********** Well, this is my first time writing a novel, also English isn't my first language. Would love if you guys drop a comment on my mistakes and which plotline deserve to be amend. With your helps am sure this novel will definitely be great. Thank you for reading.
Chapter 10With that statement said, she plunges towards the old cautious man.Her right-hand fingers made a gripping sign in the air, and then dark energy suddenly gathered around her fingers, as soon as she reached the old man she clenched her fingers tightly around the energy and hurled a fist towards his side rib, the old man seems wary of the dark energy as he leaps backwards in a quick but smooth manner and dodge, to which the girl smirk and mutter "detonate".The energy which has condensed into a small ball in her fist explodes and scatters like fog towards the direction of the old man who hastily uses his energy to generate a barrier around him.Some unlucky people were touched by the energy and then a bizarre scene happened.They suddenly collapse with howls and screams for help as their skin slowly starts blistering off, but none can help them as everyone quickly distances themselves from the people, afraid of also getting contaminated."Mummy!, Please someone help my mom she
Chapter 11Staring at his wife in this timeline Crimson felt hurt, betrayed, powerless and useless.He loved her and had done a lot of things to keep her close to him, ever since they were kids they had been in love but now that things suddenly become tough for him, she hastily abandoned him and hopped into another greener pasture, {CJ was right, Your best friend or family member true nature will be exposed when he has power and same goes for people who called you friends or comrade, you will be abandoned by them when you have no more value}.{If only I had power such thing could have happened, I would be able to acquire any type of woman I want, govern any kingdom and do whatever makes me happy} he thought as he looked at his now ex-wife, who was giggling and smiling at sir McMuffin like a teenage girl in love.Feeling hatred and disgust for her, he turned and wished to leave them, but how could McMuffin let him go freely?He suddenly heard sir McMuffin's grumpy voice call out to him
Chapter 12[U.P.L.U. system: Host info...]Name>> Crimson walkerRace>> Pure humanClass>> NonLvl>> 0/50+MP>> 0%HP>> 78%Exp>> 50/100Strength: 15 [+8]Defence: 10 [+8]Agility: 12 [+8]Speed: 15 [+8]Perception: 18 [+8]Endurance: 10 [+8]Fatigue: 10 [+8]Intelligence: 30 [+8]Skills[Active: 0][Passive: 0][Quest] [shop]~Mission complete~✓With the boost of 8+ stat to all his attributes Crimson felt a surge of energy running through his veins, it was a new sensation to him.{This reminds me of the first time I broke through while cultivating in the Alvis kingdom, the flow of energies in my meridian...}.The thought flashed through Crimson's head as he quickly shook his head and concentrated on the change happening inside his body.Suddenly the system hologram appears in his vision and then shows this word.[ Primordial bloodline awakening... 0.09%...1.9%...4%...12%...23%...34%...41%...50%...55%...].His arm muscles contract and become more reformed, his skin gradually changes as
Chapter 13Being held in the air, Crimson almost choked from suffocation as veins pultrude out of his neck.He knew that he wouldn't last more than 3 minutes without air, thankfully back in the trial of mortals Crimson learned an art which allowed him to hold his breath even in water.Although it needed to be cultivated and merged with the lungs to fully show its uses, being in a desperate situation Crimson decided to try and see if it could help even for 2 minutes.Seeing the man wasn't looking at him Crimson took a deep breath and suddenly relaxed his neck and with a swift and quick motion used his hands to get hold of the traitor's hand which held his neck, the traitor was surprised by the sudden turn of events and before he could react, Crimson uses the hand to support his body as he sends a kick straight to his seriously injured rib.Although Crimson just awakened his talent but mind you, he trained in martial arts and had his bones strengthened by both drugs and now the system pu
Chapter 14"Hello dear, my name is Crimson and I would like to discuss a few words with you." Crimson gave a light bow to her as he explained.Jane whose emotions were still in a jumble didn't heed his word, as she yelled at him with her snort and puffy eyes."What do you want? Leave me alone! I don't wanna talk to you or anyone else!"Crimson wasn't stunned{Sure enough, as a teen who hasn't undergone such a brutal side of humanity, it's complicated for her to take it, especially when it entangles her mother.} With such thoughts, Crimson flash her a radiant smile as he says with a soothing tune."Hey, I'm sorry for what just transpired, believe me, I know how it feels to be le...""You don't know a damn thing about it! No one does. Do you know how it feels? Have you ever lost someone so dear to you?! Do you know..." Jane yells at him, cutting him off rudely.Crimson didn't converse as he sat down and let her let loose her emotions, {The more you vent the lesser you feel angry, vent it
Chapter 15"Strange, did someone just say something about me?"Gustave muttered as he clenched the wooden saber in his left hand while wiping the sweat with the other.In just one day a lot of things transpired. After discovering that he was in an unusual globe with an extraordinary system.Gustave felt like exploring it but just like any youngster, he knew he was vulnerable.Mixed with the 'previous him' having his sea of consciousness destroyed, Gustave decides to fabricate a tale and make it look like his sea of consciousness wasn't destroyed.The doctor and nurses were alarmed by it, as they were the ones who executed the operation and were convinced his sea of consciousness was destroyed.But somehow miraculously it was mended, rendering them to execute another experiment to ascertain it.Surprisingly even his clavicle and scapula (shoulder blade) which was severed during the assault seem to have miraculously recovered.*******Gustave shook his head as he glanced at the system fl
Chapter 16After traversing it, they emerge in a unique space and unlike the first one this one held a planet filled with volcanoes.But encircling the planet were 5 hundred million demons glaring at them hungrily.The surrounding was blanketed with total darkness, there was no stars, sun or moon, making it look like a space void of light except for the volcanic world.The five hundred million demons were in different shapes, some looked like hellhounds, succubus, liches, undead, demonic dragons, lycanthropes, vampires and so on.Some were weird species like the one which has the head of a snake but the body of a lion, or one with the head of a chicken and two horns pultrude from its head.Its body was covered in a black carapace which protected him from attack, its body was strangely a combination of bat wings and fly legs."What do you think Hades,? Can you use the dark vjiaria yoke to reseal the planet? I'm confused on how this much of a demon's escape during this short time phrase.
Chapter 17The lich took this opportunity to tear through space and emerge above the planet, he knew his dragon would be able to handle them.(Editor: I thought he was gonna deal with the devourer?)Having a detailed look, there seems to be a bubble-like barrier covering the planet. That was the seal, it is known to restrain the demon powers to a mere advanced tier and also barricade them from departing the planet.It was unidentified which technique the demon god used to make a small tear on the barrier which allowed most of the minors to break out.Without further delay, Hades suddenly pull out something from space itself.It was a dark book with a dark and eerily frigid aura.There was a chain fastened around the heavy book.Hades infused his energy into it, making it discharge more of the cold aura, the chain suddenly started trembling with a rattling creak, it was like the chain was about to be severed by an invisible force.Roar!!!While Hades was busy, the Immortal master who wa