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I met him on the street. It was lonely, almost sequestered, the kind no one wants to drive on, but there I was, standing akimbo beside my broken-down car looking on at the rising, swirling vapour emanating out of the engine.
The day was warm, bittersweet but lovely in a way that I could've spent it by using the little time I had to sketch, but I was stuck on a long curvy isolated road with a car that wouldn't start and a low battery phone. It was all Raisa's fault, being my stepmother did not give her the right to coerce me into going to her son's university graduation. The thought of her getting away with it rubbed me the wrong way, but I would do anything for my dad even if it meant putting up with his stepson's perverse looks throughout the ceremony. I got out as fast as I could once the robes were thrown down and a throng of people descended on the proud graduates.
After all my fake enthusiastic chi
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ANNA | ThenI met him on the street. It was lonely, almost sequestered, the kind no one wants to drive on, but there I was, standing akimbo beside my broken-down car looking on at the rising, swirling vapour emanating out of the engine.The day was warm, bittersweet but lovely in a way that I could've spent it by using the little time I had to sketch, but I was stuck on a long curvy isolated road with a car that wouldn't start and a low battery phone. It was all Raisa's fault, being my stepmother did not give her the right to coerce me into going to her son's university graduation. The thought of her getting away with it rubbed me the wrong way, but I would do anything for my dad even if it meant putting up with his stepson's perverse looks throughout the ceremony. I got out as fast as I could once the robes were thrown down and a throng of people descended on the proud graduates.After all my fake enthusiastic chi
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ALICE | Then Eve's birthday I dreamt a dreadful dream that day, the kind that left me coated in precipitation, choked my throat with unbridled quiet sobs. Eve was there. It was like déjà vu when I met her a second time for lunch later that afternoon. My vision was impaired by darkness as black as the inside of a coffin. It felt barren like it did seven years ago and then there was the cold that bit into my skin, numbing it to the point that it was unfathomable how I survived that night. There was a power cut in my dream, an exact mimic of what transpired. Fingers curled around my shoulder blades, sending pin prickles of goosebumps running down my skin. It took long before Eve's face morphed into view, but it was pitch black. I jerked away from her. I didn't like it when Eve touched me solely because she didn't know which part of my flesh didn't sting with pain. "Really,
