After the deity had finished explaining everything to me. We walked towards a bright light portal, I had to close my eyes.
The next time my eyes opened I was in that same underground room. I looked around to see that the book was no longer there but a huge wooden coffin."Open it", I walked towards the coffin and opened it. "Arrgh... phew that was heavy"--Dum--The coffin door fell on the ground and raised a large amount of dust, "The man in there is the right-hand man of your father, Baron Mason. Take the amulet"The amulet was made of a glass-like black material. It had this cold and gloomy aura around it, and it had strange engravings as though it was half of a picture.I extended my hand to take the amulet that he held close to his chest. He was a strong man even in death his grip was something else.--Crack --HIS HANDS BROKE!!if lord marshall saw this he would not forgive me even into the next life. I had to be quick and leave this place.I hid the amulet inside my inner clothing and closed the coffin. I was almost out of the huge room, that now looked like a king's tomb, a big one at that. then this thought entered my mind.'I came here with someone... yes Chelsea where is she? 'I looked around and found Chelsea in one corner of the room. when I got to her I discovered she was not moving."Is she dead?", as I said those words I felt this pain as though I had lost something precious Looking at Chelsea not moving made me enter into a deep turmoil, my heart was almost falling out of my chest.' What is this that I feel? '"She is not dead, the shock wave had knocked her unconscious, She is still useful to me, take her upstairs"I walked forward and picked Chelsea up and left the tomb. The flight of stairs was still as long as before, but it was harder now, I can not even explain how I carried Chelsea and also a flame torch.After what seemed like two hours, I could now see the light escaping from Chelsea's chamber.As I came out from the hole in Chelsea's chamber I was shocked to see that it was still...night. It was just a bit closer to midnight, and the manor's light was still on.I placed Chelsea on her bed my face was so close to hers. I was under a spell... Chelsea's spell. Her breathing was stable, whereas my breathing was getting hard, she looked so beautiful, I could not resist...almost.I caught a grip on myself before things got out of hand. I walked out of Chelsea's bedroom, and as soon as I got to Chelsea's door, I heard the sound of people walking on the hardwood floor.--Badum, Badum--If I got caught here, this would lead to a lot of problems I wasn't ready for. My mind was a mess, thinking of what I had to do, and where I had to hide. I backed away from the door.Fortunately, Chelsea's chamber had many rooms. So I hid behind the door that led into Chelsea's study which was closest to the door out of Chelsea's chamber.--knock, knock--"Lady Chelsea, it's time for your massage?", one of the maids at the door spoke.meanwhile, I was where I was trying to keep my heart from exploding. some time had passed before the maids decided to turn away."Lady Chelsea, we will come again tomorrow morning""It seems Lady Chelsea is asleep, let's go" The second maid said and I started to hear fading footsteps.I had to wait for it to be safe. As soon I had ascertained that it was safe I walked towards the door and opened it as slowly as I could.--creeeaakk--I peeped through the small opening and I saw that the hallway was clear. and that's when it happened.I bolted out of the door, into the hallway, up to my room and fell on my bed."Phew..."MEAN WHILE...Two female servants were walking together." I wonder why young sir was running, Was something chasing him?""I can't say... something was off about him"THE NEXT MORNING, BEFORE THE SUN HAD RISEN"HEY... WAKE UP" I heard a scream in my head. "It's time for your training""What do you mean by training?""You will get it soon, Now get up and walk to the training ground behind the mansion"I yawned, "Hah... am still tired I just woke up""That's not what I asked you. Seems I have to give it to you the hard way", I didn't understand what the deity meant until I felt an unexplainable pain. It was excruciating, worse than the pain caused by the green specks of light during the test. I felt the pain I had never felt before, this was a whole new level of it, as though my skin was turning inside out.Worst of all, I could not scream out. My throat was numb, and my mouth opened but no sound came out, and I could not express the pain I was going through."Please... please... no... more", I begged for the deity's mercy."I will stop but you have to go to the training ground behind the mansion".I struggled but I had to speak, "You... nngh...have...nngh...my...word""OK", as soon as I heard the words of the deity the pain stopped, and surprisingly it felt as if I was never in pain."Stand up, let's go have your first training session". I got up from my bed and walked downstairs into the mansion courtyard.I walked towards the training yard, but I noticed something... There was this lingering feeling of superiority within me. It was as though everybody here was inferior... I didn't feel this way the night before.I entered the training yard It was a large expanse of green land. It had equipment for training different aspects of the body, archery, sword practice, lance manship training pieces of equipment, strength training, and so on it was so fascinating."Enough of being fascinated. Time to sweat!!!". the deity urged me, " Walk towards the boulders. Start with light ones, and keep going till you reach your limit"I had to oblige, I walked towards the boulders and started lifting them. 20kg...40kg...80kg...160kg, This was becoming tough, but I knew this was not my limit. when I lifted the boulder weighing 200 kilograms I knew I could not go any further."Now..."I had steeled my mind to receive whatever it was the deity wanted me to do as {training}, but what I heard was not what I would have expected even in my wildest dreams."