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THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Thirty Five : Becoming the old man protégé
"What's wrong baby girl," He asked in a worried voice.Her silence and pleading face made him not to push it, as he got up with her and quickly scooped her in his arms and headed for the door."I'm sorry Jake, everything is just too much...." she paused for a brief moment. "I'm sorry " she said unable to look him in the face as she sobbed into his shirt.He opened the door and was about to walk out when she turned her head and quickly gestured to be let down."Don't worry, I will drop you off in your dorm" Jake said quietly."Don't worry, I want to walk on my own". she slowly replied."I will walk you ?" He said with a caring tone."I just want to be alone Jake , please " She looked up at him, her eyes red from crying and tears still clinging to her eye lids."Alright dear, take care" He said as she mouthed a thank you and began to walk away.He continued to watch her until she took the stairs down and then he closed his door."Fuck!" he screamed and cursed out loud."Shut the fuck
THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Thirty Six : The Prayer
Those words stucked like stamp on paper, as they etched it selves on the mind of Jake, never to be forgotten."Many ?" Jake asked, surprised by his last words."If you are the second strongest in the world, then you only have a competitor. But when you aren't the second, you become part of the competition". the old man said as he waved his hands and more clouds drew nearer.[I like this old man, steadily dropping bars] Prime commented.[PRIME] [Name: Jake French][Race: Human][Class: Warrior][Talent Rank: F Rank][Copied Talent Rank: B Rank][Ability: Nil][Copied Ability : Speedster][Copied Ability : Body mortification][Copied Ability : Metallic][Special Ability: Copying ability][Skills : Iron fist ] [Physical Stats][Strength : 35][Agility : 35][Stamina : 35][Health : 60][Vitality : 30] [Mental Stats][Intelligence : 45][Charisma : 30] [Extra Points][Stats points : 15 ][Mission points : 15] [Perks] [PRIME STORE] [THE ORIGIN OF PRIME] [Locked][Mission Alert][Bec
THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Thirty Seven : True Fear
With delight she said to herself "The heavens are listening, the gods are watching""The heavens are listening, the gods are watching" . She repeated the line continously until it seemed to be the ramblings of a mad woman. Not until did she say the last words that a pronouncement echoed by nature took place. With a scream she said it out loud."I'm willing to sacrifice anything for my boy. I want his soul, his spirit and body back in my arms, give him to me, answer my prayers oh lord!". The heavens rumbled as the clouds cackled. The sky turned turned red as the clouds became pitch black as the sound of thunder and the flashes of black lightining resounded in the atmosphere. Immediately every one paused, every single one in the city stopped in their foot track. Most had no idea what this was, as some thought that the end of the world had come, and others that an S rank dungeon has broken loose. But only few knew of what had just taken place, and those that knew dreaded the thought an
THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Thirty Eight : The New Daphne ?
A week came by and flew away quickly. Nothing was said about the recent incidents, that is the unnatural phenomenom of the sky turning red, and the Clouds black. The higher ups kept it under the wraps as quite a number of strange faces, including government organisations were seen moving in and out of the small city. And to an extent, the school wasn't exempted. The quiet city of Cape Town had become the subject of topic on the parliament table and a curfew was been considered to be put in place. Until an investigations was concluded, and the culprit was found. Not like the students in the academy who weren't sware of this. Though they saw the physical changes, they couldn't ask anyone but themselves as their teachers and mentors refused to let a word slip out of their mouth, even if it was by chance or a mistake.Jake wasn't an exception, as his master, the old man vanished as soon as he was done speaking to him. For the past one week, the twenty students have been taking their regu
THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Thirty Nine : একচক্ষী দেৱতাৰ প্ৰকৃত সন্ত
Daphne sounded like the Seven Mystery Kidsafter they had solved or completed a mystery and the culpn't was in the police hands. Her eyes shined brightly, as she was eagerly anticipating the response that would certify her hypothesis to be correct."Sorry to break it to you Sherlock but that ain't it".Ava said with a slight bitter smile. There was no way it could be that, even if he was foolish to take the risks. But at the end he was safe and sound, and that was all that mattered, most especially to her. Though one could say the fame was a side benefit as most girls she doesn't talk to are requesting for his autograph or a picture from him through her. And the crazy ones, wanted a hug, a kiss on the cheeks and a kiss on the lips."Ahh, speaking of the devil and he shall appear before you".She inwardly groaned as she saw Jake surrounded by both boys and girls, more of the latter though. She could see him currently signing on something with his head slightly bent down."Let's follow
THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Forty : He makes my heart flutter
An announcement was made and it turned the whole academy to an uproar. It was said that the rules had been changed. "Why the fuck would the rules be changed " the students complained out loudly, most of them choosing to let out their grievances through swearing. The vice principal didn't care as the tall curvy woman with brown thick hair walked to the podium as the students all sat down in the hall waiting for further instructions. "It's simple " she said."The first twenty students would represent the school in an inter competition as they are clearly above your ranking and ratings . Now this wasn't in the books, but a challenge was issued to us and we aren't cowards are we ?" "No ma!" The students chroused in unison"Good". She walked to the edge of the podium and continued. "Now is there any of you that would love to represent your school in the coming competition?"Many hands were raised as some of the students looked on with rapt attention and wide smile as they felt an oppo
THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Forty One : The Open Challenge and a Lunch
She turned to the twenty students who were standing behind her."For instance you.." She pointed at Jake."..could challenge the top ranked student.." she pointed at a petite girl with a really small stature, wearing a pointed black hat"..for her position, it's allowed." Her eye brows flickered as she saw the students interlocked hands but said nothing as she turned around."Now let me say the rules, especially for those that have husbands and wives in this institute that their parents sent them to learn and not find a life partner. Not judging though, but well done".She completed with a quick glance at Jake and Ava who were both turning red. Jake didn't expect that she had noticed them, neither did Ava."Listen carefully as no clarification is allowed". "As no clarification is allowed" the students standing on the podium mouthed the words along side the vice principal, as they remembered Mr Felix.She nodded her head and continued. "No interference is allowed, so if you see your
THE PRIME SYSTEM Chapter Forty two : Jasmine, oh Jamsine.
