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Acrimony Natehey guys, this chapter is kind of raw and unedited. will be updating it with a new one once it finishes. been having difficulty with writing again. sorry for the inconvenience.
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Suitable Bags of Flesh Chapter 24 (part 2)
“About the time I see you, Betts,” said Lena, her voice a bit hoarse with an evident lack of sharpness. Her demeanor showed she was simply calm, and somewhat sedated, according to Trust’s instinct. “Come on, let me get you a lecturing for leaving me here without even letting someone care for me full time, these nurses don’t know how to care for this old woman.” She was sitting up leaning back at the inclined part of the bed with a layer of pillows under her back.The two approached her, Betts leaning in for a hug and Trust afterward. Betts set the items in the cupboard, the one above the table located near the foot of the bed. On top of the table were a few boxes of toiletries, one unused and the other opened for use. Trust looked at the medical chart at the foot of the bed. He listened, shifting to Lena as she spoke about the hospital’s subpar good to bad nurses and services. Adding to the food complaint was the lack of entertainment one where the tablet was difficult to use even if
Suitable Bags of Flesh Chapter 24 (part 3)
Every single element of the radius his senses could map out is a vision he could discern despite how it looks like, a line graph curving around corners, angles, and varied motions. Trust couldn’t tell if this vision of his mind was being serious or not, since it was happening and he has no time to be flabbergasted, the only thought in his head was to see the unusual line within this map-like-graph.Humans look like monotone walking mannequins, shaded by grey and solid to the sight, but the rest of the details look like lines. Intersecting buildings with moving vehicles, animals, and humans like mannequins, there is another element that moves within this domain. It’s not the air or the earth that neither becomes represented by lines or whatnot, but an absolute quantity of dots within coming from under.He couldn’t bother to see what those because the moment he noticed those dots and the quantity scattered around them; he finds himself looking at his ha
Suitable Bags of Flesh Chapter 24 (part 4)
“This is the kind of welcome my child self would be happy to receive,” Trust said as he eyed the crows, all perched on top of the railing and any surface they could stay on. The snobbish one, as he calls it, sat on his shoulder, prompting him to scratch its chin.The siblings he asked for help during their trip outside of the rural in A-city, sat together with their sharp beaks pointed at him. The other two looked frazzled and old, perhaps the old pair in the group of five. He can only guess how far they flew for the rest of them to chase him and Betts here in C-city, but he was thankful for their perseverance even though he can influence the same kind of birds in this city, they still stuck to him like loyal familiars.“Listen carefully,” he said to them as calmly as possible. Projecting his thoughts to the crow’s minds about the map of the city and all the “Dimension Pocket dots” location in the northern and northwestern part
Suitable Bags of Flesh Chapter 24 (part 5)
Fields of grey to one side and an ever-long expanse of darkness over-arching above, covered the vision of Horaz as he groaned in pain, but no normal voice emit from his mouth, only growls and groans not of his own. He has been lying on the ground for several hours now since he woke up. Still, nothing but the feeling of constraint is felt throughout his body.The restriction binding his body at current did not include his tail, it moved in slight twitches, like spasming muscles but on the elongated appendage. That very lively part of his body wanted to move like it wanted to be free of him because he was being an unholy nuisance for not moving around. That’s just how it is, if a part of your body grew its own life, the least you could do is become accommodating of it, or control it because you know you’re the stronger one.Delusions and dreams don’t come hard in this state he’s in where Horaz deliberately sleeps through his consciousness and lets
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Footsteps reverberated through Horaz senses as he struggled to push his still immovable body, but the hope he felt from Trust’s sudden presence gave him enough push to motivate himself. There is a thing as never giving up from the sign of a being that never let him down. At least there was a narrative like that that ran in his head. There was a second pause when he realized that the belief he had about Trust felt artificial yet comparably real because it seems like there is an ingrained program in his mind, due to being around him that short, that became a staple thought. That there is a true sense of belonging and camaraderie with the being named Trust, and that he should be given precedence.Any chance to convince himself otherwise, that this is not an original thought of Horazs own, goes out of to the gutter and flushed gone from his mind when he tries harder wanting to deny Trust’s imprinted authority in his head. Juggling this and trying to move his body bore
Suitable Bags of Flesh Chapter 25 (part 1)
Chapter 25Blue screens from three monitor’s illuminated Cristian’s face as he slurped the last of the cup noodles he prepared before he started an hour and a half ago. The continuous humming of the personal computer he was using had not just shut into the seclusion of hardware disfunction, but it had overheated because of his attempt to compare two files. There was no harm to what he wanted to do, but the computer says otherwise as it ended with a frowning face on the blue screen.“What did I do wrong?” He asked himself as he reset the computer. Watching the blue turn black then a booting up sound from the speakers indicated the smooth restart prompt.While he waited for his computer to show the log-in screen, he looked at the room he and Min-Ain are sitting in, which is just the one spare hotel room under the penthouse. The astonishing thing about this is the readily prepared room equipped with three computers, each with three monitors to accompany.Prof. Tenorio told them to take t
