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THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Sixteen : Alchemy
'Welp'"Okay ma'am. " Jake stood up slowly, while maintaining eye contact with her. He got to the entrance and paused just for a second before turning."What if it's not potioneering, I'm interested in ma'am " He said slowly with a smile."My apologies for been disrespectful earlier"."Continue speaking " Miss Banbee said calmly.He was still standing at the entrance as ge continued speaking."It's about alchemy"."Mhm, alchemy !" . "Come inside boy" she quickly said and pulled him in."Why alchemy ?" "What's going on ?" He asked, feeling the air had become tensed than it was before. She narrowed her eyes, signifying him to begin speaking. "Okay, okay". "It's all about my sister, I'm trying to find a cure for her" . He thought of lying, but decided not to. He had her attention and if she caught him lying then his plans would only get harder since she would no longer been interested in teaching him. Though he didn't want to let anyone know of his plan cause he had no idea who mad
THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Seventeen : The Homunculus
The constant chirping sounds of birds and the gentle morning breeze blew across the green lush field. It was a beautiful scenery as it had a clear blue sky and only a tree in the middle with a large expanse of vegetation covering it. One could call it a well tended garden, if it wasn't cared for by nature. It was breathtaking to behold as it screamed peaceful, to the point it looked so unreal. Despite the consistent chirping of birds, no living thing could be seen in sight. Slowly a child stood up from the ground, and pulled down the cloak covering its head. A pale white boy, with ocean blue eyes and white hair looked around before focusing up, staring at the sun for a moment. He just stood there doing nothing, like he was a character in toy story when a kid enters the room. Slowly he turned towards the centre, his attention at the only tree in the middle of the enchanting field; he walked towards it. As he walked closer to the tree, the chirping sounds got lower, until he was but a
THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Eighteen: The Lamb
"How dare you imbecile, mention such name before my presence!" SPURT!With wide shocked bulging eyes, the man stared at his chest where the thick branch was sticking out. It was so fast that he didn't see it but could only feel being stabbed from the back as he was lifted up from the ground and brought towards the tree. He could feel his life force slowly draining from him, the shine of his soul getting duller and his mortal flesh decaying at a rapid pace. His eyes held the silent plea of forgiveness and mercy but to no avail as he stared at his flesh stripped down from his bone gradually, and melting as soon as it touched the red liquid below. Death held him by the throat, he knew not when he was gone. "Oh revered one, spare us" Another spoke up, trying to save their skins from the impending disaster. Choosing words that would please her, he continued. "The imbecile, one of his greatest works has been activated." Immediately he spoke, the erratic movement of the tree branches st
THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Nineteen : Prime help
'Rank B talent?' he thought to himself as he dashed forward, reappearing before the huge guy and slashed at him with the sword in his right hand. CLANG!The sound of metal clashing against metal resounded in the hallway. "Huh, what the.." Jake took two steps back before jumping out of harms way as a metallic fist punched where he was standing early on. Its force creating a mini crater on the floor, as a small hole formed that light rays could pass through to the floor below. He could see cracks on the ground branching out from the hardened fist; it glowed red."A metallic fist, it seems you guys aren't concerned that I'm just a student since you are all going out." He said out loud with a hint of sarcasm in his voice.He turned to hear the female chuckling as she replied him:"Don't bitch about it" .His senses tingled as the hairs on his skin stood erect."Danger" He muttered under his breathe as he immediately ducked, going into prone position just as a blade whizzed past his hea
THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Twenty: Eat my fist!
Despite the intense pain, he willed himself to clear his mind, then concentrate as he began to absorb energy essence around him. In reality he was silent and hanging like a customised teenage mannequin with realistic features. His torturer shooked him around like Jake was woody, and he himself was Andy. Soon enough he heard one of his favourite sound.Ding![PRIME Notification][Talent identified: B rank][Ability identified: Metallic ][Skill identified: Iron fist ]'Copy ability and skill.'[Skill Copied.][Ability unable to copy, absence of free slot. Delete one ability to copy or buy another slot from store]"Ahh shit!" He groaned as he was lifted up from the ground as his attacker kept a firm hold on his injured arm, no longer twisting or pulling it since it wasn't working. There was no way he could stop the passive healing, as his energy essence was now slowly depleted under the constant heal and destroy action going on."Don't kill him, he's still a student!." the lady called ou
THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Twenty One : Meeting the man like Ebony Maw, or is Krillin ?
