Rachel's POV
True to Dolores'words, it was actually colder outside Hagni.
As we rode down the lonely driveway, all I saw were tall trees by both sides of the road. Someone could even be easily killed and dumped here.
The more we drove into Brooklyn, the more nervous I got. This place just gave off some sort of bad energy.
" You don't look so good. You okay?" Dolores asked, breaking into my thoughts.
I tore my gaze from the trees and focused on her. But she wasn't staring back at me.
" It's my first time out of Hagni. You might think of this as cowardly, but being out here just feels off." I looked away, expecting Dolores to laugh.
I waited for several seconds but she didn't.
I looked back at her, searching for an expression on her face but I saw nothing.
" Put yourself together no matter what. We're visiting a man who lost his daughter. It'll be difficult to get anything out of him if we can't even put on bold faces." Dolores said, breaking the loud silence in the car.
"Mhmm." I nodded and mumbled.
After driving for over two hours, we finally pulled up in front of a house.
It was the first house we saw in Brooklyn. When we got out of the car, I looked ahead and I saw other houses, simply scattered around.
Dolores nodded at me and we started walking toward the front porch. Dolores went closer to the door and pressed the doorbell.
She pressed it over three times before the old wooden door creaked open. Dolores had somehow gotten used to ringing the doorbell, she wasn't expecting a response just yet.
She moved back a little and whoever opened the door, came out.
It was a man who looked like he was just approaching his fifties but still had turned completely grey. He had a shoulder length grey hair, grazing his still firm shoulders.
He was almost as tall as Dolores. He seemed like he recently shredded a lot of weight as the blue trouser and orange shirt looked too big to be fashionable.
As he stepped on the front porch with his brown leather boots, the old wood creaked noisily.
" Good day?" His voice came out questioning. Probably a little loud too, but not the aggressive kind of loud.
" Good day sir...." Dolores started, regaining her composure.
".... I'm Detective Dolores and this is Detective Rachael. We're both from Hagni police station. This is the residence of Mr Steven, right?"
Dolores sounded like she was being really careful with her words.
Which was odd as she never cared about the impact of whatever she said, on whoever she said it to.
" You are. How may I help you officers?" He was beginning to sound less confident.
I guess he was already hinting on our purpose for coming here. It ached that we had to remind him that Tina was really dead.
" We believe you already got the news of your daughter's death, Tina I mean." Dolores waited for his reaction, or response.
" I have." He bowed a little.
" If you don't mind sir, we would like to ask you a few questions. " Dolores said.
He shot up his head at Dolores, then turned to look at me.
I didn't know if I should have smiled at him, even just a little.
He hesitated for a while but slowly nodded in agreement.
" Sure." He muttered, opening the door for us.
In the end, I smiled at him before entering his house.
Unlike the outer part of the house, the inside was rather....... cozy?
While the iron roofing sheets looked like they were at the brink of falling apart, the beautiful grey ceiling in here just gave off a warm vibe.
The window outside, the steps, the door in fact everything else on the outside looked like they had been existing since the beginning of time.
But standing inside the house, made me doubt all of that.
While the living room was small, the kitchen was like a wide landscape.
The orange fluffy chairs looked new and shiny. From any angle you sat, you could get an amazing view of the big flat screen TV.
Until now, I didn't notice the sleeping cat at the center of the room. It was so beautiful, it added to the welcoming extravagance of the living room.
Again, I looked over at the kitchen and I just couldn't help but actually gawk.
The utensils were so well arranged, they looked like they were actually into printed on the dark themed wallpaper.
The counter was long and different fruits were neatly arranged.
Since I stood a little far away from the kitchen, I couldn't get to see more of its features.
" Nice house." I and Dolores said simultaneously.
We turned to look at each other and smiled, a little. I didn't know she was also giving her eyes a tour.
" Thanks." The man said, showing us to two of the orange seats.
He disappeared immediately, to the kitchen. Without wasting more time, Dolores and I brought out our writing pads, and recorder.
Mr Steven came back with two cups of mango juice. Well, I guessed it was mango since it looked too dull to actually be orange juice.
" It was all my daughter's idea, you
know." He said, sitting opposite us.
Yes, mango!
I realized I was right after taking a sip of the content in the glass.
" Impressive." Dolores commented.
She did all these?
Why was she living in that hell hole then?
" Before we get down to the questions I plan to ask, I need to ask you one thing." Dolores said, equally taking a sip.
