Chapter 7
Author: Brian Makara
last update Last Updated: 2024-11-25 11:06:40

The storm raged outside, but inside the petrol station, time seemed to stand still. The air was thick with the scent of blood, sweat, and fear. Ntsiki knelt beside Thabiso, her hands pressed tightly against his wound, her mind racing. She could feel his life slipping away beneath her fingertips, and the reality of the situation was crashing down around her.

Thabiso’s breaths were shallow, his eyes fluttering as he struggled to stay conscious. "Ntsiki…" he murmured, his voice weak, barely a whisper.

"I don’t want to die… not like this."

"You’re not going to die," Ntsiki insisted, though her voice trembled. She didn’t know if she was trying to convince him or herself. "We’ll find a way. Just hang on, okay?" Sello stood a few feet away, watching them with a grim expression. His face was streaked with blood, his eyes dark and unreadable. "We don’t have time for this. We need to move before they send more people after us."

Ntsiki’s head snapped up, fury flashing in her eyes. "He’s dying, Sello! We can’t just leave him here!"

Sello didn’t flinch. "If we stay, we’ll all be dead by morning. They won’t stop coming." She shook her head, refusing to accept it. "There has to be a way! You said you’d help."

"I will," Sello cut her off, stepping closer, his voice calm but firm. "But you need to understand something, Ntsiki. This isn’t a game. This isn’t some movie where everyone makes it out alive. People die. Right now, if we don’t think smart, we’ll all be among them."

Ntsiki’s throat tightened. She hated how cold Sello sounded, but she couldn’t deny the truth in his words. The men who had attacked them hadn’t come to negotiate, they had come to kill. If more were on the way, staying here was a death sentence. Thabiso groaned softly, his body trembling from the pain. "I… I can’t feel my legs."

Ntsiki’s heart broke as she leaned closer to him, her hands shaking. "We’ll get you out of here, Thabiso. I promise." Sello crouched beside her, his expression softening just slightly.

"There’s no saving him if we don’t move now. We need to get to higher ground, away from the storm. There’s an old cabin a few kilometres north, if we can make it there, we’ll have a chance."

"But he’s too weak to walk!" Ntsiki protested.

"How can we get him there?" Sello glanced at Thabiso, then back at Ntsiki. "I’ll carry him. But it’s going to be slow, and if they catch up to us…."

He didn’t finish the sentence, but the implication was clear. Ntsiki swallowed hard, her mind whirling with indecision. Every fiber of her being screamed to stay, to find a way to save Thabiso, but she knew that staying meant death for all of them.

Sello stood, looking down at her with a mixture of pity and resolve. "You need to decide, Ntsiki. Are you coming, or are you staying?" She closed her eyes, fighting back tears. The weight of the decision felt unbearable, but there was no time left. Thabiso’s breathing was growing weaker by the second, and she couldn’t let him die here in this freezing, blood-soaked petrol station. Ntsiki nodded, her voice barely a whisper. "We’ll go." Sello didn’t waste any time. He bent down and hoisted Thabiso’s limp body over his shoulder, the strain evident on his face. "Stay close," he ordered, his tone leaving no room for argument.

"We’ll take the back route. If they’re watching the front, it might buy us some time." Ntsiki grabbed a blanket from one of the shelves and threw it over Thabiso to keep him warm. She knew it was a futile effort, but it was the only thing she could do to feel like she was helping.

As they exited through the back, the storm greeted them with a ferocious howl. The snow was blinding, whipping across their faces as they trudged through the thick drifts. Every step was a battle against the wind, and Ntsiki could barely see a few feet ahead.

Sello led the way, his movements steady despite the burden he carried. Thabiso’s breathing was shallow, his body completely still. Ntsiki followed closely behind, her heart pounding in her chest, her mind racing with fear and uncertainty.

"How far is it?" she called over the wind, her voice barely audible. "Not far," Sello shouted back.

"If we keep moving, we’ll make it." But as they pushed forward, Ntsiki’s doubts grew. The storm was getting worse, and every step felt like a monumental effort. She could feel her strength waning, the cold seeping into her bones. And all the while, she couldn’t shake the fear that they were being watched that at any moment, the men hunting them would appear out of the blizzard.

Suddenly, Sello stopped, his hand raised as a signal for Ntsiki to do the same. She froze, her heart racing, as she squinted through the snow.

"What is it?" she whispered, panic creeping into her voice. Sello didn’t answer right away. He stood perfectly still, his eyes scanning the landscape. Then, in a low voice, he said, "We’re not alone."