"You do know if you had just pulled your mask right from the start, we wouldn't have to go through all these" Jake said with a slight smile on his face."Don't you have a girlfriend?" She asked with an arched eyebrow."Just appreciating another of his creation, I think she would understand the need to always give thanks " He retorted."Give thanks ?" She asked curiously, this time with her lips quivering, threatened to break into a smile. "Yeah, give thanks to him for creating you" Jake said with a smirk on his face as she passed him."Oh boy, I'm way older than you " She laughed as she got to Brock and fed him an orange pill."Oh my lady, but love is just an age." "And prison is not for underage" she retorted. He laughed as he got the joke."And yeah, about that guy, we cool ?" Jake asked as she got up from her kneeling position. "Don't know, you ask him " she said as Brock began to stirr. He fluttered his eyes behind the mask as he muttered " Where am I ?" The silver haired l
THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Twenty Two : Talk with Prime
"Damn, today has been crazy".[Bet it has ]'Prime!''Thanks buddy, don't know what I would have done without you, and yeah forgive my earlier sarcastic comments'. Jake said as he remembered their past conversations. [No worries]'So Prime, I want to ask you a question, and you need to be truthful '[Is it compulsory?] 'Yes it's '[Okay]Jake walked off to an empty class, peering in, he wondered what it was used for since if had the same seating arrangement like a normal class but in terms of size, it was a smaller version. He didn't bother himself as he grabbed the nearest seat and sank his ass hard into it. He pulled two cold bottle ice tea from his dimensional storage. He always had one after every workout or training session, and what he just finished from was way more than a training, it truly called for two bottles.'Prime System'[PRIME] [Name: Jake French][Race: Human][Class: Warrior][Talent Rank: F Rank][Copied Talent Rank: B Rank][Ability: Nil][Copied Ability : Spee
THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Twenty Three : A bully and a lover
"You are a mommy boy right ? " a slim pale boy with dark shades stood up and faced Jake. "I'm pretty sure uch a sorry loser like you isn't supposed to be here " . He paused for a second and then turned around to face his colleagues, where about half of them had their attention fixed on him."I mean look at you boy, you are a fucking F ranker!". He screamed out loud, laughing maniacally with hands holding unto his stomach. Others joined him but in a loud way as they stared at him, then at Jake, wondering if he would reply.'Bastards like this don't know what someone passes through to achieve success'.He thought to himself as he sank into the comfy arm chair, his head against the soft head rest as he closed his eyes, paying no attention to him.The pale boy laughed and pointed at Jake one more time "Pretty sure Daddy's so rich that your pathetic talent is been covered by money. But you do know that far as it ain't gold, it won't glitter forever". He said with a smirk as some of the s
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One Hundred & Fifty Two: S rank ? Banshee?
*************************Present********************** "Jake, where are you ?" She softly muttered with arms crossed under her soft twin mounds. "Ava , it is." A hoarse deep voice called out her name as she instinctively turned towards the direction of the voice. If it was before, her brain would have received and processed the information; image, person, she had just seen. But now, all she could mentally recall was a blank image. It was like she was just gazing into a void. Gazing was the wrong word, but it felt like that to her. "You must be Master Patrick ?" Ava politely asked as Patrick stared at her with a bit of surprise. "Master ? Ha..ha..ha..Call me Patrick or Rick, but not Pat for short...you don't want Celine icy stare on you." "Alright Sir Patrick." He stared at the young lad who was roughly the same age as his young niece and smiled softly. "Alright Ava, I will be taking you on as my student, but first, why do you want to be my student?" "You offered
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Chapter One Hundred & Fifty One: No, she loved....
Ivanka softly moaned as she felt a tinge run down her spine, as Ava fingers had brushed right past her nipple, causing the bud to increase in size, properly spreading out, seeking the finger that stirred it from slumber. "Ava, my uncle would be coming around this morning." Ivanka broke the silence with gasps as her body shuddered, her cheeks crimson red. Ava fingers were slowly working magic on her. Perharps she didn't know the results her actions were getting, and she was just trying to feel the person talking to her. Was she attracted to ladies ? No, she loved penis. But she did know that it was inevitable for one's nipple not to straighten up like a little soldier when touched abruptly, especially early in the morning. Her reminder of her uncle coming was intended to put a pause on Ava unintentional fondling. "Ohh." Ava softly whispered as her hand left Ivanka's breast and caressed her smooth face. "Thank you for all you have done Ivanka, I'm forever grateful
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Chapter One Hundred & Fifty: Class & Skills(2).
"...." 'Fuck!' Jake inwardly screamed as he was felt further violated, but he knew it was the truth. His class fell under the common ranks. It was said that classes that could be assigned where common classes. Of course, everyone starts off with a common class, like Ava his lover was a lancer. It was simple. The moment you pick a class, it becomes mentally engraved in you when you begin to train in such class. Now if there's common class, then there's certainly a special class category. Special classes are classes that one could either have by luck which was similar to been born the child of a sitting president. Or one could get it after unlocking his or her class and then such class evolves to become a special class. Everyone had a class but it remains inactive. Some people don't even unlock it till they take their last breathe. The moment you unlock it, it becomes active and your class gives you one special skill. Just like Rafeal Rondo, the vice- captain of The Pearl's, who
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Chapter One Hundred & Forty Nine: Class & Skills (1)
*******************Flashback************************* Zeus turned to him almost at dusk and spoke to him for the first time since they departed from his friends. his first words were : "You are weak." He wasn't expecting that, but he knew he was weak. Yes he had a broken ability and an overpowered system, but it didn't mean he was invincible. Prime might be invincible but he, Jake wasn't. It would be fool Hardy to place one's strength on his system, what if his system fails ? Though his system was him, but it didn't change the fact that he lost his last fight and almost lost those who he cared about. To prevent the past from happening, he needed to get stronger, cause deep down he had a feeling that the enemies he faced before was nothing compared to what laid ahead of him. So when Zeus told him his training was going to be toying the path of life and death, he didn't argue or back down from the challenge. But what got his eyes widened was the period he was going to spend, a mini
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Chapter One Hundred & Forty Eight: His Name Is Zeus.
