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My father told me that we need the second purple crystal for an effective war against King Selem my brother. After thinking about everything that was happening, I came up with a plan to go back to Kingdom and ask my brother were the purple crystal is or where he was hiding it because I know it is still in his disposal.The next morning, I told my parents about it but my dad refused and said I will never go back to Khah Kingdom again until he becomes king. So we thought about other ways to get to my brother in the prison to enquire about the purple crystal and then I remember Chef Jeon that helped me pass through the second gate when I was trying to escape from Khah Kingdom.Father, I know someone who could help us, his name is Kh Jeon, he is the king’s personal chef, he helped me escape when I was trying to run away and I know he will surely help me again but the problem is how to get to him.My mum suggested that we send someone from Evive Kingdom who will apply to work as a cook for
I was in my room when Chef Jeon walked in carrying my food, I was surprised because he used to give the food to the guard or his son at my door to send to me and still come later to take the dishes and plates from his son when I was done eating and he has never enter my room before, but what suddenly happened that he decided to enter my room today and to serve me my food by himself?Is something wrong or he wanted to talk to me about something, I know he can’t just come into my room just like that for the first time or has my father introduced another set of rules that I am not aware of?As he is used to making rules and commanding peoples as if they were slaves or maybe they are actually slaves to him based on how he treated my mum.I saw thinking while my eyes were on Chef Kh Jeon surprisingly and lost in my thoughts when his voice jerked me out of the wonder land.My princess, “your food is ready and served just the way you want it”, he said with a smile.I returned the smile and a
After entering her room to serve her food, I noticed she was shocked seeing me in her room and she must have found out that my son was the one standing at her door as her guard.I was a little uncomfortable the way she was staring at me but I have to behave as if it was normal and my coming was just to deliver the food.My plans was successful until she became curious on why I entered her room for the first time in six years since she knew the difference between good and evil, she asked me why I came to her house, I quickly answered her and ask her to try to find the letter her mom dropped on her bed the day she left and she should make sure she reads it, that when she do she knows where to find me and what to do next.All we could do now is just to wait and see whether our plans will yield a good result and whether she will be able to break the spell and read the letter and then we will all continue with the second plan, I briefed everyone.They were all happy as they heard I success
Are you the young girl that was sent by my mum Queen Clara?Yes, my princess.Are you very sure the person you met is my mother the queen of Khah Kingdom?Yes my princess, she was with King Whune and His Queen, the former King of Khah Kingdom who escapes an assassination conspired against him by some wicked people from this Kingdom, that’s all I know for now.So what do my mums really ask you to do?She asked me to come to Khah Kingdom and look for Chef Kh Jeon and explained everything to him that he will know what to do after hearing what I have to say and she also asked me to tell Chef Kh Jeon to ask you to read the letter she left on your bed when she was trying to escape.She said you should find a way to get to her brother Prince Wgheneo who has been in prison for over 12 – 15 years now and enquire of him where the second purple crystal is because that is the only thing that has the power to make her return and to set him free form the prison of Khah Kingdom but without that, sh
After entering my room I jumped in excitement and I have to lie low for some time just to erase whatever suspicion my father must be having.I started walking around the walls of the palace every morning and evening and most times when my father has a business with some influential persons in the kingdom and outside the kingdom.I will make sure I am there not because of what they are discussing which my father thought was the reason I was there.I was looking for the perfect opportunity to gain access to the king’s prison where Prince Wgheneo was kept but for now, I will just study the movements of all the guards and my father King Selem.In the few weeks that I have spent in the palace hall where my father hosts his guests I realized how much Khah citizens are suffering based on the taxes they were paying and the way they are being treated as slaves in their own father’s land where they were supposed to enjoy and stay safely.They do not even have a say, now I realized why it was so
I was surprised when Princess Diana came to me and asked me ‘why is the purple crystal so important that her grandparents couldn’t return to Khah Kingdom without it and the reason why her father never mentioned anything about it and about her grandparents since I was born.Khah Kingdom was the smallest village in the East/West regions of the earth and without a Head or a king to supervise and judge it’s affairs and the village has no name because the citizens of the village didn’t see a need of giving the small village a name as everyone in the entire earth knew that the best name to describe Khah Kingdom is by its size.After several years a boy called Khah Phime grew up to become a strong and intelligent man who was desperate to become successful.Khah Phime was twenty eight years when he decided to meet with the few elders existing in the small village and asked them why is the village not growing as they were not under any siege nor duress.They gave their response that the land
The princess left the room after Chef Kh Jeon told me about the plan of my escape, I thanked Chef Kh Jeon for helping me and for making my stay less stressful I promised him that everything he did will be tabled before King Whune and His Wife and will be rewarded when he return.I left the room and managed to sneak into the truck and cover my body with crops, the only part which was not cover was my head as to enable me breath.In less than five minutes we were moving, I was happy but still scared whether the guards at the third gate of Khah Kingdom will want to search the truck.We got to the third gate and I was relieved he wasn’t even stopped but he was granted passage as he warmly greeted them and they gave their salutations.I managed to drop out at the entrance of Evive Kingdom as I did not want anyone to see me in the truck as to avoid endangering the life of the delivery guard. I walked into Evive Kingdom and went straight to King Whune and Queen Clara who saw me and ran towa
I left my chambers few minutes before the commencement of the chief’s meeting I have today, I walked to my throne in the big hall and sat down.One of my guards came to me and told me that they heard a noise yesternight but searched the whole place but couldn’t find anything but the noise seemed to be coming from inside the prison hall but after thorough searching, he couldn’t find anything suspicious.What about the other guards who were on duty with you?They were asleep your highness?What do you mean asleep?They seem to have been drugged with the wine they took.I became worried because I know this have not been heard before in the palace of my guards being drugged and unidentified noise coming from the prison hall.I remembered that my wife and sister Queen Clara have just escaped few months ago and her brother, my step-brother Prince Wgheneo is still in the prison and have not given me any information about the second purple crystal which he claimed to have lost.I stood up and