...this is what I want you to do, lift the boulder onto your shoulder and run around this field ten times"."What?!!".This field was HUGE it was almost as large as a village, Running around it once with this boulder was already impossible, but running with it three times was death."It seems I wasn't clear enough, i. said. run. round. this. field. with. this. stone. three. times". At this point, I was already feeling a trace of the pain I felt earlier that morning, and it was increasing..."Wait... I will do it". It was tough but I had to lift the stone place it on my back, tie it in place and start running. I had never felt this heavy in my life.By the time I was done with the first lap I was already sinking into the ground.Before the second lap was done my footwear was already worn out, I had torn my shirt so that I would not drown in my sweat because the deity would not let me take the stone off and remove my shirt. My hair was shrivelled, I was breathing already breathing heavily, trying to catch my breath.As at the time I was about to finish the third lap. I was no longer running or walking, I was crawling to the place I started. My nails were broken, my back was full of blisters and blood flowed from my back. I was wrecked, but all this pain did not compare to the pain I felt from the deity. "Good...good, now for your next exercise"I could not even retort. I was experiencing pain all over my body, but I could see this deity-woman wanted to kill me."How could I forget... Vladimir. Heal", the injuries on my skin closed up and healed. Not only that but I felt no pain not even the least fatigue, it was as if it wasn't me who had just done this exercise."It seems the sun is about to rise, ok I think we will have to end this session here. we would wake up earlier tomorrow, OK?"....I could see now that this deity wanted me dead.I untied the boulder from my body and walked towards the mansion. At this time the servants were already awake and working when I walked into the mansion.walking into the mansion all the maids in the household looked at me with traces of shock, desire, awe...or so I thought.I entered my room and fell on my bed, I was wondering why I didn't feel the pains of the training session, and I heard a voice...a very familiar voice."You did not expect that it would be this easy? Now, feel your pain from the training". As she said this I felt the pain from the training before.My lungs felt like collapsing, my joints were on fire, my head was spinning, and just laying down on my bed was torture.There would be some changes in the novel . Not to worry, this would be the fun part. [] would represent when chatacters are thinking. "" would still represent when characters are talking. lastly the narration would be in the 3rd person. **** would represent a change of scene
Vladimir lay on his bed writhing in pain and anguish as the deity had removed her magic from his body. "Mmhmm...you are killing me...", Vladimir said as he felt pain in all the wrong places. [You know... if had let you feel the pain you would not be able to come up here, I mean to your room.] the deity said matter-of-factly. "You...nnh...could have...nnh...just let...me...nnh...off without...the pain". Vladimir struggled to talk. [What's the fun in that? tell me] "You...are...sadistic...you...know...that?" [Get your rest, you will need it]. Suddenly Vladimir's eyes became so heavy that he felt drowsy and dizzy all the same. "srnnk...phew...srnnk..." within a short time, Vladimir was already fast asleep. a devilish and sinister aura kept spreading out of Vladimir, increasing as he slept, and it didn't seem to stop. [The corruption is affecting him, this is too much for his body to bear, and this might be bad for him...ohh what do I care, If he dies I'll just have to find anoth
"You are him; I have hope..." Lord Marshall was on his knees, with reverence overflowing from his heart and plastered on his face. [This is so unexpected, let's see how this turns out] Vladimir thought but said, " lord marshall, you are making me nervous" Vladimir's voice and face expressed different emotions, Vladimir had a vicious smile plastered on his face, and the scene looked sinister. Lord Marshall could not see Vladimir's face as his head facing the ground. " Young lord please do not patronize me...shall I rise?" "Yes, please do. " Lord Marshall stood up he had tears in his eyes, happy tears. " Please come with me" Lord Marshall led Vladimir to a balcony where two chairs were placed with a small table in between. "Join me for tea, young lord" "The view is beautiful, do you not think so?" Vladimir held the handrail and looked over into the horizon. "Well yes, the view is amazing" Lord Marshall came forward and held the handrail. "Let us talk over some tea" Vladimir turne