Tap Tap Tap Quickly tapping some pressure points in his body, Jake felt the energy essence coursing through his veins; he felt alive. 'Exapansion.' 'Metallic.' Immediately his body expanded, each limbs growing as large as a small car. A metallic sheen spreading rapidly acros his body, as it ate away the cold blisters forming on his naked skin. Bang! His body slammed heavily at the bottom of the mountain and was buried by the oncoming avalanche. Puff! Breathing in deeply, he forcefully shot out air from his nostrils as he remained buried in the snow, his nose rapidly taking in air as well as energy essence from the environment. And for the second time in his life, he had to dig himself out after been buried alive. **********************Flashback********************** He remembered when he woke up and saw Mrs Banbee, Daphne, the pretty red head; Ivanka and an old man who's eyes adored the older woman more than fear for his life. After defeating the messengers
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Chapter One Hundred & Forty Seven: Time Flies By (2)
The moment Ava heard Daphne voice, she felt weak, her body melted into the arms of her friend who slowly rubbed her back softly. "Daphne,...is...th..at you ?" She croaked softly as Daphne hugged her tightly and whispered a "Yes" in her ears. She cried out more, her hands wrapped around a lady she saw as a friend and a sister, her middle finger staining Daphne clothe with her blood. "Is Jake with you ?" "And what about his sister ?" She asked as she pulled away slowly, staring just up ahead of Daphne face. "Everything will be alright." Daphne whispered as she slowly brushed Ava's cheeks. Ava instinctivelyreached for Daphne hands and clasped it in hers, "Daphne please answer me, is Sophie alive?". She asked again and almost paused instantly as something occurred to her. If she was in this position with no eyes, it simply meant a worse fate or something similar must have befallen Sophie. And Daohne reluctantance to tell her simply meant it was the former, a worse fat
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Chapter One Hundred & Forty Six : Time Flies By (1)
* Time flies by; Six months later * "Hmmh" A low grunt echoed in the small chamber of a cave before fading away as quickly as it was let out. Bang! Bang!.....Bang! The sound of iron striking iron disrupted the silence as the man with rippled muscles and a sheen of sweat dripping from his back continued his rhythmic striking. Bang! Bang!......Bang! He pauses for a moment as he stared at the sword before his hands, as he quietly thought : 'it wasn't flattened enough.' Bang! Bang! Suddenly he pushed it into a metallic bucket filled with water before moving unto the furnace chamber and began to fill it with more coal. "Ahh, there he's, the father of the lunatics." He chuckled to himself as he watched an old man completely naked walked towards him, his genital organs and unusually large balls swinging like ass of a cat-walking pig. "Oi! gramps! it's been six months, isn't it time for us to go back to humanity." The old man with grey hair and a full grey
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Chapter One Hundred & Forty Five: Aftermath(4)
Running off towards Patrick, she knelt beside him. His eyes still bloodshot, his Berserk class still active. Placing her hands on her Ava chest, she couldn't feel any heart beat. She tried sending some energy essence to her heart and core to stimutae both at the same time. After doing it for the fifth time, and it didn't work, she stared at the girl in pity before shaking her head. "She's dead." Few seconds later, she looked up to see Patrick still staring at Ava, she wondered if he was seeing something she couldn't see. Suddenly he stabbed two fingers into her ribcage, just below her heart as Celine gasped out loud. "Show some respect to the dead. " He didn't respond as he quickly flicked his fingers, his index strumming Ava heart violently, that her disfigured mouth puked out some more blood. "Patrick!" Celine called out loudly, ger eyes showing the shock and slight fury as to why he was doing this to a corpse. It was one thing that a young one's life had been taken
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Chapter One Hundred & Forty Four : AfterMath(3)
"Celine, freeze the obstacles with your ice, that way you can weaken it." "Then?" Celine stared at him while instantly doing as he said. "I will blast through it." "You plan on using your class ?" She asked warily as the temperature of the hall crossed into the negative mark, below zero. "Yes." Patrick slowly rubbed his hands together, having laid Queen carefully behind them, the friction of his palms caused his body to heat up in a strange way. "Ready." The moment He got the go ahead, his voice a whisper in the cold chilling air. "Berserk!" "Ahh!" His screams echoed across the hallway as even those below felt it, a chilling fear running through the spine of the five A(S) Rankers in a face off with Rabin. "That brute, goes activating his class again." Danitello muttered as he stared at Rabin who was now missing an arm and leg, while finding it difficult to face off against the five supposed A Rankers at once. His sense of balance completely ruined