Ntsiki’s blood ran cold. "What do you mean?"

Sello nodded toward the trees to their right, barely visible through the snow. "There’s movement. Someone’s following us." Her heart leaped into her throat. "What do we do?" Sello’s eyes were sharp, calculating. "We keep moving, but we stay quiet. If they’re tracking us, they’ll know we’re heading north. We’ll need to make a detour, throw them off our trail."

Ntsiki nodded, though fear had taken hold of her. Every step now felt more dangerous, more uncertain. The storm raged on, and with it came the growing sense that they were running out of time.

They veered off the main path, trudging through a narrow ravine that offered some shelter from the wind. The snow here was deeper, and it slowed them down, but Sello seemed to know where he was going. Ntsiki followed in silence, her eyes darting to the treeline, searching for any sign of their pursuers.

After what felt like an eternity, they reached the edge of a frozen creek. Sello paused, his breath coming in heavy puffs. He adjusted Thabiso’s limp body on his shoulder, then turned to Ntsiki.

"We cross here. The cabin’s just beyond those trees," he said, pointing to a thick cluster of pines on the other side of the creek. Ntsiki’s heart soared with a flicker of hope. If they could just make it to the cabin, they might have a chance to rest, to regroup. But as they stepped onto the frozen creek, a loud crack echoed through the air.

Sello froze, his eyes wide with alarm. "Don’t move," he whispered, his voice tense.

Ntsiki’s blood turned to ice. The sound of the crack was unmistakable, the ice beneath them was breaking. She stood perfectly still, her heart hammering in her chest. The weight of the moment, the danger of every move, was suffocating. Then, in the silence of the storm, she heard it the distant sound of footsteps approaching from the woods behind them. They were out of time.

Related Chapters

  • A Fight for Survival   Chapter 8

    The crack in the ice widened, a jagged line threatening to swallow them whole. Ntsiki’s heart raced as she stood frozen, fear coursing through her veins. Sello’s eyes darted from the fissure beneath them to the shadowy figures emerging from the trees. They were coming, and fast.“Move!” Sello shouted, his voice cutting through the chaos. He took a step forward, testing the ice, then gestured urgently for Ntsiki to follow. Without thinking, Ntsiki pushed herself into motion. She could hear the ice creaking ominously beneath her, but she couldn’t afford to think about it. They had to reach the other side. Thabiso was counting on them.With every step, she felt the ground shift, the ice trembling beneath their weight. Sello kept a steady pace, carrying Thabiso as if he were weightless, determination etched on his face. “Keep going!” Sello urged, his eyes fixed on the approaching figures. “We can’t let them catch us!”Ntsiki’s lungs burned as she pushed forward, praying the ice would hold

  • A Fight for Survival   Chapter 9

    The cabin was a battlefield, echoes of chaos resonating through the walls as Sello fought against the invaders. Ntsiki struggled to keep Thabiso on his feet, feeling the weight of his body pressing against her. With each step they took, the world felt heavy, but she couldn’t give up. Not now.“Keep moving!” Sello shouted, his voice filled with urgency. He blocked another attacker’s blow, using the fireplace poker like a sword. The man staggered back, and Sello seized the moment to push forward. “Get to the back door! I’ll hold them off!”“Are you crazy?!” Ntsiki yelled, her heart racing. She couldn’t leave him behind, but she also couldn’t let Thabiso suffer any longer. “Just go!” Sello snapped, glancing back for just a moment. “I’ll be right behind you!” Ntsiki hesitated, torn between the man she loved and her best friend. But there was no time. With a deep breath, she steered Thabiso toward the back of the cabin. “Come on, Thabiso,” she urged, adrenaline pumping through her veins.

  • A Fight for Survival   Chapter 1

    The sun had long begun its slow descent behind the Drakensberg Mountains, casting an orange glow over the snow-draped peaks. Ntsiki Dlamini gripped the steering wheel tighter as she navigated the winding N3 highway. Her eyes darted nervously to the radio, where a crackling voice was giving an urgent weather update.“Travellers on the N3 be advised. A major snowstorm is expected to hit within the next two hours. Extreme caution is advised. Stay off the road if possible,” Said the reporter. Ntsiki exhaled sharply, her breath fogging the wind shield as the temperature continued to plummet. “Why did I even come this way?” She thought, shaking her head. She had a perfectly reasonable alternative and she could have stayed the night in Durban after the conference, but her stubbornness pushed her forward. She did not want to waste another moment away from home. Being on the road felt like a necessary escape. An escape from memories, regrets, and from the betrayal that still haunted her like a

