Arden ran in the direction Amira went. He ran for about 5 minutes when he saw her sitting on the garden chair looking at the birds chirping melodiously on the tree. Arden came near and sat beside her. “What was your plan?” Arden asked. “Umm… nothing special, just a week-long trip.” “We decided to plan something when everyone is done with their families. What do you think?” “It’s good. Where are what are we gonna do?” Amira tried her utmost to look normal, but she was unable to hide the sadness in her eyes, which Arden saw very clearly. “Anywhere you plan, we are good with it. What did you plan, by the way? I knew from a look that you had something going on at the bus stand. What was it?” Arden knew that Amira has been feeling down inside since the moment Gayle mentioned her parents. Arden knew that Amira was an orphan and lived with one of her seniors at the orphanage. But he didn’t know the complete story. He knew this much because that senior of hers used to work at his mansion
So after a long break, I will continue writing regularly soon. But there is an idea that I think can improve the quality of this story by many folds. Before that, I want to discuss the structure of this story.... it's messed up. Suddenly, whatever POV shows up, my English is already a chef's kiss. So I want to give it a new start with a better structural organization.My idea for the story was to get it done in my cultural style. Names, places, history references, everything. For that, I'll have to begin from the beginning.I'll try to begin it as soon as possible. Feel free to give ideas for the story.
“Amira, you have finished your task. What will you choose now, dear?” It is a calm voice, full of sweetness; giving peace to her confused and scared heart. "Where is it? Am I dead? Who are you?" Amira is still in a daze. The mental and physical pain she felt earlier is slowly withering off. Her mind is getting clearer and clearer with every passing second. She looked around in search of the voice."Your death and life are in your hands, Amira. It was your choice to go to the world again. Now coming back to me or going back to him is your choice. You can't see me, Amira; stop looking around. Close your eyes and feel it. You will understand everything."Amira listened to the voice and did as the voice asked her to do. Soon, millions of memories came rushing to her brain. Her last life and the present one all replayed in her mind. Everything was clearly visible. She felt every moment as if it was not just a memory. She had the same feelings as she felt in those memories.She remembers e
7 DAYS earlierOtto, living a hard life, making other’s life hard, thinks he is the most unlucky person in the world.Hugo finally got a chance to revive.6 teenage friends, all thinking they are true to others, but at the same time are hiding their pain because it’s hard to share. Each thinking, “I am the most miserable one”.Fred, a driver; who had his life coming from hero to zero because of his ‘trusted one’,Emmy, a carefree soul, pulled in all these happenings just because it’s her fate.Delrina, after learning an important lesson, is trying to save her mother’s life.Each one of these 11 thinks they are going to start new soon, leaving their past behind, unaware of the hanging sword on their heads. Among them is a chosen one, who'll save the world, and correcting her past life mistake.……A group of tomb raiders, turning to immortality, influenced by the devil who’s determined to end the existence of god, is willing to go to all the limits, just to fulfill his desire for unlim
Berry was still sitting on the dirty stair. Zale didn't mind sitting there either. The lobby had only natural lighting. Everything looked beautiful and peaceful, with the slow sound of the raindrops in the background.Berry looked at each of them slowly, one by one, before sighing a deep sigh. I know that this palace is supposed to stay hidden at all costs, but I can't do that alone. I'll just let them know about the palace as well and get some money. He thought to himself and started,"My grandfather told me this tale of the king of immortals, and I saw that palace once when I was young. I can help you."Berry knew the story, but there were so many loose ends to it. Moreover, people from his ancestry treated it like a fairy tale, so with the passage of time, there were so many changes in this story.Berry was about to start the story when suddenly he saw the person from last night again. It was the one who was being stabbed by a kid. That person was crying in the arms of a beautiful
Basically, everything these 4 are going to do is controlled by the devil. And Berry is someone with a mysterious past life, with the ability to give the upper hand, either to the god or the devil. ... God took his action way earlier. All the eleven people the devil chose are already coming together in a single place. And the first person is this girl, who just got a taste of the truth of the human heart. 19 June 2019 "I finally got a boyfriend after so long!! You know Tim, I had a crush on him ever since.... umm ever since when? I don't remember. But I already had a crush on him and today he asked me out. It's still hard to believe. He's so popular. Why would he date me?! Timmy, I am so happy today." Delrina was overflowing with happiness. Timmy and Delrina are best friends. They are inseparable. Their friendship is so famous if one is walking around alone, random people on the street start asking about the other one. Both of them were sitting in their usual place. It is Timmy
Berry quickly closed the curtains and went to the bed. He had a single bed near the window. There was an almirah right in the front corner and a small table under the window. Rest of the room was empty and the door was right in the alternating corner of the almirah. He was laying on the bed and still had those stars shining in his eyes. Soon he fall asleep.He was initially facing the wall, later he turned around half asleep. He caught a glimpse of someone in his room. It was a small kid. The same who stabbed someone in his earlier illusions. He was sitting on the floor with his face in his knees. He looked miserable. Suddenly, the boy heard something. He picked himself up with great difficulty and moved forward. A new face entered Berry's sight. He looked like a guard. He gave that boy a dagger and told him something in an ancient language. Berry had some knowledge of ancient languages and he understood a word or two. And he was sure that this guard was trying to manipulate him. He t
7 July 2020 Another among these 11 people is Hugo, and he is having a hard time financially. "Let me cook today, dear. " Hugo looked lovingly at his wife. "You look differently happy today. You took the kids to the park and now you wanna cook. Any good news?" Mrs. Hugo was satisfied just at the sight of him being happy. "Nothing special. I just feel like cooking today." "Ok, Mr. chef, I would love to taste your cooking every day. I'll enjoy the food sprinkled with your love." "Then wait with the kids outside." "Yes, sir!" Mrs. Hugo was an easygoing, cheerful lady; the reason for him going on till now. But now he just can't bear the sight of his wife working so hard. She always pretended that everything was alright, but he is aware of how alright everything has always been for her ever since she married him. Now he has found a way out of these all difficulties of their life. He decided that he'll just end this miserable life of everyone along with his own. He cooked very delic