more about the ongoing investigation." "Then why did you bring it up now?" a person asked. "That's right. If you wanted to keep the investigation
Rise of the Commoner: Johnny Burns's The Lost Heir Chapter 30: Adjusting to His New Life
The next couple of days were quite peaceful for Johnny. Despite how chaotic the first day was, he was left alone by the family. Of course, he spent time with his parents. They had many years to catch up on, but the rest of the family just sort of ignored his existence. He wasn't sure if it was a good or bad thing. On one hand, he was grateful that he didn't have to interact with them at all.Johnny still hadn't gotten any clues about who was trying to get rid of him, and it made him more comfortable to avoid all of them altogether. Also, he didn't get caught up in family drama, which was a plus. On the other hand, he wasn't involved in the family drama. Since no one was talking to him, he could only rely on his parents and servants for gossip about the other family members.He sighed as he flipped through the channels of the expensive TV that he previously wouldn't be able to get several feet of. There was nothing interesting for him to watch. It was just boring news. He was about rea
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Hello everyone. I forgot to add a note in the previous chapter. Anyway, I just want to thank all my readers who have been following along. I really appreciate it. Now for the news you have been waiting for.Johnny's story has ended and turned out shorter than Billy's story like I expected. With its end, I currently have no ongoing stories on this site.I've decided I'll take a break from the site. How long the break will last I'm not quite sure. Hopefully, the break won't be long, and I have a new story up within the year, but we will have to see.Just like with Rise of the Demon King: Caleb Gonzales's Rat Race and Rise of the Desperate: Billy Wood's Save and Restart System, I might do a rewrite or remake of it.If I do go through with this idea, then I'll just immediately go to eBook and paperback, and it would be very different from the one here. We will have to see, and I'll let everyone know.As I stated before, if you want to stay in contact with me, you'll probably have to use F*
- Rise of the Commoner: Johnny Burns's The Lost Heir
Chapter 96: Deal (2)
"By the way, I don't mean to rush things, but the time limit for the hour is until I return," she said.That certainly caught Johnny's attention as he demanded, "How long is that?""A couple more minutes," she said.A couple minutes wasn't a lot of time to come to a life changing decision. He still needed more time to think. Did he really want to take a chance and accept the offer, which meant leaving everything he knew, or should he stay and weather whatever the system had in store for the world? Weighing the pros and cons of each decision, he could feel sweat forming on his head."I need to go. Have you come to a decision?" she asked.After a brief moment, he said, "Yes.""Well, what's your decision?" she asked."I'll take the offer," he said.She smiled as she said, "Good choice."Suddenly, Katherine slumped over alarming Johnny, who rushed to check up on her. She appeared to be still breathing, and there didn't seem
- Rise of the Commoner: Johnny Burns's The Lost Heir
Chapter 95: Deal (1)
"Okay, I'm listening," Johnny said."I'm glad to see you can be reasoned with. I've heard of others who aren't so fortunate," the intruder said."Others?" he said."We'll get to that later," she said as she attempted to make a waving motion.Unfortunately, Katherine's missing limbs made that a moot point. It honestly made Johnny uncomfortable seeing Katherine's body attempt to do something an ordinary person could do. He wasn't the only one put off by the situation. The intruder grimaced as she settled back into the wheelchair."Anyway, I'm here to give you a proposal from the system," the intruder said."What?" Johnny snapped."You heard me right. The system would like to offer you a deal, and it's up to you if you want to accept this," the intruder said.Johnny's mind whirled over what she said, scarcely believing what she just said. The system wanted to offer him a deal? This was completely unplanned. He had never heard of t
- Rise of the Commoner: Johnny Burns's The Lost Heir
Chapter 94: Visitors
Johnny blinked. "Wait. EVeryone?"He couldn't believe what Frank was saying. Was he crazy? Did he really want to let the whole world know about the monsters being able to receive messages from the system? It would be complete chaos. Johnny was exactly advocating to tell no one. Far from it, but he couldn't see how it would help anyone to inform the public about this information."Well, not everyone," Frank said. "I'm referring to the authorities as this is a matter of security.""Will they take it seriously?" Johnny asked."It's hard to say. It's possible everyone will think it's a joke, but it's also possible that some will take the warning seriously," Frank said."I see," Johnny simply said."If that's all, I'm going to take my leave and let you get some rest," Frank said as he stood up.Johnny nodded. "Got it."Right as Frank was about to go out the door, he said, "Actually, there are some people who want to talk to you if y