  • A Fight for Survival   Chapter 2

    Ntsiki’s hands clenched the steering wheel, her breath held as the figure approached through the swirling snow. The storm was unforgiving, the gusts of wind howling like unseen beasts, whipping through the night to an unusual extent. The car windows fogged up as she tried to peer into the darkness, catching only faint glimpses of the man moving toward them.Thabiso leaned forward, tension crackling between them as they exchanged worried glances. His voice was low, barely audible over the storm. “This feels wrong, Ntsiki. Something’s off.”“I know,” she murmured, her throat tight. Her gut twisted with an instinctual warning, but there was nowhere to go. The road was barely passable, and the snow was coming down too fast. Turning back was not an option.The man stopped just outside the driver’s window, knocking with a gloved hand. A hood obscured his face and a thick scarf wrapped around his lower face. All Ntsiki could make out were his piercing eyes cold, hard, and watching them with

  • A Fight for Survival   Chapter 3

    The petrol station's fluorescent lights buzzed quietly overhead as Ntsiki and Thabiso stood near the coffee machine, pretending to warm their hands while keeping a careful eye on Sello. The small station felt like a trap the oppressive weight of the storm outside pressing against the glass windows, the walls seeming to close in around them.Sello browsed the shelves with a casual air, but Ntsiki was not fooled. There was something about his movements that felt rehearsed, as if he was playing a role, masking whatever lay beneath. She exchanged a glance with Thabiso, whose jaw was clenched in barely suppressed tension. “He’s not just some stranded driver,” Thabiso whispered, his voice low and urgent. “I don’t know what it is, but something’s off about him.”Ntsiki nodded, her eyes following Sello as he moved toward the front counter. “We need to be smart about this. Do not provoke him. We’re stuck here until the storm passes, but we can’t let our guard down.” Thabiso’s eyes darkened wi

  • A Fight for Survival   Chapter 4

    The temperature inside the petrol station plummeted as the power outage continued, turning the small room into a cold, lifeless shell. Ntsiki could see her breath in front of her as she huddled close to the counter, trying to keep warm. Outside, the wind howled louder than ever, and the storm showed no sign of letting up. The snow piled high against the windows, threatening to block their view completely.Thabiso paced near the window, his hands balled into fists, his breath heavy with frustration. He kept glancing at Sello, who sat at one of the small tables, a shadowy figure under the dim light of a battery-powered lantern the attendant had finally found. Sello’s calm was unnerving. He acted like the freezing conditions didn’t bother him at all.“Any luck with your phone?” Ntsiki asked Thabiso quietly, though she already knew the answer.He shook his head. “No signal. We’re cut off.”Ntsiki exhaled slowly. The reality of their situation was settling in: they were trapped, with no w

  • A Fight for Survival   Chapter 5

    The wind howled like a beast outside, clawing at the walls of the petrol station as though it wanted to tear the place apart. Inside, the tension was thick enough to taste. Ntsiki stood by the door, staring at the spot where Sello had disappeared into the snowstorm. He’d been gone for over fifteen minutes, and her nerves were fraying.Thabiso was pacing again, his steps heavy with barely-contained anger. “He’s playing us, Ntsiki. What kind of man walks out into a storm like that and just vanishes? I’m telling you, something is seriously wrong with him.” Ntsiki’s heart was pounding. She didn’t want to admit it, but Thabiso was right. Sello’s behaviour didn’t make any sense. And the longer he stayed outside, the more it felt like they were walking into a trap. “I know,” she murmured, her breath visible in the cold air of the powerless petrol station. “But we can’t just leave him out there. If he freezes, we’ll be the ones responsible.”Thabiso shot her a look, his frustration boiling ov

  • A Fight for Survival   Chapter 6

    The wind howled even louder, as though nature itself had sensed the looming danger. Ntsiki’s heart raced, her breath quick and shallow as she stood between Thabiso and Sello. The rumble outside, once distant, was now an ominous growl, cutting through the storm. It was clear whoever was out there, they were coming for Sello, and by extension, for all of them.Thabiso clenched his fists, his eyes darting from Sello to the door, his face twisted with anger and frustration. "You’ve dragged us into this mess. We wouldn’t be in danger if it weren’t for you!" Sello’s eyes narrowed, his grip tightening on the knife. "I didn’t ask to be hunted, Thabiso. But now that we’re here, we either fight, or we die."Ntsiki stepped forward, her voice trembling but resolute. "Enough! We don’t have time to argue. We need a plan."Sello scanned the room, calculating. "The storm’s our best cover. If they come inside, they’ll assume we’re caught off guard. We need to be ready to take them down quickly." Ntsi

