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2024-10-29 19:42:56Hi guys, Nate here.
This month's hectic and as overwhelming. So, if you have the time, comment over the chapters newly posted. I honestly think the on going slow burn adventure and "erotic" moments are quite draggy, but you gotta put some sort of tension to the story.I'm flogged by ideas for a next project, so March will be my work and rest month. Again, sorry for this, though for the mean time indulge yourselves with chapters 14 and 15. Read all available chapters in their entirety, and leave some spicy comments~ don't be shy.As for the new title, it won't be coming any time. The genre for this one will be your standard Fantasy but a whole mix and focus on Family as an added theme. Adventure won't be missing from it of course.Truthfully, thank you for those who spend their time reading Suitable Bags of Flesh. Again, don't be afraid to air your comments down there, it would help me to get some nice feedback.Acrimony Nate(I've now closed my twitter account, but will update here for any way or means to contact me for any kind of interest in my work)
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Suitable Bags of Flesh Chapter 16 (part 1)
Chapter 16Sloshing, shifting red to orange, liquid in the lava lamp produces a special kind of eccentricity in the lab office. The ambiance in the darkroom becomes something like a neon steampunk-themed lightroom as it lost its purpose with the mixing glow beyond the dimness. On a table in the corner are several blood infusion chambers with needles that are all badly bent or ruined.They’re all A-grade equipment provided, insisted, by the **** company. None of them are disposable types. More, like the ones you’d see in a science fiction movie about monsters and patching bodies, all metallic and stainless.They are for several chemical transfusion tests, administered to the captive Primer aptly named Test Subject. A decision the staff made because their imagination and flair flew out the window. Much easier to remember, even after shortening it to TeSu.There was never a dull moment upon its arrival since yesterday,
Suitable Bags of Flesh Chapter 16 (part 2)
Following through with the other roster of human similarities in the body scan of TeSu that took quite a turn for awe or what others would say, “something expected, but at the same time, you feel surprised in the same way” sort of reaction.Sifting through the printed report and seeing all body parts have a staggering eighty percent commonality with the human body, preferably that of a female. Included in this document was an estimated favorability of what kind of female physique TeSu compares.The accuracy may not rate high enough to a standard Patraika assumed Reina considers as an acceptable score. But this proposed factor will remain in the long run for the program to pick through as she believes it will bear fruit if involved.Patraika included this note in the comparison report. Flawlessly managing to collect all this data before the end of yesterday was like a miracle she thought only to experience back in college. Even her disbelief at how lo
Suitable Bags of Flesh Chapter 16 (part 3)
Pointing her held fork on the paper, Reina continued. “Those are humans harmed by nature, an influence whose origins we have no idea where it came. If we allow that drastic change to continue, what will become of our world, Patraika? Centuries of development gone to waste in one night? That’s not what we want our future to be.“Do you think it justified to stop thinking we need to do our best to solve this? Any countermeasure we can create that works are better than letting that thing have its way just because we know it’s letting us. The creature is underestimating us, Patraika, and that’s not a creature you want to waste your pity. We are not doing this for nothing; remember that.” Reina finally said as she fixed her utensils and tapped on her tablet to call over the staff.Swallowing her doubts, she stopped watching the video. “Where’s the finalized report for this?”Tapping on the tablet, Patraika receive
Suitable Bags of Flesh Chapter 16 (part 4)
Considering the willy of an appendage needs to be included, than just the entire body affected by the drug. Because of this thought, Patraika ordered someone to prepare another dose of the toxin. This time it will be administered around the area of the legs and hips.They had to account for the possibility that, even if now and then the tail moves albeit, in small movements, it is not a guarantee that its non-effect will spread towards the torso and the rest of the body.Explaining this was easy to the staff, their experience apparent, despite only doing their duty as toxin injectors for about two days, approximate. Their goal was easy, aim at the skin between the hip and leg joint, disregard targets pain reception.Knowing the tail appendage and the legs’ anatomy meant it would be a supposed easy feat. Because of the way the hips protrude, leaving an arching space to lever that part of the thighs, it’s easy to guess without double-checking that the
Suitable Bags of Flesh Chapter 16 (part 5)
There seems to be a mucous-like membrane wrapping around this, what Patraika can describe as, a stomach-like box looking bloated and satisfied with only water for its source of fill and nutrients. The membrane was cloudy to look, like clear white gelatin that melted on warm water. Bending forward as she tried to smell the substance, her face frowned as she took a picture while pulling it from where it wrapped around.Flimsy by sight but its consistency looked strong in terms of durability. There is a flexible quality in how it follows every part of the organ it wraps around as someone pulls it off the stomach like a layer of skin.Storing it on a container felt important, but the moment Patraika pulled it from the rest of it, it disappeared from the end of the forceps. Frowning, she tried thinking of something before asking one of the staff to fill a tube with a bit of water, just enough to fill the bottom.They looked at Patraika like she asked for something ab