- Rise of the Commoner: Johnny Burns's The Lost Heir
Chapter 93: Aftermath
Johnny's eyes snapped open as he sat up abruptly. His mind was moving at several miles per hour as he scanned his surroundings. He had to stop her before she got away. However, the monster was nowhere in sight. He wasn't sure how long he had been out cold, but he supposed it was a bit much to expect the monster to linger just because he told her to stop.More importantly, he was no longer in that place considering the lack of lava. Taking a good look at his surroundings, he deduced that he was back in his own world, which set him on edge. How did he get back? As he wondered who or what had brought him back, the door to the room swung open. He stared at the sight of Frank leading the backs of doctors and unknown men."Johnny, you're awake," Frank said as he rushed over to check on him.A tad bit uncomfortable with how Frank was acting, Johnny asked, "Frank, what happened?"Frank grimaced. "It's a bit of a long story. First, we should make sure you're okay."As soon as he said that, Fra
- Rise of the Commoner: Johnny Burns's The Lost Heir
Chapter 92: True Form
As Johnny stared at his mother, wondering why he felt uneasy about the whole thing, it finally clicked. "You're not my mother.""What are you talking about? Of course I'm your mother," she said.Johnny shook his head as he took on a relaxed stance. "No, you're not. I don't know why you're pretending to be here, but you should just give up now. It's not going to help you in the long run."The woman also dropped her stance and shrugged her shoulders as she said, "Well, this is unexpected. How did you know?"Rather than admit that it was just his gut instinct, he said, "I have no reason to tell you.""I suppose I should have figured you would say that," she said calmly.She was far too calm for his liking. He knew nothing about it here other than she was a fake, which didn't mean much in the end. It wasn't like he would have gone easier even if she was his mom. However, it did explain why she killed his father without batting an eye, but it begged the question of where his real mother wa
- Rise of the Commoner: Johnny Burns's The Lost Heir
Chapter 91: Unexpected Turn of Events
Johnny ignored his father, as he was just relieved that his healing power and fire power helped him survive his father's attack. His fire power apparently gave him some resistance to fire, and his healing power healed whatever managed to get past his fire resistance. He took advantage of his father's shock to lunge at the man and return the favor.He landed several punches before his father recovered from his shock and shielded against the punches. Johnny didn't let up and continued to barrage his father with punches, hoping to get past his defenses and continue his original onslaught. After some time, his father apparently had enough and roared as he unleased a wave of flames. With a grunt, Johnny was forced back, though he was unharmed.His father glared venomously at him as he snarled, "That's enough. I'm going to end this."With a bravo that he didn't completely feel, Johnny said, "Just try it. You're just going to fail again."As his father was about
- Rise of the Commoner: Johnny Burns's The Lost Heir
Chapter 90: Meeting the Family
While Johnny didn't like the idea, he didn't have much of a choice. Sticking around wasn't going to do anything except waste time and put himself in possible danger. With no one else with him, he had no one he could rely on if he was suddenly attacked by a bunch of monsters, which was a serious risk. He didn't want to take that risk."Where do we meet up?" Johnny asked."We'll try to continue with the plan and head for the head of the family's office," Frank said.Just as Johnny was about to protest that idea, he heard a loud animalistic roar. He frantically checked his surroundings and didn't see anything. Before he could feel relieved, he heard screams and shouts on the other side. He placed his hands on the rubble, hoping to at least find a small opening to get a better look at what was happening."Frank? What's going on? Are you okay?" Johnny asked frantically.There was no response except more shouting and fighting. He was completely in the da
- Rise of the Commoner: Johnny Burns's The Lost Heir
Chapter 89: Confronting the Burns Family
Even though Johnny had said he wasn't going to let the matter go, wasn't it a bit much to storm the Burns family's home just days after his decision? He thought it would take a couple weeks to prepare. They couldn't take down such a powerful family in just a few days. What was everyone thinking? He wondered if they all had lost their minds."Johnny, is something the matter?" Frank asked as the car headed for their intended destination. "You don't look good.""I just can't believe we're moving in now," Johnny said."You have nothing to worry about. Everything has already been sorted out," FRank said."Are you really sure we're good to go?" Johnny asked."You have nothing to worry about. The plan was already in motion before you decided to throw your hat in the ring. It's been modified to include your involvement," Frank said.Frank might have said it to reassure Johnny, but it didn't in the slightest. Johnny had been at the meeting discussing