Mr Steven adjusted on his seat, showing that we had all of his attention.
" Why didn't you come to claim your daughter's body? It's been days since her death but you never came to Hagni. Mr Steven Maxwell, we have been expecting you to show up. It was a lot of stress tracing Tina's source to you, you know?" Dolores sounded pissed but again, she had a flat unreadable expression.
She was right anyway. Mr Steven's action was actually vexing. It was so hard getting a lead.
How could he never bothered to have come?
Tch! He was just like my father.
" I...." He sighed deeply, his shoulders falling as he slouched on the chair.
" I know I should have come. I should have never left my daughter's dead body like that. But really, it's just a lot, you know. The one family I had left was finally gone. Initially, I found it hard to believe that my Tina was finally gone. But when I did, I just couldn't bring myself to actually coming to stare at her lifeless body, cold in a morgue." I swear I saw a tear escape his eye.
I could totally understand him now. It must have been very difficult to believe that one person you always longed to see, was actually dead.
" Well sir, if you don't mind, we could arrange a therapy session for you. If you're okay with coming all the way to Hagni over and over." Dolores offered, finally smiling a little.
Mr Steven only nodded, saying nothing else.
" Well sir, we did a little investigation after Tina's death. A summary of everything we found was that Tina was a sweet soul. What do you have to say about that?" Dolores asked him, scribbling something on her pad.
" Well, whoever told you that, told you the very truth. My daughter has always been so down to earth and caring. In fact, caring to a fault. She always saw the good in everybody, even when it wasn't there. Of her friend group, everyone in the city thought she was the nicest. She never had enemies, or brought trouble anywhere she went. If peace were a person, it would be my daughter." Mr Steven said, probably recalling the nice smiles Tina must have worn while helping the people she could.
I imagined that too.
" You said she had a friend group?" Dolores asked.
" Yes. They were cheerleaders in highschool. They called themselves blue angels."
Blue angels?
As I leaned on my legs, I felt a small sting on my thigh. It made me remember the nail with blue polish I had in my pocket.
" Sorry, did you say blue angels?"
Why was this name reminding me of the nail in my pocket?
" Yes?" He cocked his brows at me.
" Do you pictures of them? " I asked him.
He nodded and I could see Dolores flashing me a questioning look from my peripheral vision.
" Could we see them?" I asked him.
" S... Sure. " He stood up and disappeared through a small door I was just noticing.
He slammed the door shut, waking the sleeping cat. The cute adorable animal just scrambled away, into the kitchen.
I expected Dolores to ask me something in his absence but she didn't. She probably didn't want to mess up the recording.
He came back with a big album.
He handed it over to us. " That's an album for just Tina and her friends. There are singular pictures of each of the seven member friend group."
As we looked through the picture, I realized that Tina was actually really beautiful. She was a Blondie with pretty green eyes, just like her father's. Her smile was contagious because I smiled once I saw her smiling.
She was holding hands with a girl with brown framed nerdy classes. She looked pretty tall and beautiful.
" She's pretty." I said subconsciously.
" Thanks. " Mr Steven said.
I looked through the entire album, hoping to find any of the girls wearing blue nail polish but none of them did.
Why this creepy feeling then?
" Do you mind if we kept this?" I asked him.
" Sure. I always made several copies of each picture Tina took. I thought she was going to leave with any of them but she didn't leave with even one of the pictures. " Mr Steven sounded sad.
" Why didn't she? " Dolores asked Tina's father, taking the words out of my mouth.
" Tina left Brooklyn for Hagni three years ago. It was only two years after she graduated college and one of her friends died. It was a big shock to us all. It was a night before Brittany's niece's ninth birthday. She was found dead. Her wedding was only a week after, how sad?"
" I don't know if it was out of sadness but the rest of them just fled Brooklyn few weeks after Brittany's burial."
I and Dolores exchanged looks.
Brittany had died and Tina and the others had fled?
How Sketchy?
" Where was she found dead?"I asked Mr Steven.
" In the basement of her parents' house." Mr Steven asked.
" How was she found dead?" I asked him.
Tina's father looked at us, confused. He opened his mouth to say something but shut it back.
" How was she found dead sir? " Dolores asked him, sounding firm and very strict.
" In the most mortifying state. She was stabbed in her private areas and other parts of her body were scrapped off."
What?!