Suitable Bags of Flesh <intermission>
Hi, Nate here :) Seems like the novels getting longer by the chapter and the end is not nigh but struggling afloat. That's why to all those who passed by to read or tried reading my story, thank you.*bow deeply* You may not comment or say anything untoward to the story, but I do appreciate and hope you enjoyed it. Following through this story has gone through some unexpected turns. From trying to justify the lack of romance to f*ck it and let the lack of common sense become THE mentality and psychology. The fact that I did a bit of shortcut for the characters to meet again is quite unoriginal and almost too slow burn, but it comes with the territory of world building. Either way, a hint that the coming arch would be about Horaz and most of the experiments. So, buckling up for some mild violence and gore needs to be fore warned. It's not as inhumane as one would think, but it is sometimes my hidden pleasure to draw out words just to say "its gross," "it hurts," and "i don't want t
Suitable Bags of Flesh Chapter 25 (part 2)
“D-city is a far cry from C-city,” Min-Ain suddenly starts. He’s in a seat near the window that’s still shuttered with a post-modern-looking curtain. It is just a canvas blind that rolls up and down from a string on the side.Min-Ain continues while he looks through the menu, saying. “Compared to the quality of streets and buildings there, here is like a weird paradise made by expensive, or whatever, strong concrete. It’s cool when I first came here but found myself adapting fast since everything is just mentally…wow.”“I know what you mean,” Cristian says, “I live in D-city, I still do. I have a home there and here, but it’s more of a work-given home here in C-city. It’s a place not related here in **** company.”“Wait, you’re a D-city citizen too?” Min-Ain asked as he looks up from the menu. “I mean, you don’t look like a citizen from that place. Unless you live in those expensive high-rise buildings or condominiums? I mean, I won’t judge, I don’t envy those guys living in those hig
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Epilog
EpilogueThe caves underground lead nowhere man could tolerate, with the pressure of the world pressing over them, no one can follow the Primer monsters as they exit the premise of C-city. These Primers are not going to be eaten and smothered by power over time, however, they will co-exist in a community built by Memoria.Memoria who sat almost half a millennia awake under the ruins of F-city played another game of race between the lines with several other internet connection nodes that are knowingly joined into the old working cable lines of the dead city. Then when the race finishes, they rest for the while, thinking like a person, old and hesitant.They’ve long forgotten that they could easily browse these connections so that they could monitor the condition of the world and their old friends who now walks the human world with the grace that could only dignify those with experience. They have experience too, of a different kind, all collected from the vast brains and words of those
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Hi, there Nate here :) I've enjoyed writing this story so far, but things have been complicated and I won't be able to write it anymore. There are some moments that I wish I could have fixed in the long run but it's gotten too much to hold in just one hand. After this chapter will be a short Epilog for a short mention of each relevant characters final activities before the future becomest truly a mystery. This story ran its course, pretty long if you ask me, and the development of some characters are slow but steady. There will be a new title coming after this for the coming month, it's tentative title is "Ocular to the Dying Sun." A saga of the Prime Magician and the realm of Slitark according to before their brightest star continues to deteriorate. Have fun reading, please do leave comments~
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Chapter 37 (part 4)
Small-stature wobbled from their place in shock and confusion. They could hear voices, words they thought would not be possible to understand even if they have a sprinkle of memories of being able to say such things, such words. Vocabulary had almost slipped their still able memory of what they seem to perceive as their selves before this blind-like body.Their comrade underlings did not comprehend the creature in front of Small-stature, making them react in a scared way, almost darting to scurry in escape. Managing to hail them back into the premise of Small-stature’s vicinity was easy, what with One-arm herding them back to where they are.“My, forgive me. It seems like you are a newborn to this body.” Soft-spoken, as Small-stature calls them, listened to them say. “Let me soothe your worries, we are not here to relish harm upon our fellow. Rather, guide them.”Hearing and understanding what Soft-spoken said took about a few seconds of Small-stature’s comprehension, but their underl
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Chapter 37 (part 3)