"Lunch is over, Daphne let's go." she said with a straight face and red cheeks as she avoided both Jake and Daphne set of questioning eyes."But Ava, we are just getting to the fun part" she whined. Jake who was chuckling and trying to get past the hiccups assaulting his chest kept on waving his hand, seeking their attention because he had something to say."C'mon..A..va ...we..st..ill have..m..uch...."His speech was uncoordinated as his body kept jerking as he tried to talk.Ava looked at his current predicament and couldn't help but smile at herself. She immediately looked up and could see the waitress coming towards them, and an evil smile crept up her face. "Daphne remember our training, it's almost time".She said as she showed her bestfriend her watch. "Oh shit, let's go". "We need not be late". Daphne said quickly as she stood up and tapped Jake on the arm ."Bye Jake, thanks for the meal" she said sweetly as she held unto Ava's hand.Quickly, Ava disengaged, walked quickl
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One Hundred & Fifty Two: S rank ? Banshee?
*************************Present********************** "Jake, where are you ?" She softly muttered with arms crossed under her soft twin mounds. "Ava , it is." A hoarse deep voice called out her name as she instinctively turned towards the direction of the voice. If it was before, her brain would have received and processed the information; image, person, she had just seen. But now, all she could mentally recall was a blank image. It was like she was just gazing into a void. Gazing was the wrong word, but it felt like that to her. "You must be Master Patrick ?" Ava politely asked as Patrick stared at her with a bit of surprise. "Master ? Ha..ha..ha..Call me Patrick or Rick, but not Pat for short...you don't want Celine icy stare on you." "Alright Sir Patrick." He stared at the young lad who was roughly the same age as his young niece and smiled softly. "Alright Ava, I will be taking you on as my student, but first, why do you want to be my student?" "You offered
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Chapter One Hundred & Fifty One: No, she loved....
Ivanka softly moaned as she felt a tinge run down her spine, as Ava fingers had brushed right past her nipple, causing the bud to increase in size, properly spreading out, seeking the finger that stirred it from slumber. "Ava, my uncle would be coming around this morning." Ivanka broke the silence with gasps as her body shuddered, her cheeks crimson red. Ava fingers were slowly working magic on her. Perharps she didn't know the results her actions were getting, and she was just trying to feel the person talking to her. Was she attracted to ladies ? No, she loved penis. But she did know that it was inevitable for one's nipple not to straighten up like a little soldier when touched abruptly, especially early in the morning. Her reminder of her uncle coming was intended to put a pause on Ava unintentional fondling. "Ohh." Ava softly whispered as her hand left Ivanka's breast and caressed her smooth face. "Thank you for all you have done Ivanka, I'm forever grateful
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Chapter One Hundred & Fifty: Class & Skills(2).
"...." 'Fuck!' Jake inwardly screamed as he was felt further violated, but he knew it was the truth. His class fell under the common ranks. It was said that classes that could be assigned where common classes. Of course, everyone starts off with a common class, like Ava his lover was a lancer. It was simple. The moment you pick a class, it becomes mentally engraved in you when you begin to train in such class. Now if there's common class, then there's certainly a special class category. Special classes are classes that one could either have by luck which was similar to been born the child of a sitting president. Or one could get it after unlocking his or her class and then such class evolves to become a special class. Everyone had a class but it remains inactive. Some people don't even unlock it till they take their last breathe. The moment you unlock it, it becomes active and your class gives you one special skill. Just like Rafeal Rondo, the vice- captain of The Pearl's, who
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Chapter One Hundred & Forty Nine: Class & Skills (1)
*******************Flashback************************* Zeus turned to him almost at dusk and spoke to him for the first time since they departed from his friends. his first words were : "You are weak." He wasn't expecting that, but he knew he was weak. Yes he had a broken ability and an overpowered system, but it didn't mean he was invincible. Prime might be invincible but he, Jake wasn't. It would be fool Hardy to place one's strength on his system, what if his system fails ? Though his system was him, but it didn't change the fact that he lost his last fight and almost lost those who he cared about. To prevent the past from happening, he needed to get stronger, cause deep down he had a feeling that the enemies he faced before was nothing compared to what laid ahead of him. So when Zeus told him his training was going to be toying the path of life and death, he didn't argue or back down from the challenge. But what got his eyes widened was the period he was going to spend, a mini
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Chapter One Hundred & Forty Eight: His Name Is Zeus.