Writer's POVRachael and Dolores rounded up their question time with Tina's father. The man was taken aback by their sudden withdrawal but he kept his tongue tied. They left rather hurriedly, inviting Mr Steven to the station to claim Tina's body, and advised him to take up their free therapy offer.Dolores'mind kept going back to what the man had said. She was found...... what?!She sometimes stole glances at Rachael, wondering how she knew they were dealing with a serial killer.Even though she promised herself that she would wait for the autopsy results to prove that a serial killer was really on the lose, her discovery from Mr Steven made her do otherwise.How did this case get even shittier?Rachael on the other hand, felt partly relieved now that they were having more leads but at the same time, disappointed that their leads were all only confusing and interwhined.Well, what did she expect?She was a detective and it was her duty to untangle the tangled, decipher the mysterie
Writer's POVIt was difficult for Dolores to get a cab at such time of the day, from the point where she had alighted.So, she had to trek all the way to the bus station closer to Brooklyn high before being able to board a bus.Dolores couldn't help but wonder at the cases they had been handling.She had been a detective for several years but she had never experienced such a case before.There was no doubt that this was a case of revenge. So definitely, this killer must be someone that really knew The Blue Angels, especially Brittany.Dolores felt like if there was anyone who would be a bigger suspect in this case, it would definitely be the family members of Brittany.Once the bus stopped in front of the school, Dolores felt her heart begin to race.In all her years of practice as a detective, she had never felt so nervous about a death case or any case at all as she was right now.Clearing her throat and raising her shoulders, Dolores alighted from the bus, hoping she looked just as
Rachael's POVI've been so excited to get the results of the blood test since I returned from the morgue.I just had this great feeling that the samples weren't going to match."You seem really happy today." Christian walked to the dining with a bottle of champagne in his hand."So I thought we should celebrate it." He added, popping open the bottle."Awwww, that's so sweet of you." I smiled, going to the kitchen to grab some wine cups."I'm happy that finally, the love of my life has a smile on her face." Christian joked as he poured the wine into the cups.It was relieving to know that I was making progress with the case now and the best thing was that I had Dolores' support too.As long as we continued to work together, we will definitely bring that motherfucker to the law."So how are things going? Anything yet?" Christian asked once he had settled down."Yes, you were absolutely right about working alone. Not only was I able to get something from the crime scene, I was also able
CHAPTER 10Rachael's POVThe next day, I had woken up really early, even earlier than Christan.I was excited and nervous to know what Dolores had found out yesterday."You know you can take your time, right?" Christian smiled as I hurriedly buttoned my shirt."Honestly Chris, I don't think I can. Who knows? Someone else might die today, I'm just too nervous." The thought of hearing news of another death case today was too disturbing."Hey….." He walked toward me."The love of my life is smart and unbeatable. I know right now, it might seem like that killer….. whoever he is, is hard to get. But I know you're going to bring him to the light of the law, my love. I've seen you work before and I know you're going to end this with that killer behind bars, paying for Tina's death and anyone else he might have killed. Just take your time, okay? Don't over work yourself." He kissed me at the end of his speech."I've not really worked on anything like this before, but thanks. You're the best
Rachael's POV"You've got to be kidding me." Dolores whispered."What could this possibly mean?" I asked no one in particular, taking a closer look at the pictures."There are different possibilities Rachael. It was either Blue angels had some kind of tattoo that identified them. I mean, B could stand for Blue, right?" As she spoke, I took notes."Their group name was probably spelled out and since the killer was trying to cover up his tracks, he had cut off the part of their skin where the tattoo was made." I added to what she said."Clever." Dolores mumbled to herself but I heard her anyway."This only proved that we were right, someone was indeed after the blue angels. The only part we're still missing is who. It could be the same person who had murdered Brittany or it could be a different person who had a personal affair with the girls. And this person would most likely be someone taking revenge for Brittany's death." I noted down what I said to."But if this were the case, that w
Sounds of sirens filled the air. A small crowd had gathered in Hermes street, block 101 to be precised.Despite the heavy downpour, several more others still trooped into the flat of the deceased.Young women and men were curious to know what had happened, while the children were frightened by the loud noise of their neighbors, the sirens and the rumbling thunder.Before the early hours of the day, Tina's screams were heard. Well, she's been screaming a lot lately so the neighbors never really paid attention to her. Instead, they put on their ear blocks to reduce her screams.Old women hissed and rolled on their beds, young children covered their ears with their pillows, while the teenagers simply put on their headphones.For over a week, she's been acting off. Screaming steadily, acting weird with her neighbours, laughing out loudly at the stores and even getting really lean.They were all scared for her but they could barely afford a good apartment, they definitely couldn't take he