Latest Chapter

  • A Fight for Survival   

    Chapter 9

    The cabin was a battlefield, echoes of chaos resonating through the walls as Sello fought against the invaders. Ntsiki struggled to keep Thabiso on his feet, feeling the weight of his body pressing against her. With each step they took, the world felt heavy, but she couldn’t give up. Not now.“Keep moving!” Sello shouted, his voice filled with urgency. He blocked another attacker’s blow, using the fireplace poker like a sword. The man staggered back, and Sello seized the moment to push forward. “Get to the back door! I’ll hold them off!”“Are you crazy?!” Ntsiki yelled, her heart racing. She couldn’t leave him behind, but she also couldn’t let Thabiso suffer any longer. “Just go!” Sello snapped, glancing back for just a moment. “I’ll be right behind you!” Ntsiki hesitated, torn between the man she loved and her best friend. But there was no time. With a deep breath, she steered Thabiso toward the back of the cabin. “Come on, Thabiso,” she urged, adrenaline pumping through her veins.

  • A Fight for Survival   

    Chapter 8

    The crack in the ice widened, a jagged line threatening to swallow them whole. Ntsiki’s heart raced as she stood frozen, fear coursing through her veins. Sello’s eyes darted from the fissure beneath them to the shadowy figures emerging from the trees. They were coming, and fast.“Move!” Sello shouted, his voice cutting through the chaos. He took a step forward, testing the ice, then gestured urgently for Ntsiki to follow. Without thinking, Ntsiki pushed herself into motion. She could hear the ice creaking ominously beneath her, but she couldn’t afford to think about it. They had to reach the other side. Thabiso was counting on them.With every step, she felt the ground shift, the ice trembling beneath their weight. Sello kept a steady pace, carrying Thabiso as if he were weightless, determination etched on his face. “Keep going!” Sello urged, his eyes fixed on the approaching figures. “We can’t let them catch us!”Ntsiki’s lungs burned as she pushed forward, praying the ice would hold

  • A Fight for Survival   

    Chapter 7

    The storm raged outside, but inside the petrol station, time seemed to stand still. The air was thick with the scent of blood, sweat, and fear. Ntsiki knelt beside Thabiso, her hands pressed tightly against his wound, her mind racing. She could feel his life slipping away beneath her fingertips, and the reality of the situation was crashing down around her.Thabiso’s breaths were shallow, his eyes fluttering as he struggled to stay conscious. "Ntsiki…" he murmured, his voice weak, barely a whisper. "I don’t want to die… not like this.""You’re not going to die," Ntsiki insisted, though her voice trembled. She didn’t know if she was trying to convince him or herself. "We’ll find a way. Just hang on, okay?" Sello stood a few feet away, watching them with a grim expression. His face was streaked with blood, his eyes dark and unreadable. "We don’t have time for this. We need to move before they send more people after us."Ntsiki’s head snapped up, fury flashing in her eyes. "He’s dying,

  • A Fight for Survival   

    Chapter 6

    The wind howled even louder, as though nature itself had sensed the looming danger. Ntsiki’s heart raced, her breath quick and shallow as she stood between Thabiso and Sello. The rumble outside, once distant, was now an ominous growl, cutting through the storm. It was clear whoever was out there, they were coming for Sello, and by extension, for all of them.Thabiso clenched his fists, his eyes darting from Sello to the door, his face twisted with anger and frustration. "You’ve dragged us into this mess. We wouldn’t be in danger if it weren’t for you!" Sello’s eyes narrowed, his grip tightening on the knife. "I didn’t ask to be hunted, Thabiso. But now that we’re here, we either fight, or we die."Ntsiki stepped forward, her voice trembling but resolute. "Enough! We don’t have time to argue. We need a plan."Sello scanned the room, calculating. "The storm’s our best cover. If they come inside, they’ll assume we’re caught off guard. We need to be ready to take them down quickly." Ntsi

