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THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Ninety Two : Drowning in one's Consciousness
"Ughh!" Jake head popped out of the water as he involuntarily coughed out some of the liquid violently. He took a deep breath quickly, his eyes red as he stared at the rising waves about to consume him once again."Fuck!"He said as he took a last deep breathe before going underwater. The wave crashed above him, as the water violently flunged him around, he freely let himself to be tossed around like a ragdoll as he was determined to make it to shore. "But where was shore ?" he asked himself as everywhere he turned to was an endless body of ocean.*Some minutes ago* "Fuck." He breathed out as he stared at his hands, they were vibrating slowly. He looked around to see the water level in his consciousness was slowly rising in level as it began to move, forming small ripples on its surface."What's happening ?" He said warily, as fear slowly creeped up his face. He looked around quickly, searching for something that could give him an idea of what was happening. Immediately, his eyes
THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Ninety Three : The Eyes are the Window to the Soul.
*Meanwhile....* Still trapped in his memory, Jake(Chris) survived the next wave onslaught as he poked his head through the water surface as he saw the clouds above him clearing up as he stared into the bright sun. Almost immediately he could feel the water becoming still as it slowly began to reduce in volume like it was been sucked away to somewhere else. He wondered what was going on, but he knew if his previous hypothesis was correct, then Prime had released the pure energy essence he had absorbed early on. The question now was, which ability did he accomplish with that. An ability that had a wide magnitude in terms of power and versatility. 'The shadow ability 'His thoughts clicked as he felt like that famous detective, what was his name again? He stared around him as he saw the water was now at his hip. Few minutes ago, and he was close to drowning in his consciousness. He was a hundred percent sure that if he told anyone this, that they wouldn't believe a word of his. He woul
THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Ninety Four : Ava
*Ava POV*I stared at him, not with love or admiration, not of longing and need, but of fear and a creeping despair of what just happened may lead to. I had this recurring itch at the back of mind, that the worst was to come. Was it a prophesy my mind was telling me ? or just the simple fact that I couldn't bear to see my baby in pain? It didn't matter at that moment, cause all I wanted to do was to kill that bitch. I felt the force and pain as his head hit the ground hard, as the blood slowly slipped out of his mouth in a thin line. I found myself staring at his eyes, hoping that it wouldn't turn glassy. 'Don't die on me Jake!'I screamed in my head, not knowing when my thoughts manifested into words."Don't die on me Jake !" Quickly I lurched forward as I felt a strong arm grab my waist. The action felt familiar but the sense of touch felt strange. I looked back to see David holding unto me. His eyes pleading with me not to do what I had on mind.'Was he crazy ?' 'Wasn't he Jake
THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Ninety Five : David
"David POV" Fighting the lizard men was one headache but also Fighting those cladded in dark robes was like having two pipes stucked in your bowels for an enema session.I was just in time to save Ava head from been plucked like a fruit off her neck. I didn't know her to be a dumb bitch, but she just stood there like one. But at the same time I won't blame her, only the creator knows what was running through her mind as she stood there staring at Jake. Maybe she was just contemplating her life that wouldn't include him. They said love would make you think irrational thoughts and take rash decisions; she was experiencing one. Speaking about Jake, I found this highly inconvenience that this attack was launched the period he went berserk. 'What if that was what the attackers wanted. An opportunity of chaos, a little block that would cause disruption to the flow of the event?''What if that block wasnt when Jake went berserk but when Ivanka ability kicked in?''Where they expecting it
THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Ninety Six : No. 1
"Again!" She stared at him with slight fear as he beckoned her with an outstretched hand."Come at me One." His voice was smooth and softer this time around, but her hands gripped the sword tighter as she leaped at him. "Bang!""Bang!"He deflected all her attacks fluidly with his outstretched palm, before returning a strike of his own that sent her flying across the training hall. She quickly used her shadow to cushion her flying body as she slipped out of it and attacked him again. "Good!" The man said with admiration in his voice as she couldn't see his face, it was shrouded in darkness.She attacked fiercely, and with every failed attempt, he beckoned her to come at him again. 'What was today's date again ?' She asked herself as her body tumbled down across the hall way. Her face and arms bleeding from his palm strikes that landed on her soft skin. "Monday...yeah Monday.." She mumbled as she heard him shout "Again!" Slowly she got up. This continued for the next few ho
THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Ninety Seven : I'm the Storm
"Fuck" Jake cursed as he fell on his ass. The water splashed around, wetting him quickly. But that was the least of his worries, as he was back in his consciousness yet again. This time, Prime had taken control by force, he feared for what was to come. Quickly he stood up as he looked at 'the window of the soul'. The large screen showed Jake, now Prime in control slowly getting up, his eyes burning red with rage. He stared for a moment before running towards the screen. Prime had now began to ascend to the sky like a god. He had this feeling, that what was to come next would be an understatement to what was happening. To his suprise, the large screen began to shrink rapidly, faster than normal as the window to the soul became smaller till it reduced to the size of a pinhole. He arrived in front of it, confusion setting on his face as he realized that he had no way out, unless Prime decided to rescind control. He gripped his knees hard as his thoughts were filled with his sister and
THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Ninety Eight : Unexpected Appearance
"Jake" "Jake" He heard a soft whisper as he slowly pulled his head from his palms. "Ms Banbee! " He shouted with a shocked expression as he fell on his haunches, staring at her glowing form. "How ?""Shhh, it's okay. I don't have much time, but you need to take back control. " He stood up slowly as he approached her with outstretched hands. He tried touching her, holding unto her palms, but his hands just passed through. "You aren't real , but you're real?" He said with a confused expression as Mrs Banbee simply smiled. "This is the ability of your father, he sent me here, since he doesn't have a body and we are now one.""My father?" He asked curiously as he hadn't seen his old man, only from old pics that laid around their house. "You need to take back control Jake!" The older woman said in a frantic tone as she stared at him. They both looked at her hands that was slowly fading away. "You need to save Sophia.....The ones that have her are connected to your parents death."
THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Ninety Nine : A Pesky One
Jake saw the two of them conversing, and he knew what was coming next, his death. He knew he wasn't a match for them, just on his own against this two monsters was suicidal, but he had to do something, he had to save the ones he loved. Immediately he channeled the energy essence in him as ten shadow minions were instantly created. They stood in front of him as he tendered to both Sophie and Ava. He felt both men move just as he forced the healing pill down the throats of both girls. He looked up just in time to see both men appearing infront of his shadow minions as they striked out at him. Their physical attacks was caught by the shadow begins as Jake quickly leaped away from his spot with the two girls in his arms. Four shadow hands held unto their torso as he jumped mid air and landed some metres away from the men. Their joint attack had caused a crater on the previous spot Jake was as they both stared at his skillful manipulations of his shadow. "He's a pesky one , and a rare
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One Hundred & Fifty Two: S rank ? Banshee?
*************************Present********************** "Jake, where are you ?" She softly muttered with arms crossed under her soft twin mounds. "Ava , it is." A hoarse deep voice called out her name as she instinctively turned towards the direction of the voice. If it was before, her brain would have received and processed the information; image, person, she had just seen. But now, all she could mentally recall was a blank image. It was like she was just gazing into a void. Gazing was the wrong word, but it felt like that to her. "You must be Master Patrick ?" Ava politely asked as Patrick stared at her with a bit of surprise. "Master ? Ha..ha..ha..Call me Patrick or Rick, but not Pat for short...you don't want Celine icy stare on you." "Alright Sir Patrick." He stared at the young lad who was roughly the same age as his young niece and smiled softly. "Alright Ava, I will be taking you on as my student, but first, why do you want to be my student?" "You offered
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Chapter One Hundred & Fifty One: No, she loved....
Ivanka softly moaned as she felt a tinge run down her spine, as Ava fingers had brushed right past her nipple, causing the bud to increase in size, properly spreading out, seeking the finger that stirred it from slumber. "Ava, my uncle would be coming around this morning." Ivanka broke the silence with gasps as her body shuddered, her cheeks crimson red. Ava fingers were slowly working magic on her. Perharps she didn't know the results her actions were getting, and she was just trying to feel the person talking to her. Was she attracted to ladies ? No, she loved penis. But she did know that it was inevitable for one's nipple not to straighten up like a little soldier when touched abruptly, especially early in the morning. Her reminder of her uncle coming was intended to put a pause on Ava unintentional fondling. "Ohh." Ava softly whispered as her hand left Ivanka's breast and caressed her smooth face. "Thank you for all you have done Ivanka, I'm forever grateful
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Chapter One Hundred & Fifty: Class & Skills(2).
"...." 'Fuck!' Jake inwardly screamed as he was felt further violated, but he knew it was the truth. His class fell under the common ranks. It was said that classes that could be assigned where common classes. Of course, everyone starts off with a common class, like Ava his lover was a lancer. It was simple. The moment you pick a class, it becomes mentally engraved in you when you begin to train in such class. Now if there's common class, then there's certainly a special class category. Special classes are classes that one could either have by luck which was similar to been born the child of a sitting president. Or one could get it after unlocking his or her class and then such class evolves to become a special class. Everyone had a class but it remains inactive. Some people don't even unlock it till they take their last breathe. The moment you unlock it, it becomes active and your class gives you one special skill. Just like Rafeal Rondo, the vice- captain of The Pearl's, who
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Chapter One Hundred & Forty Nine: Class & Skills (1)
*******************Flashback************************* Zeus turned to him almost at dusk and spoke to him for the first time since they departed from his friends. his first words were : "You are weak." He wasn't expecting that, but he knew he was weak. Yes he had a broken ability and an overpowered system, but it didn't mean he was invincible. Prime might be invincible but he, Jake wasn't. It would be fool Hardy to place one's strength on his system, what if his system fails ? Though his system was him, but it didn't change the fact that he lost his last fight and almost lost those who he cared about. To prevent the past from happening, he needed to get stronger, cause deep down he had a feeling that the enemies he faced before was nothing compared to what laid ahead of him. So when Zeus told him his training was going to be toying the path of life and death, he didn't argue or back down from the challenge. But what got his eyes widened was the period he was going to spend, a mini
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Chapter One Hundred & Forty Eight: His Name Is Zeus.
