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2024-10-29 19:42:56Fortunately, luck was apparently on Johnny's side today. At the last second, he was able to dodge the attack and watch as it cut a car in two. He swallowed, thinking that it could have been him. Turning his attention back to the women, he saw that he hadn't even been the intended target. If he was, he didn't think they would be focused on each other instead of him.
[Don't worry. With your healing power, you should be able to recover from any attacks.]
Johnny had forgotten about the healing power he had. "Would I really be able to survive being cut in half?"
[As long as the injury isn't fatal.]
Seeing the amended statement, he supposed the healing power had to have some drawbacks or else it would be too powerful. If he could heal from anything, he would basically be immortal. At first, he thought that would be a great power to have, but seeing the women fight, he took back his words. Immortality actually wasn't a great power, and he was glad that he didn't have it.
[The user should focus on the task the system has set out for them.]
At the reminder, he recalled what he had been trying to do before he nearly got eviscerated. Looking down at his hands, he grimaced when he saw that the flames had gone out. He didn't know what had happened, but he was going to have to summon them again and keep them from going out. Concentrating on his hands, he watched as flames sputtered to life.
Once his hands were coated with flames, he stood up. Now that he summoned them again, all he needed to do was hold it for several minutes, like the system told him to. That should be easy. He was obviously being sarcastic, because that was actually harder than he would have liked. With wind, ice, and water flying around, keeping the flames lit was difficult.
Fortunately, he didn't have to worry about being forced into a fight since the women had completely forgotten his existence. Any attacks that came his way were just byproducts of the two fighting each other. It was like he was a speck of dust in their eyes. He could imagine why they would think that, but that didn't mean he appreciated being caught up in their fight.
When he was finally able to hold on to the flames for two minutes, the ground shook. "What now? It had better not be another bigshot coming to fight."
It was worse. The giant he had knocked out before was back on his feet and was the cause of the earthquake. The man was going on a rampage, destroying everything in sight as he roared and raged. Watching this happen from a distance, Johnny decided he should hide. He had a feeling that if he was spotted, he was going to be in a world of hurt.
Ducking behind some debris, he saw that his flames hadn't gone out yet. "System, what do you think?"
[The user had done well. Now it is time for the next step. The user has to use the power in a fight without losing control of the flames.]
He stared at the message for several long moments before asking, "Isn't that a big jump?"
[It is essential that the user learn to use their power in a life or death situation.]
[The system has determined that the user has nothing to worry about since the user has already defeated the blessed before.]
There could only be one person the system was talking about. Peeking from his cover, he watched as the giant smashed a fist into one of the buildings. The side of the building exploded, sending rubble flying everywhere. This didn't stop the giant, as he continued to punch the building until the damage was too extensive, and it caved in on itself.
Looking back at the system, he said, "I'll die if I fight him now."
[Why is the user not confident?]
[The user was able to beat the other blessed earlier.]
"That was pure luck. I would have died," he hissed.
[As long as the user avoids a lethal blow, the user will survive.]
Johnny could see why most liked to pretend the system didn't exist. "I don't think you understand. One blow from him, and my head will be sent flying."
Before he could get a response from the system, he noticed a shadow over him. His eyes widened in realization, and he immediately threw himself out of the way. As he rolled across the ground, a huge chunk of a building crashed where he had been previously hiding. If he had been a second too late, he would have been crushed to death.
"There you are," the giant roared as he threw himself at Johnny.
Seeing the giant coming at him, Johnny instinctively threw flames at the giant. Unfortunately, this was where his streak of good luck ended. The man grabbed a car to use as a shield against Johnny's flames. Johnny grimaced as he tried to increase the intensity of the flames. For some reason, they weren't as powerful as last time.
The giant was quickly bridging the gap between them, and Johnny was forced to stumble back to create some distance. However, the giant was moving faster. As the giant was about to reach him, Johnny threw himself to the side and started running. He could hear the giant stomping after him as he tried to come up with a plan to face him.
There had to be some way for him to deal with the giant without killing him. The only good thing so far was that his flames hadn't gone out yet. Suddenly, he felt something crash into his back. He swore he heard something break, and he coughed up blood as he was sent flying. Johnny crashed into the ground a few moments later.
When he tried to get up so he could run again, he found that he couldn't move his body. It was like he lost control of everything. As he panicked over what was going on, it suddenly hit him. The cracking sound from before must have been his spine. The thought of being paralyzed for the rest of his life terrified him, though he might not last long.
[Don't worry, user. The user's healing power is working to heal your spine.]
He was glad to hear that, but as the giant lumbered towards him, Johnny begged for the power to hurry up and do its job. He didn't want to die right after he was healed. Soon, the giant was looming over him with a twisted smile on his face as he looked down on Johnny. Johnny could only whimper as he prepared himself for what was about to come.
