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The Invisible Culprit
Author: Mirex bing
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Around 5 PM that evening, the completion message suddenly activated in Luke's mind, informing him that today's adventure had concluded. The completion rate was eighty-seven percent, earning him another invisibility device.

Upon accessing the item and obtaining it, he saw it was yet another invisible tracking device, the same as the last one.

"What's this? Why couldn't it have been something new or exciting?" he thought to himself.

Despite feeling somewhat disappointed, Luke finally had time to ponder the Crime System. Up until now, he had used it three times. While he didn't fully understand the rules, he had learned certain things about it.

He pulled out his notebook and began analyzing the information he had recorded.

First, the Crime System could only be activated once a day, with the ending time unknown. He estimated the ending time was tied to the completion rate - the faster he finished the adventure, the sooner it ended.

Secondly, the adventure was random and didn't align with
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