Chapter 6
Author: Brian Makara
last update Last Updated: 2024-11-25 11:06:40

The wind howled even louder, as though nature itself had sensed the looming danger. Ntsiki’s heart raced, her breath quick and shallow as she stood between Thabiso and Sello. The rumble outside, once distant, was now an ominous growl, cutting through the storm. It was clear whoever was out there, they were coming for Sello, and by extension, for all of them.

Thabiso clenched his fists, his eyes darting from Sello to the door, his face twisted with anger and frustration. "You’ve dragged us into this mess. We wouldn’t be in danger if it weren’t for you!"

Sello’s eyes narrowed, his grip tightening on the knife. "I didn’t ask to be hunted, Thabiso. But now that we’re here, we either fight, or we die."

Ntsiki stepped forward, her voice trembling but resolute. "Enough! We don’t have time to argue. We need a plan."

Sello scanned the room, calculating. "The storm’s our best cover. If they come inside, they’ll assume we’re caught off guard. We need to be ready to take them down quickly." Ntsiki felt a cold sweat bead on her forehead. The thought of fighting, of having to take a life, was terrifying. But she knew Sello was right. Whoever was coming wasn’t here for a friendly chat, they were here to kill.

Thabiso shook his head. "We don’t even know how many there are! What if we’re outnumbered?"

Sello’s eyes gleamed with a dark determination. "Numbers don’t matter if they can’t see us coming. We ambush them, strike fast. That’s the only way."

Ntsiki took a deep breath, her mind racing. There had to be another way, a way to survive without descending into violence. She glanced at the back of the petrol station, where the storage room led to a narrow emergency exit.

"What if we escape through the back?" she suggested, her voice shaky but firm. "We could lose them in the storm, find shelter somewhere else."

Thabiso’s eyes lit up with hope, but Sello’s expression darkened. "You think you can outrun them in this storm? They’ll hunt us down before we make it a distance."

"Maybe," Ntsiki countered, "but it’s better than sitting here waiting for them to kill us. We don’t know how well-armed they are. We can’t take that chance." The rumbling outside grew louder, the sound of heavy vehicles pulling closer. Sello glanced at the door, his jaw tightening. "It’s too late for that now. They’re already here."

Before anyone could respond, the door to the petrol station rattled as someone tried the handle. The three of them froze, the sound like a death knell echoing through the small space. Ntsiki’s pulse quickened as she backed away from the door, her heart pounding in her chest. Sello’s eyes were locked on the entrance, his body coiled like a predator ready to strike. Thabiso stood rigid, his fists clenched, the tension between them palpable.

Then, the door swung open.

A figure stepped inside, shrouded in heavy winter gear, snow caked on their shoulders. Their face was hidden by a thick scarf and goggles, but their posture was unmistakably aggressive. Behind them, more figures appeared, each one armed. Ntsiki’s breath caught in her throat. There were three of them at least, three she could see. They fanned out inside the petrol station, moving with military precision, their weapons raised.

One of the figures spoke, their voice muffled by the scarf. "Sello, you can’t run anymore. We know you’re here. Make this easy on yourself and come out." Sello’s grip on his knife tightened, his face a mask of cold fury. He didn’t respond. The lead figure took another step forward, scanning the room. "You’ve got two choices, Sello. Either we take you out quick, or you put up a fight and drag these people down with you." Ntsiki’s mind raced. She couldn’t let this happen, couldn’t let them all get caught in the crossfire of Sello’s fight. There had to be a way out, a way to stop the bloodshed before it began. "Wait!" She called out, stepping forward. Thabiso grabbed her arm, his eyes wide with alarm, but she shook him off. "Wait, please! We’re not a part of this. We don’t even know who you are."

The figure turned toward her, the barrel of their gun lowering slightly. "That’s not our concern, lady. You’re in the wrong place at the wrong time."

Ntsiki’s throat was dry, her hands trembling.

"You don’t have to do this. Let us go, and we won’t say anything. We just want to get out of here alive."

For a moment, there was silence. The figures exchanged glances, as if considering her words. But then, the leader shook their head.

"Can’t do that. You’re witnesses now. We can’t afford to leave loose ends."

Sello growled under his breath, his knife gleaming in the dim light. "You think you’re taking me that easy? You have no idea who you’re dealing with."

The lead figure cocked their gun, aiming it directly at Sello. "We know exactly who you are, Sello. You’re worth more to us dead than alive."

Ntsiki felt the air leave her lungs, this was it. The fight was inevitable. She glanced at Thabiso, whose eyes were filled with desperation, then at Sello, whose face was a portrait of steely resolve.

Without warning, Sello lunged. Chaos erupted in an instant. The gun went off, the sound deafening in the small space, but Sello was already moving, his knife slashing through the air. He tackled the lead figure, knocking them to the ground, and the two of them wrestled for control of the weapon.

Thabiso dove behind the counter, grabbing an iron bar he had found earlier, and swung it at one of the other armed figures. The man staggered backward, momentarily dazed, but quickly regained his footing.

Ntsiki ducked, heart racing, her mind screaming at her to do something, anything. She couldn’t just stand by and watch this fight tear them apart. She grabbed a fire extinguisher from the corner, its heavy weight solid in her hands, and rushed toward the nearest figure.

With a desperate cry, she swung the extinguisher with all her might, catching the figure off guard. The blow landed hard, sending them crashing into the shelves, their weapon clattering to the floor.

Sello, still locked in a vicious struggle with the leader, managed to gain the upper hand. His knife flashed again, and a pained grunt escaped the figure as they collapsed to the floor, motionless.

Thabiso, panting and covered in sweat, managed to land another blow on his opponent, sending him sprawling. But before he could react, the third figure raised their gun, aiming it directly at him.

"Thabiso, look out!" Ntsiki screamed. But she was too late. The gun fired.

Time seemed to slow as Ntsiki watched in horror. Thabiso’s body jerked, his face twisted in shock and pain as he crumpled to the ground. The sound of the shot echoed in her ears, drowning out everything else. "No!" Ntsiki cried, rushing to Thabiso’s side. Blood pooled beneath him, his breathing ragged and shallow. Her hands shook as she pressed them against the wound, desperately trying to stop the bleeding.

Sello covered in blood, some of it his own, some of it not stood over the last remaining figure, who was now unconscious on the ground. He wiped his knife on his jacket and glanced down at Ntsiki and Thabiso, his face unreadable. "We need to get him help," Ntsiki gasped, her voice breaking.

"He’s dying." Sello sheathed his knife, his expression hard. "There’s no help coming. Not in this storm." Ntsiki’s eyes filled with tears as she looked up at him. "We can’t just let him die. We have to do something!" Sello crouched down beside her, his gaze softening for the first time.

"I’ll help you. But you need to understand something, this isn’t over. More will come. When they do, we need to be ready." Ntsiki’s heart shattered as she looked at Thabiso’s pale face, his life slipping away with every passing second. But she knew Sello was right. They weren’t safe. Not yet. The fight for survival was far from over.

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