Novels by Innocent Asian

So after a long break, I will continue writing regularly soon. But there is an idea that I think can improve the quality of this story by many folds. Before that, I want to discuss the structure of this story.... it's messed up. Suddenly, whatever POV shows up, my English is already a chef's kiss. So I want to give it a new start with a better structural organization.My idea for the story was to get it done in my cultural style. Names, places, history references, everything. For that, I'll have to begin from the beginning.I'll try to begin it as soon as possible. Feel free to give ideas for the story.

Arden ran in the direction Amira went. He ran for about 5 minutes when he saw her sitting on the garden chair looking at the birds chirping melodiously on the tree. Arden came near and sat beside her. “What was your plan?” Arden asked. “Umm… nothing special, just a week-long trip.” “We decided to plan something when everyone is done with their families. What do you think?” “It’s good. Where are what are we gonna do?” Amira tried her utmost to look normal, but she was unable to hide the sadness in her eyes, which Arden saw very clearly. “Anywhere you plan, we are good with it. What did you plan, by the way? I knew from a look that you had something going on at the bus stand. What was it?” Arden knew that Amira has been feeling down inside since the moment Gayle mentioned her parents. Arden knew that Amira was an orphan and lived with one of her seniors at the orphanage. But he didn’t know the complete story. He knew this much because that senior of hers used to work at his mansion

The palace had an unusual design. Each floor was almost the same, same arrangement of the rooms, windows, and doors. Except for the one. The one present on the 4th floor had a huge single room way bigger than the once present on other floors, alone occupying the space for 3 other rooms, and the area below the room for the next 3 floors had no rooms, only some windows, each having deteriorated porcelain vases probably used as plant vases. The palace clearly looked rectangular from the outside, but from the inside, it was more like a square. None of them had their attention going on the shape. Instead, they were troubled by something else as soon as they looked at the design.“Hey Orion, look at the stairs.” Zale was examining the building when he got a glimpse of the unusually built staircase. There were pairs of them on the 2nd, 4th, and 6th floor, arranged alternatively to each other. But none were visible on the rest of the floors.“Yup, I saw it,”His voice was coming from a little

......9 JulyBerry woke up early this morning. He had no nightmares, no illusions, and no confusing delusions of his own, at night. He looked around. Others were still in their tents.He looked at the sun; it was slowly rising. And this time is the best time for exploring a tomb or ancient buildings. The morning rays wash away all the bad omens and bring peace to the wandering souls. But before any work, it is important to respond to nature's call. 'I'll wake everyone up after I am done from this, he thought and walked a little further away.'After about fifteen minutes, he was back. It didn't take him fifteen minutes solely to respond to nature's call, but he started playing with birds and then went to look at lilies blooming peacefully and beautifully there. Doing this, he almost forgot the way back.When he was back, he saw everyone already up, doing their own stuff. He walked to them and greeted everyone morning. Everyone's way of responding to his morning was a whole definition

"No need to be confused. You were about to be run down by the car and I saved you. That's all pretty simple. Isn't it? And now your focus is supposed to be that you are already late for class.""Ah, my focus, what was that again?" Amira's confusion now looked more serious."Are you serious? You are late for class.""Oh, I am late for class. Yes, yes, I know. I knew it already." She said normally in a low voice until realization hit her. "... WHAT! I AM LATE!? It's a geography lecture today. Miss Devi's gonna kill me, bye see you later." She turned around to run as soon as she finished her words.Arden grabbed her backpack and pulled her back. Right after it, another car crossed from where she was about to run."What are you doing!?" Miss Devi's not the one who'll kill you. You will be the one to kill yourself! Is something wrong?""No, no, no, nothing is wrong. What's possibly gonna go wrong? Everything's alright. Yeah, it is alright. Everyt

...The next ones to begin their journey are all the 6 members of a clique. Unaware of anything at all, they are enjoying their last moments as school students...."Finally, guys end of these long tiring years. " Luke was the happiest among this clique. All 6 friends are standing at the bus station with their school uniforms still on."No more worries about these classes anymore. Life is just so beautiful." (Yes, he is never going to even think of studying again.)"We still need to study further, this isn't the end." (and it's that girl of the group who can't enjoy and can't let others enjoy as well.) Dayla is the least excited one here."Don't ruin the atmosphere, Dayla, Luke said, trying to act in a cute manner.""Ew!! How many times do I need to tell you not to act cute? It makes me want to throw up." Again, it was Dayla ruining the flow of his happy vibes.Amira, on the other hand, seems to be excited about something else.