Thenma blinked slowly as his eyes fluttered open. The sterile smell of antiseptic filled his senses, and the ceiling above him was blindingly white. Pain radiated from his ribs and thigh, forcing him to stay still. He realized he was in the hospital, his body aching with every breath.
A soft rustle beside him caught his attention. Thenma turned his head slightly and saw Adeline sitting in the chair next to his bed. Her face looked gaunt, her once lively eyes now dull and lifeless. The cuts on her face from Evan’s abuse were faint but still visible, casting a shadow over her usually glowing appearance. Her shoulders were hunched, and her clothes were wrinkled, as though she hadn’t left his side for days. Adeline noticed Thenma was awake and stood up, her movements slow and heavy. She looked at him for a long moment before speaking, her voice barely above a whisper. "How… how are you feeling?" Thenma’s throat tightened as guilt washed over him. He tried to answer, but the words stuck in his throat. How could he tell her how much pain he was in when she had suffered so much more? "I'm glad that you finally open your eyes, Thenma. You've been unconscious for three days," she said, as Thenma could see her reliefs but the brightness was dull. Then he knew that there were so many complicated things that his sister had in her head, making it harder for Thenma to held his guilt. "I… I’m sorry, Adeline," he croaked, his voice hoarse. "This… this is all my fault." Adeline didn’t respond. She just stood there, her hands trembling slightly as she clenched the edge of her hospital pajama. She wasn’t the same bright, spirited girl she used to be. Evan had stolen that from her, and it was all because of him. Because he was too weak to protect her. Before Thenma could say anything else, the door opened, and Collin walked in, carrying a small bag of food. He froze for a second, as Thenma who finally woke up was sending him a big happiness to surprise himself. Collin's face lit up with relief when he saw Thenma awake, he ran to hug Thenma who was still lying in the ward, forgetting about the fruit that had fallen on the floor. "Oh my God, thank you... thank you. I thought I was going to lose you, Thenma!" Collin said with relief tears. He accidentally nudged Adeline's hand who was standing behind him, making him realize Adeline's presence and making him try to calm down again. That relief quickly turned into sorrow when he noticed Adeline’s expression. "Thank God you’re awake," Collin said again in softly, wiping his tears and picking the fruits on the floor. "I was worried you wouldn’t pull through." Thenma didn’t respond, he felt a little relief but his eyes flicking back to Adeline, who still hadn’t moved or spoken more. He felt a tear slip down his cheek. "I should’ve protected her, Collin… I should’ve protected her." Collin’s jaw clenched as he placed a comforting hand on Thenma’s shoulder. "This wasn’t your fault, Thenma. This was Evan’s doing. That bastard and his friends…" His voice trailed off, filled with anger. "They’re the ones who should pay for this. Not you." "I need to make them pay," Thenma whispered, his voice trembling. "There has to be something I can do. I can’t just… let this go." Collin hesitated, glancing at Adeline before responding. "Thenma, Evan’s family is one of the most powerful in Boston. My family’s business even relies on them to some extent. If you try to get to Evan, my parents will pull me away from all of this before you can touch him. You’ll be alone." Thenma’s fists clenched in the sheets, his knuckles turning white. "Alone? I’ve always been alone! And now Adeline’s… she’s like this because of me. I have to do something, Collin. I can’t just sit here and do nothing!" Collin sighed, stepping back. "I get it, Thenma. I do. But even if you want revenge, you don’t have the power to take him down. Not on your own." Thenma’s face crumpled as fresh tears spilled over. He looked at Adeline, who had turned her gaze to the window, staring out blankly. He wasn’t crying for himself anymore. He was crying for her. "If I had one chance, just one," Thenma said, voice cracking, "I would take it. I’d do it for her, not for me." Collin frowned, worried. "Thenma…" "Excuse me..." A nurse came in, and her face looked like she had expected something when she saw Adeline in the room. "Miss Adeline, should we go back now?" The nurse approached Adeline, leading her back to her room with a gentle touch on the shoulder. The nurse looked at Collin and said, "I was worried when you wanted to go out for a while, I don't think I can watch over Miss Adeline properly without your help, Mr. Collin." "Oh, ya... I'm back, I'll take care of Adeline." "How is Adeline?" Thenma asked before the nurse left. "Her body has better a lot, but we still have to keep an eye on Miss Adeline until she is completely ready. Thanks to Mr. Collin who always looks after her, and follows Miss wherever she goes. Yeah... even though she only goes to this room to wait for you to wake up every day. Oh yeah, I'll call your nurse right away, Mr. Thenma." Nurse leaves, taking Adeline with her. That leaves Collin and Thenma who know went quiet, staring up at the ceiling with an unreadable expression. His lips parted slightly as if he were seeing something. "Collin…" Thenma mumbled, his eyes narrowing. "Do you see that?" "See what?" Collin asked, confused. "The screen… on the ceiling," Thenma said, his voice barely above a whisper. Collin looked up, but there was nothing there. He shook his head slowly. "There’s no screen, Thenma. What are you talking about?" "It’s right there," Thenma insisted, his gaze still fixed on the invisible display. "I can see