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Third Person’s POV (4yr.s and 7 months old)"STOP GATHERING AROUND THE BOY!!!!" shouted someone from the other side of the gathered magical beasts, and immediately they dispersed from smothering Ken at the center."Ken! Over here!" Wilbert shouted beside Celine, Ken looked their way and ran immediately towards the, the three engulfed in a tight hug. Letting go was a bit of a shock to the two, as Ken was crying, both tears and snot adorning his face."K-Ken, are you okay? Why are you crying? You'll make me cry too." pulling him back to a hug made him cry harder, making the two join in on the crying as well, although a bit soft and are just affected by their friend crying.Ken wales a little bit more before saying…"I-I thought y-you guys were gone! I-I had a dream that you were all leaving me." Celine’s eyes widened at his statement, what kind of dream did he have for him to cry so much, Ken had always been cheerful.Sounds of hurried footsteps clapped nearby."Ken!" Lyn appeared out o
Third Person’s POV (4yr.s and 7 months old)He never thought he could run so fast in his life and cast so fast, because just as he had arrived near the river he had immediately used magic to teleport to the other side and two more to give a big distance between him and river.He didn’t dare to turn back, not when he was being chased down by the snake, it’s slithering body had created shock waves on the earth, not strong enough to deform it, but strong enough for him to feel it.And now looking from this distance, it had stopped at the edge of the river, oh wait no, it’s slowly bounding towards me, and did he mention that it’s really big? Flowers, may you pardon both of them from trampling them.It was able to cross the river in one swift movement and immediately bounded towards Ken, if he should deduce, it should be around twice the size of the big green snake he had fought earlier, ‘Now is not the time to be calculative of your opponent Ken, you must escape!’“Momentum Magic: Flight!
Third Peron’s POV (MC 4 yrs. And 6-8 months old)“Again, I’ll ask, whose idea was this?” Tension rose as the leader of the magical beasts asked the question, striking directly at the matter at hand, and it was none other than Klein, the one who shouted a command not long ago to disperse the crowd that had gathered on the boy.Klein’s expression was greatly dim, looking at their guests with judging and cold eyes, never sparing even the tribe chief from his icy gaze. His demeanor goes unnoticed by his companions by his side.Everyone inside of the forest residences know that their leader was someone who has strict jurisdictions when it comes to safety and protection of his people, it was his duty to secure a life worth living for his people and to ensure that no harm or calamity may befall them,After all he is the ‘Continental Snake’ a descendant of the mystical beast destined to protect and provide for its kind, but suddenly these people come out of nowhere to disturb their peace, res
Third Peron’s POV (MC 4 yrs. And 6-8 months old)“The King woke up at the castle, his family surrounding him, concerned of his well being, he stayed there for five days to recover, and on the sixth day, he took action, he called unto his son, his brother, and three other arch mages on his time to tell him of his plan,Unknowns to all, after the events of the emergence of the moon, a parchment of paper was left by the oracle and written on it the prophecy of the moon which the King had taken care up to this day, after gathering them on the home where the former King and Queen resided, he told them of his plan,He discovered that anyone with the magic power rivaling that of kingdoms are able to write on the parchment, but only on the regulations on how to care for the blessed child, and that by using the power of such individuals may they be able to not change the regulation, but enhance the regulation,Their first concern, was the safety of the child, but because they do not know which
Third Person’s POV ( 4 yrs. And 6-8 months old)Everyone in the room except Kel who doesn’t know much about spells, and Vin who has a vague concept of tiers of spells, were shocked by what Klein said, the parents, looked dumbstruck on their sit, for they think that yes they taught their son magic and basic spells for beginners, but the sudden revelation made their minds stopped working for a second.Still not believing what Klein said, Alfred asked.“Are you sure?! Do you have evidence?!” -Alfred-“I don’t, but I can share to you my memory *notices*.” Looking at the disbelieving look of his companions and visitors he added. “I guess I’ll share it with everyone.” He held out his forefinger and chanted.“Memory Magic: Shared Moment.” A ball of white that seems to have mist coming out of it formed at the tip of Klein’s finger, the ball is about twice the size of his nail, then it floated at the center table only to divide itself eleven times and went directly to the heads of the people
Ken’s POV (12 yrs. Old)AAAAHHhhhhhhhh, I’m bit! Nothing like a good training in the morning. Although my mana has run out, and my body is close to being sore but aching, yeah, it’s still good, now I just gotta lie down and gather as much energy as I can to get through with my day,-preferably this for afternoon- turns out no matter how tired I become half the day, if only I just gather energy from the surroundings, my mana gets replenished, and my body regenerated.It’s like one of those martial books or novels I’ve read that mentions, what’s that word again? Ah, ‘Qi’, it seems like this world has similar concepts when it comes to such energies,I discovered this 4 years ago when I was all alone -again- at one of the trial missions given by our teachers, got lost from the group, ran out of magic, and nowhere to go.‘That’s because you were too caught up experimenting on your foe that you didn’t notice your mana depleting.” Now there’s my trusty ‘second the motion’ person.‘What would
Third Person’s POV (12 yrs. Old)Speaking of baby faces, his companions are starting to look more attractive as days go by, not like in the past where one could say that they look handsome and beautiful as children because they are children -blame the author for his poor explanation skills-,But one can’t change the fact that the group looked very cute, but now, it’s like their starting to shed their baby skin and had taken a new found beauty within.‘Isn’t that supposed to be what you call puberty?’ -White-‘YEAH! You’re right! I can’t believe I forgot about that.’ Ken replied.Puberty, they are undergoing puberty! Watching them grow up made Ken subconsciously think that he doesn’t want them to grow up, they were so CUTE!!!!!!!!!! In the past. Forgot that he’s also the same age as them, but has a mentality age of more than 30 yrs. Old.He’s gotta find a growth stopping spell.‘You can’t do that! That would hinder the protagonists development, remember you’re here for a mission.’ said
Third Person’s POV (12 yrs. Old)The next day, as usual, Ken woke up before the two, went to each of their homes, woke them up in their sleep -quite rudely and funny at the same time- got ready for the day, and wore their uniform, a battle attire given to them one month ago when their last uniform either didn’t fit them anymore or too tight to wear.Ken wore a simple brown robe, leather boots, gloves, and his Scythe held on the middle by a garment on his back, Celine wore light garments that allow for unrestricted movements, leather boots, gloves, with her quiver on and bow on her back,While Wilbert wore his armor, not exactly covering him all with metal, but enough to cover the vital points, the chest, shoulder, and lower parts of his body, like the rest, he wore leather boots, and gloves, with his sword sheathed, and shield on his back.They’re not exactly that pleasant to look at when it come to meeting guests, but this was only the clothes that their parents deem pleasant to meet