The Rise of Mackin Jones

Chapter 59

Santoro’s paranoia deepens, and Nico’s plan to turn his lieutenants against him takes shape; the city teeters on the brink of collapse. Betrayal, fear, and desperation swirl around both men as the final battle for control looms closer.

Santoro’s reign is crumbling, and Nico is ready to strike the final blow. In a city where power is everything, the time for loyalty is over, and the war for the throne will leave no one standing.

The breaking point has arrived.

The city was on edge, its pulse quickening with each passing day as rumours of Nico’s return swirled through the streets.

The smaller crews that had once stayed quiet now watched closely, sensing that Santoro’s reign was no longer as solid as it appeared. Fear hung in the air like a storm cloud, but there was something else too—a strange, quiet hope. Hope that Carmine Santoro’s iron grip on the city was slipping.

In his penthouse, Santoro stood alone, the weight of the world pressing down on him. He had spent years fighting for control of this city, tearing down Mackin Jones, squashing rebellion after rebellion, and building an empire on fear and blood.

But now, the very foundation of that empire was crumbling beneath him. Nico had escaped his grasp at the docks, and since then, Santoro had been haunted by the ghost of a man who refused to die.

His mind raced, his thoughts darkening with each passing hour. He knew his men were growing restless. He could feel the doubt creeping in, whispering through the corridors of his empire like a disease. Giovanni’s betrayal had only been the beginning. And now Nico was still out there, turning his lieutenants, poisoning their loyalty.

Vito entered the room, moving cautiously, as though stepping into a lion’s den. “We’ve been keeping tabs on Lorenzo,” Vito said quietly. “He’s been acting strange, boss. Avoiding our guys, keeping things too close to the chest.”

Santoro’s face hardened. Lorenzo had been with him since the early days, one of his most trusted men. But trust, Santoro knew, was as fragile as loyalty in this city. Everyone had a price. And if Lorenzo had been talking to Nico, it meant one thing: he had already made his choice.

“Do we have proof?” Santoro asked, his voice cold and calculated.

Vito hesitated. “Not yet. But we’re watching him. If he slips, we’ll know.”

Santoro turned away, staring out at the city below, his mind already working through the possibilities. Lorenzo wasn’t just another soldier. If he turned against Santoro, others would follow. And then the whispers would become louder, the doubts more dangerous.

“Call him in,” Santoro said quietly. “I want to talk to him. Face to face.”

Vito nodded, though there was tension in his posture. He knew what “talk” meant when it came to Santoro, especially when betrayal was involved. But he also knew that this was necessary. Santoro couldn’t afford to show weakness, not now. Not with Nico still lurking in the shadows.

Wherever in the city, Nico was already moving. The meeting with Lorenzo had gone as expected. The lieutenant had been hesitant at first, but Nico had seen the fear in his eyes—the same fear that had pushed Giovanni to act. It was the same fear Santoro inspired in all his men—the fear that their loyalty would one day be met with a bullet instead of gratitude. And that fear was Nico’s greatest weapon.

Luis stood beside Nico, watching the city’s skyline from the window of their safe house. “You think Lorenzo’s going to flip?” Luis asked, his voice heavy with scepticism.

Nico nodded, his expression unreadable. “He will. He’s scared, and scared men don’t stay loyal for long. He knows Santos’s falling apart. He just needs a reason to switch sides.”

Luis crossed his arms, still unsure. “And if he doesn’t?”

Nico turned, his eyes dark. “Then we make an example out of him. Just like Santoro would.”

The plan was simple, but it was dangerous. Nico was playing with fire, but he knew that if he didn’t act now, Santoro’s reign would continue to suffocate the city. They didn’t need to take down the entire empire—they just needed to take down the man at its centre. Santoro had built his power on fear, and now Nico would use that same fear to tear it all down.

Lorenzo arrived at Santoro’s penthouse the next night, his hands sweating as he stepped out of the elevator. The air inside was thick with tension, the kind that made every breath feel heavy. He had been avoiding Santoro’s men for days, trying to keep his head down, but now he was standing at the edge of a precipice.

Santoro sat in his usual spot, a glass of whisky in his hand, his eyes fixed on the city lights. He didn’t look up when Lorenzo entered and didn’t acknowledge his presence at all. The silence stretched between them, taut and unbearable.

