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Third Person’s POV (4yr.s and 7 months old)"STOP GATHERING AROUND THE BOY!!!!" shouted someone from the other side of the gathered magical beasts, and immediately they dispersed from smothering Ken at the center."Ken! Over here!" Wilbert shouted beside Celine, Ken looked their way and ran immediately towards the, the three engulfed in a tight hug. Letting go was a bit of a shock to the two, as Ken was crying, both tears and snot adorning his face."K-Ken, are you okay? Why are you crying? You'll make me cry too." pulling him back to a hug made him cry harder, making the two join in on the crying as well, although a bit soft and are just affected by their friend crying.Ken wales a little bit more before saying…"I-I thought y-you guys were gone! I-I had a dream that you were all leaving me." Celine’s eyes widened at his statement, what kind of dream did he have for him to cry so much, Ken had always been cheerful.Sounds of hurried footsteps clapped nearby."Ken!" Lyn appeared out o
Third Person’s POV (4yr.s and 7 months old)He never thought he could run so fast in his life and cast so fast, because just as he had arrived near the river he had immediately used magic to teleport to the other side and two more to give a big distance between him and river.He didn’t dare to turn back, not when he was being chased down by the snake, it’s slithering body had created shock waves on the earth, not strong enough to deform it, but strong enough for him to feel it.And now looking from this distance, it had stopped at the edge of the river, oh wait no, it’s slowly bounding towards me, and did he mention that it’s really big? Flowers, may you pardon both of them from trampling them.It was able to cross the river in one swift movement and immediately bounded towards Ken, if he should deduce, it should be around twice the size of the big green snake he had fought earlier, ‘Now is not the time to be calculative of your opponent Ken, you must escape!’“Momentum Magic: Flight!
Third Peron’s POV (MC 4 yrs. And 6-8 months old)“Again, I’ll ask, whose idea was this?” Tension rose as the leader of the magical beasts asked the question, striking directly at the matter at hand, and it was none other than Klein, the one who shouted a command not long ago to disperse the crowd that had gathered on the boy.Klein’s expression was greatly dim, looking at their guests with judging and cold eyes, never sparing even the tribe chief from his icy gaze. His demeanor goes unnoticed by his companions by his side.Everyone inside of the forest residences know that their leader was someone who has strict jurisdictions when it comes to safety and protection of his people, it was his duty to secure a life worth living for his people and to ensure that no harm or calamity may befall them,After all he is the ‘Continental Snake’ a descendant of the mystical beast destined to protect and provide for its kind, but suddenly these people come out of nowhere to disturb their peace, res
Third Peron’s POV (MC 4 yrs. And 6-8 months old)“The King woke up at the castle, his family surrounding him, concerned of his well being, he stayed there for five days to recover, and on the sixth day, he took action, he called unto his son, his brother, and three other arch mages on his time to tell him of his plan,Unknowns to all, after the events of the emergence of the moon, a parchment of paper was left by the oracle and written on it the prophecy of the moon which the King had taken care up to this day, after gathering them on the home where the former King and Queen resided, he told them of his plan,He discovered that anyone with the magic power rivaling that of kingdoms are able to write on the parchment, but only on the regulations on how to care for the blessed child, and that by using the power of such individuals may they be able to not change the regulation, but enhance the regulation,Their first concern, was the safety of the child, but because they do not know which
Third Person’s POV ( 4 yrs. And 6-8 months old)Everyone in the room except Kel who doesn’t know much about spells, and Vin who has a vague concept of tiers of spells, were shocked by what Klein said, the parents, looked dumbstruck on their sit, for they think that yes they taught their son magic and basic spells for beginners, but the sudden revelation made their minds stopped working for a second.Still not believing what Klein said, Alfred asked.“Are you sure?! Do you have evidence?!” -Alfred-“I don’t, but I can share to you my memory *notices*.” Looking at the disbelieving look of his companions and visitors he added. “I guess I’ll share it with everyone.” He held out his forefinger and chanted.“Memory Magic: Shared Moment.” A ball of white that seems to have mist coming out of it formed at the tip of Klein’s finger, the ball is about twice the size of his nail, then it floated at the center table only to divide itself eleven times and went directly to the heads of the people
Ken’s POV (12 yrs. Old)AAAAHHhhhhhhhh, I’m bit! Nothing like a good training in the morning. Although my mana has run out, and my body is close to being sore but aching, yeah, it’s still good, now I just gotta lie down and gather as much energy as I can to get through with my day,-preferably this for afternoon- turns out no matter how tired I become half the day, if only I just gather energy from the surroundings, my mana gets replenished, and my body regenerated.It’s like one of those martial books or novels I’ve read that mentions, what’s that word again? Ah, ‘Qi’, it seems like this world has similar concepts when it comes to such energies,I discovered this 4 years ago when I was all alone -again- at one of the trial missions given by our teachers, got lost from the group, ran out of magic, and nowhere to go.‘That’s because you were too caught up experimenting on your foe that you didn’t notice your mana depleting.” Now there’s my trusty ‘second the motion’ person.‘What would