--chirp, chirp-- The sounds of birds chirping and the sounds of servants doing their duties filled the mansion's premises. The whole mansion was lively. [Weakling, rise and shine! It is a new day] still trying to get his bearings, for the first time his bed felt so welcoming. " yawnnn...am awake, what is it?" Vladimir asked with eyes half closed. He wanted to go to back sleep. [Well nothing, you have simply slept enough, today Will you travel to the central academy] Before Vladimir could respond, someone rapped at his door. "Come in whoever you are" The next minute the door was opened and Chelsea walked in, but surprisingly she didn't feel the same attractive force towards Vladimir as last night. "Good morning, Vladimir" "Good morning to you my lady" Vladimir had his most seductive smile on without even trying "Please do close the door, I would not like what happened yesterday to happen again" At this point Chelsea's face had gon
“Exactly” Darcie looked as though she had seen someone or something so entrancing that she could not look away.“Am new here Could you lead me to the white rank on the mountain Tigre house,” Vladimir spoke bringing Darcie out of her trance.“Ohh... mountain Tigre house. I live in the purple rank Let us go let me show you around” Darcie was an outgoing girl, unlike Chelsea.“All alright,” Vladimir answered as Darcie took his hand and led him walking side by side.[What is happening, he looks so different from the last time I saw him, he looks so alluring. Even his voice had put me in a trance]Darcie thought as she held Vladimir’s hand and walked through the stone pathway through many parts of the school.a building caught Vladimir’s eyes. It looked ancient almost like an insult to the school except that it wasn’t.“Darcie...” Vladimir called out in a low voice.“Yes, Vladimir”. Darcie stopped to look at Vladimir.“What is that?” Vladimir asked and Darcie followed his finger to the hug
Vladimir had settled down in his makeshift chamber but still headed out to go see where he could get more knowledge of that {merit points}. he got to the missions unit.Vladimir stepped inside and the first thing he saw was a big board-like structure that showed names and the missions assigned to them as well as the status of the mission; missions ranged from minor things like picking purple ink mushrooms to major ones like killing a thunder phoenix.The merit points for each mission depended on the difficulty of the mission. Vladimir walked to the front desk to meet the academic bureau's official in charge of assigning missions."Good day," Vladimir greeted the official at the counter with a smile, tailored for her."What can I do for you, young man?" It was clear that the woman was frustrated about something."I was wondering if you could explain how the missions came about" Vladimir looked sincerely curious."You look unfamiliar, you're new right?" the official asked."Yes, I am, t
Luckily the official hadn't come, or maybe she wouldn't come, and all the effort would have been in vain. Nevertheless, Vladimir still found a high place to see when the official would come without her seeing him.Vladimir sat there waiting for what seemed like a couple of hours, [Is she no longer coming?]. Vladimir was about to come out from his hiding place and go back to his chamber when he heard someone walking.--tap, tap-- "Hel...hello, are you there". a woman in a cloak dress said loudly to no one in particular. [Did I make a mistake coming here]. "Well, you did not commit a mistake coming here...". Vladimir paused as he came out of his hiding place, the moonlight coming from the opening of the colosseum hid Vladimir's face from being visible." ...and you kept me waiting, but I forgive your errors". Vladimir's voice had changed it was now much more profound and melancholic.[tell her to look you in the eyes] the deity suggested.Vladimir walked down from the high place wh
"What is your most expensive fabric?" Vladimir said with the aura of a wealthy man."Ohh, that would be handled by my master, please sit I shall inform my master of your presence". the attendant said to them politely as he led them to the VIP section of the emporium.Vladimir and Darcie were offered tea as they waited, but Darcie could not just hold in her curiosity as to the main reason Vladimir was there."Vladimir...". Darcie called out."… Darcie what is it?" Vladimir dropped his cup of tea and gave her his full attention.[this man...]. Darcie thought for a while before responding. "Do not mind my curiosity but what are we doing here?""Humph..." Vladimir chuckled." I said we were here to see a friend, did I not? Just play along and look sharp You are a very crucial part of this plan".[I hope this works...] Vladimir thought to himself."All right if you say so, but so you know, my curiosity has not been satisfied" Darcie responded and then proceeded her best to look as elegant a
Darcie's voice was cut short when the amulet glowed again and her sight became blurry. Then she fell to the ground.[Will she be alright? what happened to her?]. Vladimir asked the deity as he walked towards Darcie lying on the ground.[Yes she would be fine, she just passed out from the blood surge into her body, she would be fine][blood surge?] Vladimir asked the deity as he lifted Darcie off the floor and carried her to the bed on the other side of the room.[Well yes, your blood is pure power, The amulet gives her an amount she can handle, to make her body stronger and her magic essence purer.] the deity explained.[anything else I should know? I do not want any more surprises]. Vladimir placed Darcie on the bed and walked towards the bathroom.[Well yes, I will tell you later today, Do not think much of it?]****Back at the Marshall Manor....Chelsea lay on her bed with her legs touching the floor and her upper body on the bed, in a not-so-ladylike manner. [Why do I miss him so