it." Collin’s concern deepened, and he placed a hand on Thenma’s shoulder. "I’m going to call the doctor. Just… just stay here, okay?" As Collin left the room, Thenma’s gaze shifted, and to his shock, the hologram screen moved from the ceiling to hover directly in front of his face. [Congratulations, you have become a User! Ready for an epic and festive journey of revenge?] Thenma blinked, his heart racing. "What… what is this?" he muttered under his breath. The text on the screen flashed and changed. [Enjoy a registration reward to start your journey, Revenger! Reward: $1,000,000] Thenma’s eyes widened in disbelief. His breathing quickened as his phone, resting on the nightstand, began to vibrate. With trembling hands, he grabbed it and stared at the screen. The amount was real. "$1,000,000…" Thenma whispered, his heart pounding in his chest. "Where did this… how is this…?" He glanced around the room, but no one else seemed to notice the holographic screen. It was as if it only existed for him. Thenma swallowed hard and took a deep breath. "Who… what are you?" he asked aloud, trying to keep his voice steady. The system responded immediately. [I am the Great Revenger System, a tool designed to fulfill the greatest wishes of those who seek revenge. I have chosen you as my new User] Thenma’s mind raced. "So… what can you do? How can I use you to get my revenge?" [You must complete the tasks I give you] the system explained. [In return, you will receive rewards—money, power, skills, and knowledge that will enable you to exact your revenge] "Tasks?" Thenma repeated, his eyes narrowing. "Like what?" [Your first task] the system said, [restore your health points. They are dangerously low after your recent injuries. Completing this task will grant you a bonus] Thenma’s thoughts whirled. If this was real—if this system could help him—then he could finally do something about Evan and his friends. He could make them pay for what they did to Adeline. "Do you know who I want revenge on?" Thenma asked cautiously. The screen flickered, and a list appeared before him. At the top was Evan Clauster, along with a detailed profile of his background and the reasons for Thenma’s hatred toward him. Thenma’s heart pounded in his chest. This was real. This system knew everything. "Yes," Thenma whispered, his voice growing stronger. "I’ll do whatever it takes." The system responded with a new task. [First, increase your health points. Once completed, we will begin the true path to vengeance] With newfound determination, Thenma pushed himself up, ignoring the pain that shot through his body. He had no time to waste. He had to get started. Collin returned just as Thenma struggled out of bed. "Thenma! What are you doing? You’re still injured!" But Thenma didn’t stop. His eyes blazed with purpose. "I’m going to get stronger, Collin. I’m going to make them pay." "Thenma!" Collin called after him, but Thenma was already out the door, leaving behind his hospital room and the life of weakness he no longer intended to live.Related Chapters
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Penelope was sprawled across the mattress like she owned the place, dressed in one of Evan’s shirts, her hair cascading over her shoulders. Her eyes flicked to Thenma as he entered, her expression momentarily startled before it shifted into her usual look of disdain. "Oh, I didn't see ya there," she drawled, a mocking smile playing on her lips. "What are you doing here, Thenma? Did you finally grow a spine, or are you here to get humiliated again?" Thenma stepped further into the room, his jaw tight. "I’m here for Evan. Where is he?" Penelope scoffed, sitting up slightly. "He’s not here, obviously. He’s out at some fancy party with his dad, like you know, he's not an ordinary person with ordinary daily things to do; wake up, survive, then sleep." Penelope still bragging about Evan, forgetting about the evil side of him. No wonder, since they were shared the same devil so they were a perfect match. "What’s the matter, Thenma? Did you really think you could come here and challenge
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The kitchen was a mess. Flour dusted every surface, bowls and spoons piled high in the sink, and the warm scent of cinnamon, nutmeg, and ginger lingered heavily in the air. But amidst the chaos, there was triumph.For the first time since he’d started this maddening quest, the cookies tasted like Mary’s. Thanks to Katarina who added a secret ingredient and finally Thenma discovered the 'magic' his mom used to add into her gingerbread. Also thanks that he let Katarina stuck around. Thenma would finally be relief and took Adeline home with his wish on while Katarina was left in the apartment after she said she would take care of the room before Adeline arrived.The following morning, Thenma stood outside the hospital, waiting for Adeline. His breath clouded the crisp winter air, but his spirits were high. He clutched a thermos of coffee in one hand, already picturing Adeline’s face when she tasted the gingerbread cookies. It had been too long since he’d seen her smile.When she finally
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Thenma stood in the middle of the chaos, wearing a plain black apron over his casual clothes, his hands dusted with flour. He leaned against the counter, staring at the latest batch of gingerbread cookies cooling on a rack. They looked perfect—golden brown with a crisp edge and soft center—but when he bit into one, his expression soured.“Still not right,” he muttered, tossing the half-eaten cookie into the trash.The taste wasn’t bad—far from it. But it wasn’t her gingerbread. No matter how many times he adjusted the spices or changed the baking time, the result felt hollow. He rested his head on his flour-dusted hands, letting out a groan.The scent of cinnamon and nutmeg brought Thenma back to a simpler time—a cold winter night in their cramped, run-down apartment. Their mother, Mary, stood by the tiny oven, her apron frayed at the edges. She was humming softly, her hair falling in loose strands from the bun she always wore.“Mom, can we help?” young Adeline asked, her voice full o