Third Person’s POV (12 yrs. Old)Speaking of baby faces, his companions are starting to look more attractive as days go by, not like in the past where one could say that they look handsome and beautiful as children because they are children -blame the author for his poor explanation skills-,But one can’t change the fact that the group looked very cute, but now, it’s like their starting to shed their baby skin and had taken a new found beauty within.‘Isn’t that supposed to be what you call puberty?’ -White-‘YEAH! You’re right! I can’t believe I forgot about that.’ Ken replied.Puberty, they are undergoing puberty! Watching them grow up made Ken subconsciously think that he doesn’t want them to grow up, they were so CUTE!!!!!!!!!! In the past. Forgot that he’s also the same age as them, but has a mentality age of more than 30 yrs. Old.He’s gotta find a growth stopping spell.‘You can’t do that! That would hinder the protagonists development, remember you’re here for a mission.’ said
Third Person’s POV (12 yrs. Old)The next day, as usual, Ken woke up before the two, went to each of their homes, woke them up in their sleep -quite rudely and funny at the same time- got ready for the day, and wore their uniform, a battle attire given to them one month ago when their last uniform either didn’t fit them anymore or too tight to wear.Ken wore a simple brown robe, leather boots, gloves, and his Scythe held on the middle by a garment on his back, Celine wore light garments that allow for unrestricted movements, leather boots, gloves, with her quiver on and bow on her back,While Wilbert wore his armor, not exactly covering him all with metal, but enough to cover the vital points, the chest, shoulder, and lower parts of his body, like the rest, he wore leather boots, and gloves, with his sword sheathed, and shield on his back.They’re not exactly that pleasant to look at when it come to meeting guests, but this was only the clothes that their parents deem pleasant to meet
Third Person’s POV (12 yrs. and 3 months old)“Explain furthermore what this method is.” the group understood and so their menacing aura retracted, which Ken perceived.“Okay, so in this method are just as what I said earlier, but don’t worry I won’t be experimenting on you guys anymore, as I had already trained you guys about cultivation by accumulating world mana now we just need to use it to enhance your elemental affinity, go on try it, but do it small for your first try.” Ken said, the others complied by squatting down on the ground and doing the procedure.Not long after, complications emerged, most commonly in the form of their accumulated mana turned into an elemental spell.“Ahh I see the problem.” exclaimed Ken as he watched Allen’s spell. “Try envisioning the mana strengthening your own, as it also strengthens the element you are affiliated with, the problem here was that you were strengthening your elemental affinity without strengthening your mana,Causing the element to
Third Person’s POV (12 yrs. and 3 months old)The next morning, everyone was at the field getting ready for the class, while the Masters are with the Dragon Kingdom’s envoy outside of the entrance of the village.“Thank you for visiting us Indur, I hope you have a safe trip back.” said Klein addressing his friend, while the envoy was just about to be ready to depart.“The pleasure is ours. Not to worry, our journey back will not be dangerous.” replied Indur to his friend, with a hint of mischief to his tone, Klein caught what Indur meant for the most part, as for the important one, he frowned, then smiled lightly. ‘“Can’t say I didn’t warn you.” said Klein. Indur frowned then chuckled mischievously.“We’ll see what your disciple can do, but on another hand, I’ll bide my time, and prepare for the extraction of the artifact.” said Indur, effectively changing the mood as tension in the air feels as if the onlookers could touch it, the other two masters are left confused of the sudden ch
Third Person’s POV (12 yrs. and 3 months old)“Calm down Wilbert, please, calm down first.” Ken reply.Wilber took huge breaths and exhaled them in a controlled manner, Ken knows much that when Wilbert is emotionally attacked, he’ll get very angry, so Ken follows him in the breathing exercise.‘I don’t know where the trait came from but I’ve observed it right from the very start it manifested itself in the form of Wilbert smashing a sword on the ground in frustration of not improving, luckily I was there or more like ran over to him whenever he had such episodes, and helped him throughout, with Celine of course.’“Okay, I’m calm.” Ken narrowed his eyes. “Okay I’m not calm, I’ll just be quiet here now.” the other said, Ken nod in appreciation. He looks at his other friend.“You know that it’s okay to break down sometimes right Celine?” He said, out of all of them -the old disciples-, Celine had always had it worse when it comes to self-confidence, she would timidly stand idly by not re