Tap Tap Tap Quickly tapping some pressure points in his body, Jake felt the energy essence coursing through his veins; he felt alive. 'Exapansion.' 'Metallic.' Immediately his body expanded, each limbs growing as large as a small car. A metallic sheen spreading rapidly acros his body, as it ate away the cold blisters forming on his naked skin. Bang! His body slammed heavily at the bottom of the mountain and was buried by the oncoming avalanche. Puff! Breathing in deeply, he forcefully shot out air from his nostrils as he remained buried in the snow, his nose rapidly taking in air as well as energy essence from the environment. And for the second time in his life, he had to dig himself out after been buried alive. **********************Flashback********************** He remembered when he woke up and saw Mrs Banbee, Daphne, the pretty red head; Ivanka and an old man who's eyes adored the older woman more than fear for his life. After defeating the messengers
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Chapter One Hundred & Forty Seven: Time Flies By (2)
The moment Ava heard Daphne voice, she felt weak, her body melted into the arms of her friend who slowly rubbed her back softly. "Daphne,...is...th..at you ?" She croaked softly as Daphne hugged her tightly and whispered a "Yes" in her ears. She cried out more, her hands wrapped around a lady she saw as a friend and a sister, her middle finger staining Daphne clothe with her blood. "Is Jake with you ?" "And what about his sister ?" She asked as she pulled away slowly, staring just up ahead of Daphne face. "Everything will be alright." Daphne whispered as she slowly brushed Ava's cheeks. Ava instinctivelyreached for Daphne hands and clasped it in hers, "Daphne please answer me, is Sophie alive?". She asked again and almost paused instantly as something occurred to her. If she was in this position with no eyes, it simply meant a worse fate or something similar must have befallen Sophie. And Daohne reluctantance to tell her simply meant it was the former, a worse fat
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Chapter One Hundred & Forty Six : Time Flies By (1)
* Time flies by; Six months later * "Hmmh" A low grunt echoed in the small chamber of a cave before fading away as quickly as it was let out. Bang! Bang!.....Bang! The sound of iron striking iron disrupted the silence as the man with rippled muscles and a sheen of sweat dripping from his back continued his rhythmic striking. Bang! Bang!......Bang! He pauses for a moment as he stared at the sword before his hands, as he quietly thought : 'it wasn't flattened enough.' Bang! Bang! Suddenly he pushed it into a metallic bucket filled with water before moving unto the furnace chamber and began to fill it with more coal. "Ahh, there he's, the father of the lunatics." He chuckled to himself as he watched an old man completely naked walked towards him, his genital organs and unusually large balls swinging like ass of a cat-walking pig. "Oi! gramps! it's been six months, isn't it time for us to go back to humanity." The old man with grey hair and a full grey
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Chapter One Hundred & Forty Five: Aftermath(4)
Running off towards Patrick, she knelt beside him. His eyes still bloodshot, his Berserk class still active. Placing her hands on her Ava chest, she couldn't feel any heart beat. She tried sending some energy essence to her heart and core to stimutae both at the same time. After doing it for the fifth time, and it didn't work, she stared at the girl in pity before shaking her head. "She's dead." Few seconds later, she looked up to see Patrick still staring at Ava, she wondered if he was seeing something she couldn't see. Suddenly he stabbed two fingers into her ribcage, just below her heart as Celine gasped out loud. "Show some respect to the dead. " He didn't respond as he quickly flicked his fingers, his index strumming Ava heart violently, that her disfigured mouth puked out some more blood. "Patrick!" Celine called out loudly, ger eyes showing the shock and slight fury as to why he was doing this to a corpse. It was one thing that a young one's life had been taken
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Chapter One Hundred & Forty Four : AfterMath(3)
"Celine, freeze the obstacles with your ice, that way you can weaken it." "Then?" Celine stared at him while instantly doing as he said. "I will blast through it." "You plan on using your class ?" She asked warily as the temperature of the hall crossed into the negative mark, below zero. "Yes." Patrick slowly rubbed his hands together, having laid Queen carefully behind them, the friction of his palms caused his body to heat up in a strange way. "Ready." The moment He got the go ahead, his voice a whisper in the cold chilling air. "Berserk!" "Ahh!" His screams echoed across the hallway as even those below felt it, a chilling fear running through the spine of the five A(S) Rankers in a face off with Rabin. "That brute, goes activating his class again." Danitello muttered as he stared at Rabin who was now missing an arm and leg, while finding it difficult to face off against the five supposed A Rankers at once. His sense of balance completely ruined
