goosebumps
Author: Wednesday Adaire
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"Come on in, Robert, Pak Joko is already inside," said Renata's papa, welcoming us who had just arrived in front of Renata's terrace.

It was four o'clock in the afternoon, as agreed, by four o'clock we were at Renata's house to discuss Axton's rescue plan.

We entered Renata's house, as usual the cold stares from Renata's grandmother in their family photos really made goosebumps goosebumps.

We were invited to sit in the living room, where we gathered that evening.

"So this is Robert, huh?" asked Mr. Joko, he looked neat with the batik clothes he was wearing.

"Yes sir," I replied, bowing my head to Mr. Joko.

From behind, Renata brought some cups for us, I didn't see Renata's mother, it seemed that Renata's mother was busy with her own business.

Renata put the cups of hot tea on the table.

"Let's drink first," said Papa Renata offered to all of us.

Renata then left us, now the six of us are just sitting in this living room.

"Ah, let's get straight to it, to save time, have you heard the
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