Third Person’s POV (12 yrs. and 3 months old) “To make things easier for you guys, I’ll use a spell that will share my memory to you two, okay?” Ken asked, his two friends nodded in confirmation. “Are you guys reluctant? I could not tell you both if it’s not okay with you two.” Ken can’t force them to a heavy subject such as this one. Ken took a once over his friends, well, Wilbert looks confused, while Celine looked in turmoil and upset. Walks forward and hugs the two. “I’m sorry if this may have caused you both to have complicated feelings.” He said, looking at both of them in his arms. “I have kept this secret from the both of you for a long time now, but both of you are my friends, You two have the right to know the truth, why I have a scythe, why I have weird magic, and most importantly why the three of us had to go through what we went through 8 years ago.” Wilbert’s brow rose in question, while Celine got confused. Ken smiled softly. “Remember when the three of us were su
Third Person’s POV (12 yrs. and 3 months old)“8 years ago, when they started becoming our disciples and students.” Indur looked extremely shocked to his core. He cannot find the words to say, and became a stuttering mess here and there.“So that’s why you look and feel stronger than before.” said Indur, Klein nodded in confirmation.“Look, Ken’s teaching the four his technique.” said Klein, and Indur followed, seeing for himself as Ken placed his hands behind the princess’s back and felt that some type of energy is being sucked into the princess in full force,But slowly it settled down to a form of a stream slowly flowing towards the princess, he could vaguely see seven streams going towards the princess while the others had almost the same amount as her.‘Hmmm, that’s a different type of method.’ Indur thought.But as quickly as Indur assessed the situation to be a goldmine as the ten students showed capabilities of drawing the world’s energy into a timely manner, he was then more
Third Person’s POV (12 yrs. and 3 months old)Meanwhile earlier this day, while the disciples where preparing for the class, the head researcher and researchers positioned themselves where they can spectate at the side of the fields and gather information of how their magic suit works, reacts, and its overall result after the activity.“Huh, an exercise early on, didn’t expect that.” commented Indur, as he and the other three masters sat together at the side.“A necessary component in their training as mages and warriors.” replied Klein.“You still use that name Klein? We’re magical beasts, why do we have to stoop so low as to use a human title?” rebutted Indur, looking offended and disgusted at the term.“You can’t blame me, I’ve started using that term since fifteen years ago, when the parent of that child (points at Ken subtly) came to this forest, as you know, no human has ever ventured at these parts since we’re protected by a barrier.” said Klein, reminiscing of the past.“True,
Third Person’s POV (12 yrs. and 3 months old)Ken found himself at the canyon he made, or near the entrance of the canyon as evident of the slope hill behind him, leading up.‘I’m near everyone, doesn’t this give me some type of advantage? Master did say that we would be teleported at any random place, I wonder how they are doing-‘“Will you stop talking to yourself?”‘Oh Saber, he’s going to be my opponent? fair enough.’ the other just smirked at him.“Can’t help it.” said Ken and smirked back. “Let’s train?” he asked, the other nodded, as he took out his two half an arm’s length daggers, Ken took out his scythe.“You do know that you’re in a disadvantage, right?”“Yeah, I’ll manage, Wind Magic: Surgical Sweep!” with a swing coming from the back to the front, a burst of wind flew directly towards Saber, creating smoke along the way.‘Now to cover myself, Illusion Magic: Mirage.’With Saber’s vision obstructed, he sidestepped to the left and planted himself to the wall as he suspects
Ken’s POV (12 yrs. and 3 months old)“What was that all about?” I turned to Wilbert who asked.“My support magic tool got destroyed.” I showed him the ash left behind, making his eyes widen along with Celine’s brief confused look then mirrored his.“How?!” asked Celine. I put my right forefinger to my lips and said…“Secret, I’ll tell you guys later, for now, we’ve got a class to attend to.” I smiled at them and walked towards the field. “Come on guys! Let’s not be late!” I shouted back and sprinted off.“You won’t get away from us that easily.” said Wilbert.“Wait for me!” shouted Celine catching up to Wilbert with their weapons in tow. I’m here first! (smiles to himself) Now what would be a good show to present, using moon magic would be overkill, how about ice and lightning, I haven’t seen them use one, in fact, I haven’t seen them use magic other than teleportation, except for princess Lang of course, a-“What are you thinking?!” SWEET MOTHER OF ALL--“What’d you do that for?!” I
Third Person’s POV (12 yrs. and 3 months old)“Yes, but don’t worry, we won’t be using spells today like what we did yesterday.” He explained.“But how can we train our magic if we don’t use spells.” He said.“Have you heard of increasing your mana?”“I haven’t, why?” Ken smiled.“Then you can learn today, but first may I ask, have you tried tapping into the world energy?” he asked.“Sometimes I did, and only on those desperate times when I don’t have mana.” the other replied“What if I told you that you could use the world energy, draw it in to yourself, to increase your mana?” surprise written all over his face with wide eyes, haha funny.“How?” he asked.“Here’s how.” Ken squatted down and looked up at him to do the same, Icarus reluctantly followed.“Must we have to do this, it’s kind of hot right now.” He said, voicing out his annoyance.“You’ll get used to it, now close your eyes and follow what I instruct.” Icarus did what was told and closed his eyes. “Use your mana to reach o