“Boss?” Lorenzo said, his voice tentative.

Santoro didn’t respond immediately. He took a slow sip of his drink, savouring the moment, before finally turning to face Lorenzo. His gaze was sharp, cutting through the air like a blade.

“Sit down,” Santoro said, his voice calm but laced with an undercurrent of danger.

Lorenzo swallowed hard and sat his body tense. He had been in plenty of rooms like this before and had seen men walk in with confidence only to leave in a body bag. But this time, he wasn’t sure where he stood. He had been careful—he hadn’t said too much, hadn’t made any obvious moves. But Santoro was smarter than most men. And more dangerous.

“We need to talk,” Santoro said, his voice low and controlled. “I’ve been hearing things. Things about you. About your loyalty.”

Lorenzo’s heart raced, but he kept his face neutral. “Boss, I don’t know what you’ve heard, but I’m loyal. I’ve always been loyal.”

Santoro smiled faintly, but there was no warmth in it. “You see, that’s the problem, Lorenzo. Loyalty is a tricky thing in this city. It’s easy to claim, but harder to prove.”

Lorenzo’s throat tightened. “I haven’t done anything. You know me, Carmine. I’ve been with you since the beginning.”

Santoro stood slowly, circling the room like a predator. “Exactly. You’ve been with me from the start. And that’s why it hurts so much to hear that you’ve been having meetings. Private meetings. Meetings with people like Nico.”

Lorenzo’s pulse quickened, panic flooding his veins. “I haven’t—I swear, boss, I haven’t been talking to Nico. I wouldn’t betray you.”

Santoro stopped, standing behind Lorenzo, his presence looming. “You wouldn’t?”

“No,” Lorenzo said, his voice rising with desperation. “I swear on my life, Carmine. I’m loyal to you.”

For a moment, there was silence. Then Santoro leaned in close, his voice barely above a whisper. “On your life?”

Lorenzo didn’t have time to react before the cold steel of a knife pressed against his throat. Santoro moved swiftly, his hand steady as he tightened his grip on the blade.

“I’m tired of the lies, Lorenzo,” Santoro hissed. “I know you’ve been talking to Nico. And I know you’ve been waiting for the right moment to turn on me.”

Lorenzo’s breath hitched, his body trembling with fear. “Please, Carmine—”

But Santoro didn’t let him finish. In one fluid motion, he slit Lorenzo’s throat, the warm blood spilling onto the floor as Lorenzo gasped for air. His body slumped forward, lifeless.

Santoro stood over him, his face expressionless, his hands steady. He had sent a message. Again. But the more blood he spilt, the less certain he became. Killing traitors had once been easy, a necessary part of ruling this city. But now, every death felt like another piece of his empire slipping away.

Vito entered the room, his eyes cold as he surveyed the scene. “What do you want us to do with the body?”

Santoro didn’t respond immediately. He stared down at Lorenzo’s corpse, his mind racing with thoughts of betrayal, of the cracks in his rule, of Nico.

“Make sure everyone sees it,” Santoro said finally, his voice quiet. “Let them know what happens to traitors.”

Vito nodded, and as he left to carry out the order, Santoro stood alone in the blood-soaked room. He had crushed another rebellion, but it didn’t feel like victory. It felt like desperation.

When word of Lorenzo’s death reached Nico, he wasn’t surprised. It had always been a possibility. But now, the stakes were even higher. Santoro’s paranoia had reached its peak and his men would start turning on him soon enough. Fear could only control people for so long before it drove them to desperation.

Luis sat across from Nico, his face drawn with tension. “What now? Santoro’s not going to stop until we’re all dead.”

Nico exhaled slowly, his mind already working through the next steps. “We stick to the plan. Santoro’s losing control. His men are scared, and when they get scared, they get sloppy. We find the next weak link and turn it. It’s only a matter of time before they start looking for a way out.”

Luis nodded, though the weight of their situation was clear. “And if we can’t turn anyone?”

Nico’s gaze darkened. “Then we go straight for Santoro. No more games.”

The war was escalating, and Nico knew they were running out of time. But he also knew that Santoro’s days were numbered. His empire was built on fear, and fear had a way of consuming everything it touched.

Nico stood, his body tense with determination. “This ends soon. One way or another.”