Tina's body had been taken for autopsy.Dolores believed she must have been killed before her body was tampered with like that.And also, they needed to know if there were any hand prints on Tina's body.Rachael had been eager to know the results.They had been to Tina's residence again, to question her neighbours but none of their testimonies were helping." Tina Maxwell was a lovely woman. She really loved kids and never missed an opportunity to treat them to cookies and wonderful stories."" She never had children, nor even a lover but she was really nice."" Everything changed a week ago. She started avoiding anyone, barely went out. The only thing she did was scream at odd hours, laugh like a maniac at the store. One time, she just stood out in the rain."" She was probably mentally sick before she died. Tina acted so unlike herself."Those were the only words they kept hearing from her neighbours.None of them knew about her background, family, job, nothing.According to them,Ti
Rachael's POVI stared down at the mug of coffee sitting on my table. I picked up the air conditioning remote and pressed a button.Wrapping myself with my hands, I shivered. Not at the chilly air in my room, but the current situation at hand.Today, staring at those bodies only brought painful memories, from the past.Everyone in the family had thought it was stupid of me to want to be a cop when there were many other careers I could pursue.In fact, we had a family business where I could work and have millions flood my account every week but then......The strong will power to make sure no one was unjustly killed like my mother, helped keep me focus.I was eight while my older sister was eleven when our mother had died.Before then, she fell really ill and was admitted in the city's Local hospital. Things became even tougher when our father divorced her on her sick bed.I still hate him for that though.Luck found us when she started getting better. My sister was happy she wouldn't
Rachael's POV"You've got to be kidding me." Dolores whispered."What could this possibly mean?" I asked no one in particular, taking a closer look at the pictures."There are different possibilities Rachael. It was either Blue angels had some kind of tattoo that identified them. I mean, B could stand for Blue, right?" As she spoke, I took notes."Their group name was probably spelled out and since the killer was trying to cover up his tracks, he had cut off the part of their skin where the tattoo was made." I added to what she said."Clever." Dolores mumbled to herself but I heard her anyway."This only proved that we were right, someone was indeed after the blue angels. The only part we're still missing is who. It could be the same person who had murdered Brittany or it could be a different person who had a personal affair with the girls. And this person would most likely be someone taking revenge for Brittany's death." I noted down what I said to."But if this were the case, that w
CHAPTER 10Rachael's POVThe next day, I had woken up really early, even earlier than Christan.I was excited and nervous to know what Dolores had found out yesterday."You know you can take your time, right?" Christian smiled as I hurriedly buttoned my shirt."Honestly Chris, I don't think I can. Who knows? Someone else might die today, I'm just too nervous." The thought of hearing news of another death case today was too disturbing."Hey….." He walked toward me."The love of my life is smart and unbeatable. I know right now, it might seem like that killer….. whoever he is, is hard to get. But I know you're going to bring him to the light of the law, my love. I've seen you work before and I know you're going to end this with that killer behind bars, paying for Tina's death and anyone else he might have killed. Just take your time, okay? Don't over work yourself." He kissed me at the end of his speech."I've not really worked on anything like this before, but thanks. You're the best
Rachael's POVI've been so excited to get the results of the blood test since I returned from the morgue.I just had this great feeling that the samples weren't going to match."You seem really happy today." Christian walked to the dining with a bottle of champagne in his hand."So I thought we should celebrate it." He added, popping open the bottle."Awwww, that's so sweet of you." I smiled, going to the kitchen to grab some wine cups."I'm happy that finally, the love of my life has a smile on her face." Christian joked as he poured the wine into the cups.It was relieving to know that I was making progress with the case now and the best thing was that I had Dolores' support too.As long as we continued to work together, we will definitely bring that motherfucker to the law."So how are things going? Anything yet?" Christian asked once he had settled down."Yes, you were absolutely right about working alone. Not only was I able to get something from the crime scene, I was also able