  • A Fight for Survival   

    Chapter 5

    The wind howled like a beast outside, clawing at the walls of the petrol station as though it wanted to tear the place apart. Inside, the tension was thick enough to taste. Ntsiki stood by the door, staring at the spot where Sello had disappeared into the snowstorm. He’d been gone for over fifteen minutes, and her nerves were fraying.Thabiso was pacing again, his steps heavy with barely-contained anger. “He’s playing us, Ntsiki. What kind of man walks out into a storm like that and just vanishes? I’m telling you, something is seriously wrong with him.” Ntsiki’s heart was pounding. She didn’t want to admit it, but Thabiso was right. Sello’s behaviour didn’t make any sense. And the longer he stayed outside, the more it felt like they were walking into a trap. “I know,” she murmured, her breath visible in the cold air of the powerless petrol station. “But we can’t just leave him out there. If he freezes, we’ll be the ones responsible.”Thabiso shot her a look, his frustration boiling ov

  • A Fight for Survival   

    Chapter 4

    The temperature inside the petrol station plummeted as the power outage continued, turning the small room into a cold, lifeless shell. Ntsiki could see her breath in front of her as she huddled close to the counter, trying to keep warm. Outside, the wind howled louder than ever, and the storm showed no sign of letting up. The snow piled high against the windows, threatening to block their view completely.Thabiso paced near the window, his hands balled into fists, his breath heavy with frustration. He kept glancing at Sello, who sat at one of the small tables, a shadowy figure under the dim light of a battery-powered lantern the attendant had finally found. Sello’s calm was unnerving. He acted like the freezing conditions didn’t bother him at all.“Any luck with your phone?” Ntsiki asked Thabiso quietly, though she already knew the answer.He shook his head. “No signal. We’re cut off.”Ntsiki exhaled slowly. The reality of their situation was settling in: they were trapped, with no w

  • A Fight for Survival   

    Chapter 3

    The petrol station's fluorescent lights buzzed quietly overhead as Ntsiki and Thabiso stood near the coffee machine, pretending to warm their hands while keeping a careful eye on Sello. The small station felt like a trap the oppressive weight of the storm outside pressing against the glass windows, the walls seeming to close in around them.Sello browsed the shelves with a casual air, but Ntsiki was not fooled. There was something about his movements that felt rehearsed, as if he was playing a role, masking whatever lay beneath. She exchanged a glance with Thabiso, whose jaw was clenched in barely suppressed tension. “He’s not just some stranded driver,” Thabiso whispered, his voice low and urgent. “I don’t know what it is, but something’s off about him.”Ntsiki nodded, her eyes following Sello as he moved toward the front counter. “We need to be smart about this. Do not provoke him. We’re stuck here until the storm passes, but we can’t let our guard down.” Thabiso’s eyes darkened wi

  • A Fight for Survival   

    Chapter 2

    Ntsiki’s hands clenched the steering wheel, her breath held as the figure approached through the swirling snow. The storm was unforgiving, the gusts of wind howling like unseen beasts, whipping through the night to an unusual extent. The car windows fogged up as she tried to peer into the darkness, catching only faint glimpses of the man moving toward them.Thabiso leaned forward, tension crackling between them as they exchanged worried glances. His voice was low, barely audible over the storm. “This feels wrong, Ntsiki. Something’s off.”“I know,” she murmured, her throat tight. Her gut twisted with an instinctual warning, but there was nowhere to go. The road was barely passable, and the snow was coming down too fast. Turning back was not an option.The man stopped just outside the driver’s window, knocking with a gloved hand. A hood obscured his face and a thick scarf wrapped around his lower face. All Ntsiki could make out were his piercing eyes cold, hard, and watching them with

  • A Fight for Survival   

    Chapter 1

    The sun had long begun its slow descent behind the Drakensberg Mountains, casting an orange glow over the snow-draped peaks. Ntsiki Dlamini gripped the steering wheel tighter as she navigated the winding N3 highway. Her eyes darted nervously to the radio, where a crackling voice was giving an urgent weather update.“Travellers on the N3 be advised. A major snowstorm is expected to hit within the next two hours. Extreme caution is advised. Stay off the road if possible,” Said the reporter. Ntsiki exhaled sharply, her breath fogging the wind shield as the temperature continued to plummet. “Why did I even come this way?” She thought, shaking her head. She had a perfectly reasonable alternative and she could have stayed the night in Durban after the conference, but her stubbornness pushed her forward. She did not want to waste another moment away from home. Being on the road felt like a necessary escape. An escape from memories, regrets, and from the betrayal that still haunted her like a