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"What do you mean?" Thenma asked, and Katarina answered easily."I’m going to help you with your mission… accompany you? Assist you? I see it as paying you back."Thenma stayed silent for a moment, making Katarina think he was considering it, but then he replied, "No."Katarina frowned in confusion. "No…?""You don’t need to do anything to help me. You know that," Thenma said, glancing at Katarina’s arm, which was wrapped in thick bandages. "This journey is extremely dangerous. I won’t let anyone end up like Adeline just because they tried to help me.""But you’ve already helped me. You freed me from sleepless nights filled with anxiety. I can’t just let you go empty-handed."Thenma looked at Katarina, his cold, faint smile a silent plea for her to understand. "You’ve already helped me," he said. "Getting your father to cooperate with me is more than enough. Or… was that a lie?"Katarina quickly shook her head. "No. My father swore to me he’d help you."Thenma chuckled. He’d only been
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Thenma was taken aback by the sudden arrival of Penelope and Kato. They stood at the doorway, looking at him and Adeline with smug smiles. Their presence exuded an oppressive threat-if not for him, then it was undoubtedly magnified for Adeline.Holding a beautiful bouquet of flowers, Penelope stepped forward. "Sorry it took me so long to visit you, Adeline. I didn't think you'd go to such extremes. But because of that, I see now-you've learned our lesson well."Adeline froze, her face pale, her eyes wide with fear. The usually brave Adeline now looked like a drenched, helpless chick. Thenma grabbed Penelope and pulled her aside, his gaze burning with anger."How dare you... Have you no shame?" His voice was laced with menace and hatred. He couldn't believe Penelope and Kato had the audacity to show their faces in front of Adeline-the very reason she was in this state.But Penelope, unbothered, brushed his hand off."I'm just checking in, damn it. Why are you being such a pain? Kato br
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The hallway stretched before Thenma, sterile and dimly lit, each step echoing softly against the polished floor. His shoulder throbbed with every movement, the pain radiating through his body like a relentless reminder of the fight he had barely survived. His legs felt heavy, his breaths labored, but none of it mattered. Not now. Not when Adeline was finally awake.His fingers gripped the wall for support as he paused to steady himself, his mind racing with a mix of anticipation and relief. He pushed forward again, determined. The thought of seeing her after all these months fueled him, dulled the pain, and gave him the strength to continue.Finally, he reached the door. The plaque outside read ICU Room 14. Thenma hesitated for a brief moment, his heart pounding against his ribcage. He took a deep breath, clenched his fists to steel himself, and pushed the door open.The sight before him stopped him cold.Katarina was sitting beside Adeline’s bed, her figure silhouetted against the di
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Thenma’s eyes fluttered open, his head heavy as if weighed down by a thousand thoughts. Bright, sterile lights illuminated the room, and the distant hum of machinery filled the silence. The faint beeping of a heart monitor confirmed he was in a hospital.He tried to sit up, but his body protested. Pain radiated from his shoulder and torso, forcing him to settle back against the pillow. His mind raced as he struggled to piece together the events that led him here.Then it hit him—the warehouse, the fire, Julian.The memory of their brutal fight resurfaced, and a wave of satisfaction washed over him. He recalled Julian’s screams, the look of desperation on his face as Thenma delivered the final blow. For the first time in a long while, Thenma felt victorious.One of them. One of the bastards who ruined Adeline’s life had fallen.A lump formed in his throat. The victory wasn’t just for him—it was for her. For Adeline, his sister, who had endured more than anyone should. He clenched his f
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The warehouse was an inferno, the air thick with smoke and heat as the fire consumed everything in its path. Thenma's body trembled, his blood pooling on the floor beneath him. His vision blurred as his consciousness wavered, the knife embedded in his shoulder burning like molten steel.[WARNING: Life-threatening injury detected. Immediate action required.][Purchase defensive weapon (20 points)?][Activate self-healing mode (10 points)?]But Thenma's fading consciousness made it impossible to focus. His trembling gaze looking over the options as the panel glitched, the words distorting and disappearing before he could make a choice.No, not now... I can't lose here...Suddenly, a loud crack echoed through the warehouse. Julian staggered, clutching his head as a wooden stick struck him from behind. His eyes widened in pain and confusion, his grip on the knife loosening."What the—" Julian hissed, stumbling backward.Thenma blinked through the haze of pain, his gaze locking onto Katari