Writer's POVIt was difficult for Dolores to get a cab at such time of the day, from the point where she had alighted.So, she had to trek all the way to the bus station closer to Brooklyn high before being able to board a bus.Dolores couldn't help but wonder at the cases they had been handling.She had been a detective for several years but she had never experienced such a case before.There was no doubt that this was a case of revenge. So definitely, this killer must be someone that really knew The Blue Angels, especially Brittany.Dolores felt like if there was anyone who would be a bigger suspect in this case, it would definitely be the family members of Brittany.Once the bus stopped in front of the school, Dolores felt her heart begin to race.In all her years of practice as a detective, she had never felt so nervous about a death case or any case at all as she was right now.Clearing her throat and raising her shoulders, Dolores alighted from the bus, hoping she looked just as
Writer's POVRachael and Dolores rounded up their question time with Tina's father. The man was taken aback by their sudden withdrawal but he kept his tongue tied. They left rather hurriedly, inviting Mr Steven to the station to claim Tina's body, and advised him to take up their free therapy offer.Dolores'mind kept going back to what the man had said. She was found...... what?!She sometimes stole glances at Rachael, wondering how she knew they were dealing with a serial killer.Even though she promised herself that she would wait for the autopsy results to prove that a serial killer was really on the lose, her discovery from Mr Steven made her do otherwise.How did this case get even shittier?Rachael on the other hand, felt partly relieved now that they were having more leads but at the same time, disappointed that their leads were all only confusing and interwhined.Well, what did she expect?She was a detective and it was her duty to untangle the tangled, decipher the mysterie
Rachel's POVTrue to Dolores'words, it was actually colder outside Hagni. As we rode down the lonely driveway, all I saw were tall trees by both sides of the road. Someone could even be easily killed and dumped here.The more we drove into Brooklyn, the more nervous I got. This place just gave off some sort of bad energy." You don't look so good. You okay?" Dolores asked, breaking into my thoughts.I tore my gaze from the trees and focused on her. But she wasn't staring back at me." It's my first time out of Hagni. You might think of this as cowardly, but being out here just feels off." I looked away, expecting Dolores to laugh.I waited for several seconds but she didn't. I looked back at her, searching for an expression on her face but I saw nothing." Put yourself together no matter what. We're visiting a man who lost his daughter. It'll be difficult to get anything out of him if we can't even put on bold faces." Dolores said, breaking the loud silence in the car."Mhmm." I nod
Rachael's POVAll through my drive back to the station, I kept wondering if hoarding information from Dolores was a good idea.I mean, she was now interested in the cases and ready to give it her all.But then.....Something about her change was just too sudden. I shouldn't trust her just yet until she has proven that she had good intentions.I'll send the blood samples to my grandfather for tests, to see if they matched.Before returning home today, I'll take the nail to the morgue where the bodies are and will check them out.Even though this is nothing but a bleak lead, it's still something to me.Who knows?This might even lead me to something bigger.I hid the bag under my seat before getting out of my car.All the officers were busy, with files and cases; big and small ones.I met Dolores at her door, so there was no need to knock." Ma'am." I saluted her before having my seat as she proposed." Anything?" She asked, very interested."Nothing ma'am but I noticed something." I
Rachael's POVI didn't sleep until very early the next morning. When I finally woke up, it felt like I had only slept for seconds.Even though I felt Christian's warm kisses on my face, I refused to move.I only yawned when I heard him leave the room.Stretching, I opened my eyes halfway. I layed still on the bed, staring at the ceiling.Why was my career getting so difficult at such an early stage?I had only been promoted to detective three weeks before the first murder.Investigation would have been a lot easier if only Dolores actually took it personal like I did.For goodness sake! Two innocent women had lost their lives in the most gruesome way.Yet, she didn't care." I hope she's the third on the killer's list." I said, scoffing and rolling over on the bed.I smelled something nice and then, my eyes went open fully, immediately.There were roses on the other side of the bed, and a note too.Smiling, I reached for it." Even though I know you had woken up a long time ago, I jus
Rachael's POVI stared down at the mug of coffee sitting on my table. I picked up the air conditioning remote and pressed a button.Wrapping myself with my hands, I shivered. Not at the chilly air in my room, but the current situation at hand.Today, staring at those bodies only brought painful memories, from the past.Everyone in the family had thought it was stupid of me to want to be a cop when there were many other careers I could pursue.In fact, we had a family business where I could work and have millions flood my account every week but then......The strong will power to make sure no one was unjustly killed like my mother, helped keep me focus.I was eight while my older sister was eleven when our mother had died.Before then, she fell really ill and was admitted in the city's Local hospital. Things became even tougher when our father divorced her on her sick bed.I still hate him for that though.Luck found us when she started getting better. My sister was happy she wouldn't