Tap Tap Tap Quickly tapping some pressure points in his body, Jake felt the energy essence coursing through his veins; he felt alive. 'Exapansion.' 'Metallic.' Immediately his body expanded, each limbs growing as large as a small car. A metallic sheen spreading rapidly acros his body, as it ate away the cold blisters forming on his naked skin. Bang! His body slammed heavily at the bottom of the mountain and was buried by the oncoming avalanche. Puff! Breathing in deeply, he forcefully shot out air from his nostrils as he remained buried in the snow, his nose rapidly taking in air as well as energy essence from the environment. And for the second time in his life, he had to dig himself out after been buried alive. **********************Flashback********************** He remembered when he woke up and saw Mrs Banbee, Daphne, the pretty red head; Ivanka and an old man who's eyes adored the older woman more than fear for his life. After defeating the messengers
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Chapter One Hundred & Forty Seven: Time Flies By (2)
The moment Ava heard Daphne voice, she felt weak, her body melted into the arms of her friend who slowly rubbed her back softly. "Daphne,...is...th..at you ?" She croaked softly as Daphne hugged her tightly and whispered a "Yes" in her ears. She cried out more, her hands wrapped around a lady she saw as a friend and a sister, her middle finger staining Daphne clothe with her blood. "Is Jake with you ?" "And what about his sister ?" She asked as she pulled away slowly, staring just up ahead of Daphne face. "Everything will be alright." Daphne whispered as she slowly brushed Ava's cheeks. Ava instinctivelyreached for Daphne hands and clasped it in hers, "Daphne please answer me, is Sophie alive?". She asked again and almost paused instantly as something occurred to her. If she was in this position with no eyes, it simply meant a worse fate or something similar must have befallen Sophie. And Daohne reluctantance to tell her simply meant it was the former, a worse fat
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Chapter One Hundred & Forty Six : Time Flies By (1)
* Time flies by; Six months later * "Hmmh" A low grunt echoed in the small chamber of a cave before fading away as quickly as it was let out. Bang! Bang!.....Bang! The sound of iron striking iron disrupted the silence as the man with rippled muscles and a sheen of sweat dripping from his back continued his rhythmic striking. Bang! Bang!......Bang! He pauses for a moment as he stared at the sword before his hands, as he quietly thought : 'it wasn't flattened enough.' Bang! Bang! Suddenly he pushed it into a metallic bucket filled with water before moving unto the furnace chamber and began to fill it with more coal. "Ahh, there he's, the father of the lunatics." He chuckled to himself as he watched an old man completely naked walked towards him, his genital organs and unusually large balls swinging like ass of a cat-walking pig. "Oi! gramps! it's been six months, isn't it time for us to go back to humanity." The old man with grey hair and a full grey
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Chapter One Hundred & Forty Five: Aftermath(4)
Running off towards Patrick, she knelt beside him. His eyes still bloodshot, his Berserk class still active. Placing her hands on her Ava chest, she couldn't feel any heart beat. She tried sending some energy essence to her heart and core to stimutae both at the same time. After doing it for the fifth time, and it didn't work, she stared at the girl in pity before shaking her head. "She's dead." Few seconds later, she looked up to see Patrick still staring at Ava, she wondered if he was seeing something she couldn't see. Suddenly he stabbed two fingers into her ribcage, just below her heart as Celine gasped out loud. "Show some respect to the dead. " He didn't respond as he quickly flicked his fingers, his index strumming Ava heart violently, that her disfigured mouth puked out some more blood. "Patrick!" Celine called out loudly, ger eyes showing the shock and slight fury as to why he was doing this to a corpse. It was one thing that a young one's life had been taken
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Chapter One Hundred & Forty Four : AfterMath(3)
"Celine, freeze the obstacles with your ice, that way you can weaken it." "Then?" Celine stared at him while instantly doing as he said. "I will blast through it." "You plan on using your class ?" She asked warily as the temperature of the hall crossed into the negative mark, below zero. "Yes." Patrick slowly rubbed his hands together, having laid Queen carefully behind them, the friction of his palms caused his body to heat up in a strange way. "Ready." The moment He got the go ahead, his voice a whisper in the cold chilling air. "Berserk!" "Ahh!" His screams echoed across the hallway as even those below felt it, a chilling fear running through the spine of the five A(S) Rankers in a face off with Rabin. "That brute, goes activating his class again." Danitello muttered as he stared at Rabin who was now missing an arm and leg, while finding it difficult to face off against the five supposed A Rankers at once. His sense of balance completely ruined
