I just wanted to thank every single reader who has made it to this point in the story.
I truly appreciate all the comments and coins you've spent to help support this book to the place that it is right now.
We finally made it to the long-awaited end of part one!!!
I know it’s been months since I left a note saying that I was going to end the first part of this story, way back when the title of this book used to be THE MYSTERIOUS BUT CHARMING ANTHONY STAR.
Just look how far we've come since then… Hehe
It might not be obvious but this was a story I came up with just three days before I started publishing the first chapter and I hadn't thought about everything that I was going to write down. I was just winging it most of the time
However, what I did think of was how many parts this story was going to have and what the major plot of each part was going to be like.
Now, experience and inspiration have influenced how a lot of the plots took place in part one and I'm sure it'll happen in the remaining parts as well but I promise to never derail from the original plot of the story I've already mapped out.
Like Anthony Star said to Franklin during their flight to Jade City "I'm not like other Urban stories protagonist" which in this case means that this isn't going to be a story that goes on forever without an end in sight.
With that said, I'll be taking a week to two weeks break from publishing, not to rest but to outline the flow of the contents for part two because right now everything is just a mumbled mess in my head.
I promise part two to be more interesting and bigger than its predecessor because I've learned a lot during the first part and I'll use all those lessons to make the next parts of this book a whole lot better.
Just a little gift for you guys reading this. In part two I'm going to be introducing a character that I've teased multiple times in part one and I've already written how he's going to come into the story in my head.
You guys have read how he connects to the rest of the story but I'm sure you didn't think anything of it and there's no reason to worry yourselves with that. Everything will be clear in part two.
That's all I have to say for now. I just hope everyone who sees this before the commencement of part two sticks around and not abandoned this book before then.
Thank you and see you all again when we come back with THE MIDNIGHT HEIR!!
A side note, I started a new story titled WISH TO BE RICH and it takes place in the same universe as THE MIDNIGHT HEIR. Please check that one out because both main characters will be popping up in each other’s story and what happens in one story will influence the other.
Bye!
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Abraham rose from his chair and looked at Johnathan with shock."Master Johnathan, what do you mean by that?! Are you seriously giving up on all of this and want to return home?!" Abraham asked enthusiastically.Johnathan was left speechless as he looked at Abraham and was grimacing in confusion.He never knew Abraham would react this way to what he said and it was like he was happy to hear him give up on the mission.Abraham grinned "Even though we've already done this much, it's not too late to stop all of this and return home Master Johnathan," he said then dropped on his chair.He immediately opened his desk drawer and searched for some documents which he started arranging, hoping to start packing what they needed so that they could leave this place first thing in the morning.Johnathan cleared his throat when he had seen enough."What is it, Master Johnathan? Do you have a cough? Sore throat maybe? Don't worry, I'll be right there to check what's wrong but first lemme put these d
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The more they walked, the closer and louder the music became and there was a door in front of them which had the bowling alley behind it.Johnathan could see colorful lights escaping from the cracks which let him know that it isn’t just bowling but there should also be a party happening in there.Whoever organized this must have paid a pretty penny to transform a regular bowling rink into a disco party but since they are students of Wellstone, the money should be considered a cheap change to them.Because of how close Johnathan was behind her, Shirley got annoyed and stopped walking."Why the hell are you following me?" She asked and Johnathan grimaced.He also stopped after hearing the ridiculousness of the accusation."Who said I'm following you?" He asked."You are so there's no use denying it," she said as a vein bulged on her forehead.Johnathan scoffed then he smacked his tongue."Listen here miss Vice President or whatever you call yourself—""It's Shirley, Shirley Price. I alr
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