Two presences from the premise disappeared when the small-statured creature sensed the sensation of an optimal sound and light came from underneath the ground. There was a pause as they waited for the arrival of this, oh so, comforting resonance.Anticipation. Tension. Pause.There was a definite halt in their senses when another sensation overpowered their most awaited event, that was just been triggered moments ago. Because of this, they knew that there was something wrong. Something that would bring them great demise and abandonment, even if they know they could survive without this “thing.”Grasping this “thing” was an answered prayer they knew would be something that could help develop their comrades and these sweet-scented underlings of theirs. Telling them that they would grow and develop into better creatures that could well benefit each other. Without words, just sounds and resonance, deeds.Still, they could not help but waver in tenacity when they felt the loss of this “thi
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Chapter 37 (part 2)
Waking up in another body is hellish beyond comparison. Imagine opening your eyes to blindness you didn't know existed, with the light coming from nowhere and everywhere. You don't see with your eyes, but you feel the world ten times stronger with nothing but your body who is sensitive to every kind of noise. Magic would have been more believable than realizing that your blindness is not caused by pain of any internal kind, but by your eyes absorbed inside your skull, sunken deep. Protected by a layer of skin thin but tough, while a substance within shakes and serves to stay it in place. Something moved within their skull, surreal but they could feel it moving with every shake and stir as if a jar of pickles with one pickle inside swimming in its vat of juice. Why am I comparing pickle to my situation? Calming themselves was easy, they “breathed” slow and steady, through a nose they could not feel or sense its presence on their face, but they know its there. Wildly adjusting their t
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Chapter 37 (part 1)
Chapter 37Skies don’t rain beans or bacon, but Horaz, who’s gotten himself used to the way the Primer identity roams his mind, sees that this Primer sure knows how to mix the setting they stand in by displaying all food he’s been craving for. Nothing beats being human and wanting nothing but to satiate your day with all the good comfort food that lives in your head, at least the ones you’ve tasted before.He has been yearning to eat more than raw meat, which his tongue and throat burned from the bitter taste, not sweet or delectable, but bitter and tangy at the same time. The youth of sixteen years has not tasted flesh the same way it’s described with a raw steak, though he prefers well done, he probably would have had the chance to taste raw steak in the time his family would celebrate special occasions.But he prefers well-done steak, baked beans, and the occasional tacos on the weekends. Softshell because he needs to cater to his girlfriend’s taste for cleanliness, hence food with
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Chapter 36 (part 7)
“Stand… down,” Akyl said slowly to the escorts. Her eyes watched the one arm that clung to the tail.She could tell that the tail, or the identity that controlled it, is strong today. There must be a correlation between their method of physical examination and their tail’s response to their body. Rather, she could sense that Horaz is just realizing that there was more to the process happening in his Primer body and just noticing it now.The other escorts, with guns that bore metal ammunition, followed through but the tranquilizer bearer did not ease his aim. The escort shook his head in rejection of her request and Akyl had to acknowledge this.Purce stood still, feeling her tension, more from fear, stiffen her body. The only part that could move was her eyes and she watched in anticipation if the doctor would do something first, or the Primer’s tail.Because, by now, she could see that the Primer is not just fighting the tail but struggling to keep its hold. The twitching stopped for
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Chapter 36 (part 6)
The confines of Horaz’s room remained cold with the sprinkle of “nature’s touch,” meaning the occasional soil and other debris that could serve as “entertainment options.” Noticing the Primer consciousness be a creature of boredom was one the laboratory did not expect, and so did Horaz.Discovering this was not hard to conclude when the Primer tends to play and hunt the staff and escort that enters its domain whenever they feed or try to clean his “room.” At most, if they didn’t leave any kind of living creature to distract the Primer during its stay in the laboratory, the likeliness of it trying to destroy their place seemed likelier.Reina remembered the kind of creature the first Primer was, despite staying for only a few days in their presence. This alpha Primer did things in calculated actions as if, the creature itself wanted things to go their way so it could pretend to give them what they want.She concluded this according to how the staff then felt its actions were much devis
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Chapter 36 (part 5)
Purce had to double take, knowing that the answer used, one thump of any body part meant “no.” Hastily, she signaled to Elbi that Horaz – the human consciousness, did not agree to the next procedure.Because of this, Moss suddenly wondered why the electrical current request they were aiming to control, and monitor stopped. She saw from her peripheral that Dr. Akyl left her post, the other touchscreen panel, and approached Elbi and Purce.Elbi was adjusting the program, already on its way to booting up enough electrical charges in the ideal percent, but an abrupt stop in this charging requires a reset for the application and machine. Because if it did not stop and proceed to use for its intended purpose, it would go haywire or overflow.The very machine of the gurney can only hold enough electrical charge, the extra energy that flows through the needles are nodes that cannot let one charge in it stay still. It must go through and ride the sails and winds or else it will burn. This is n