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Hello everyone. I forgot to add a note in the previous chapter. Anyway, I just want to thank all my readers who have been following along. I really appreciate it. Now for the news you have been waiting for.Johnny's story has ended and turned out shorter than Billy's story like I expected. With its end, I currently have no ongoing stories on this site.I've decided I'll take a break from the site. How long the break will last I'm not quite sure. Hopefully, the break won't be long, and I have a new story up within the year, but we will have to see.Just like with Rise of the Demon King: Caleb Gonzales's Rat Race and Rise of the Desperate: Billy Wood's Save and Restart System, I might do a rewrite or remake of it.If I do go through with this idea, then I'll just immediately go to eBook and paperback, and it would be very different from the one here. We will have to see, and I'll let everyone know.As I stated before, if you want to stay in contact with me, you'll probably have to use F*
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Johnny blinked. "Wait. EVeryone?"He couldn't believe what Frank was saying. Was he crazy? Did he really want to let the whole world know about the monsters being able to receive messages from the system? It would be complete chaos. Johnny was exactly advocating to tell no one. Far from it, but he couldn't see how it would help anyone to inform the public about this information."Well, not everyone," Frank said. "I'm referring to the authorities as this is a matter of security.""Will they take it seriously?" Johnny asked."It's hard to say. It's possible everyone will think it's a joke, but it's also possible that some will take the warning seriously," Frank said."I see," Johnny simply said."If that's all, I'm going to take my leave and let you get some rest," Frank said as he stood up.Johnny nodded. "Got it."Right as Frank was about to go out the door, he said, "Actually, there are some people who want to talk to you if y
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Johnny's eyes snapped open as he sat up abruptly. His mind was moving at several miles per hour as he scanned his surroundings. He had to stop her before she got away. However, the monster was nowhere in sight. He wasn't sure how long he had been out cold, but he supposed it was a bit much to expect the monster to linger just because he told her to stop.More importantly, he was no longer in that place considering the lack of lava. Taking a good look at his surroundings, he deduced that he was back in his own world, which set him on edge. How did he get back? As he wondered who or what had brought him back, the door to the room swung open. He stared at the sight of Frank leading the backs of doctors and unknown men."Johnny, you're awake," Frank said as he rushed over to check on him.A tad bit uncomfortable with how Frank was acting, Johnny asked, "Frank, what happened?"Frank grimaced. "It's a bit of a long story. First, we should make sure you're okay."As soon as he said that, Fra
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Chapter 92: True Form
As Johnny stared at his mother, wondering why he felt uneasy about the whole thing, it finally clicked. "You're not my mother.""What are you talking about? Of course I'm your mother," she said.Johnny shook his head as he took on a relaxed stance. "No, you're not. I don't know why you're pretending to be here, but you should just give up now. It's not going to help you in the long run."The woman also dropped her stance and shrugged her shoulders as she said, "Well, this is unexpected. How did you know?"Rather than admit that it was just his gut instinct, he said, "I have no reason to tell you.""I suppose I should have figured you would say that," she said calmly.She was far too calm for his liking. He knew nothing about it here other than she was a fake, which didn't mean much in the end. It wasn't like he would have gone easier even if she was his mom. However, it did explain why she killed his father without batting an eye, but it begged the question of where his real mother wa
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Chapter 90: Meeting the Family
While Johnny didn't like the idea, he didn't have much of a choice. Sticking around wasn't going to do anything except waste time and put himself in possible danger. With no one else with him, he had no one he could rely on if he was suddenly attacked by a bunch of monsters, which was a serious risk. He didn't want to take that risk."Where do we meet up?" Johnny asked."We'll try to continue with the plan and head for the head of the family's office," Frank said.Just as Johnny was about to protest that idea, he heard a loud animalistic roar. He frantically checked his surroundings and didn't see anything. Before he could feel relieved, he heard screams and shouts on the other side. He placed his hands on the rubble, hoping to at least find a small opening to get a better look at what was happening."Frank? What's going on? Are you okay?" Johnny asked frantically.There was no response except more shouting and fighting. He was completely in the da
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Chapter 89: Confronting the Burns Family
Even though Johnny had said he wasn't going to let the matter go, wasn't it a bit much to storm the Burns family's home just days after his decision? He thought it would take a couple weeks to prepare. They couldn't take down such a powerful family in just a few days. What was everyone thinking? He wondered if they all had lost their minds."Johnny, is something the matter?" Frank asked as the car headed for their intended destination. "You don't look good.""I just can't believe we're moving in now," Johnny said."You have nothing to worry about. Everything has already been sorted out," FRank said."Are you really sure we're good to go?" Johnny asked."You have nothing to worry about. The plan was already in motion before you decided to throw your hat in the ring. It's been modified to include your involvement," Frank said.Frank might have said it to reassure Johnny, but it didn't in the slightest. Johnny had been at the meeting discussing