Suitable Bags of Flesh Chapter 17 (part 1)
Chapter 17Watery eyes made Min-Ain blink several times, a way for him to retain the little strength he got from drinking the energy drinks he ordered through the concierge. The hotel avoids canned products that are suspiciously low in quality. If a resident insisted on it, they would recommend their own or a different way to keep their wakefulness. Alas, Min-Ain preferred the convenience store type.Living in the suite had not given him the impression of luxury, just the pure bliss of skipping steps in life. Chores have been part of his routine back in his old life, and even here, he would continue doing so. He did things even if he knew he could just let the hotel do it for him. Nothing from the upgrade he received stopped him from fixing his things or putting his dirty laundry or dishes in their rightful place for him to clean.Seeing the maids roam the room to do the menial jobs was nothing for Min-Ain. At least their existence th
Suitable Bags of Flesh Chapter 17 (part 2)
The list of cities the results showed varied from G, A, C-city, and five others in-between, all where the “couples” reside. They never strayed away from D-city yet managed to stay away from it during the course.The creepy part was that each match was a spouse who varied in gender and age. Their ages in G-city from centuries ago as an old couple never strayed and all showed about the same. So was the way their gender or age gaps interchanged.An exaggerated example of this would be the fifth couple on the roster. The couple is the last Caucasian on the list and what’s unique about their tandem is the glaring age gap they have from each other. The seventh in the list played with racial combinations. The eight wanted to come back as an old couple but with racial differences from each other. The variation goes on.The interval between how long each couple lived in the city they chose differed by a factor Min-Ain can only guess, but it ranged from
Suitable Bags of Flesh Chapter 17 (part 3)
Upon waking, looking like a reminder of Eldrics godchildren he doted on, they sat in the dining room to start eating.Amidst the chewing, Eldric started their conversation with, “Seems like your eyes have deteriorated into dry balls of sand.”“I’ve had worse,” Min-Ain replied as he continued blinking his watery eyes. “Though I never thought I’d be doing so much reading in one day.”“As we always say, you will never get used to it, but you would probably experience tired wakefulness that you’ll be numb to the pain of not sleeping,” Eldric said poetically amidst chewing. “Mind if I ask about that file you sent me?”The boy looked at him nodding. “I’m not surprised.”“Were you aware of the things you sent me? I can understand most of the documents related to D-city and G-city, but a whole search file of people unrelated to ‘Dimension Pocket&rsqu
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EpilogueThe caves underground lead nowhere man could tolerate, with the pressure of the world pressing over them, no one can follow the Primer monsters as they exit the premise of C-city. These Primers are not going to be eaten and smothered by power over time, however, they will co-exist in a community built by Memoria.Memoria who sat almost half a millennia awake under the ruins of F-city played another game of race between the lines with several other internet connection nodes that are knowingly joined into the old working cable lines of the dead city. Then when the race finishes, they rest for the while, thinking like a person, old and hesitant.They’ve long forgotten that they could easily browse these connections so that they could monitor the condition of the world and their old friends who now walks the human world with the grace that could only dignify those with experience. They have experience too, of a different kind, all collected from the vast brains and words of those
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Hi, there Nate here :) I've enjoyed writing this story so far, but things have been complicated and I won't be able to write it anymore. There are some moments that I wish I could have fixed in the long run but it's gotten too much to hold in just one hand. After this chapter will be a short Epilog for a short mention of each relevant characters final activities before the future becomest truly a mystery. This story ran its course, pretty long if you ask me, and the development of some characters are slow but steady. There will be a new title coming after this for the coming month, it's tentative title is "Ocular to the Dying Sun." A saga of the Prime Magician and the realm of Slitark according to before their brightest star continues to deteriorate. Have fun reading, please do leave comments~
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Chapter 37 (part 4)
Small-stature wobbled from their place in shock and confusion. They could hear voices, words they thought would not be possible to understand even if they have a sprinkle of memories of being able to say such things, such words. Vocabulary had almost slipped their still able memory of what they seem to perceive as their selves before this blind-like body.Their comrade underlings did not comprehend the creature in front of Small-stature, making them react in a scared way, almost darting to scurry in escape. Managing to hail them back into the premise of Small-stature’s vicinity was easy, what with One-arm herding them back to where they are.“My, forgive me. It seems like you are a newborn to this body.” Soft-spoken, as Small-stature calls them, listened to them say. “Let me soothe your worries, we are not here to relish harm upon our fellow. Rather, guide them.”Hearing and understanding what Soft-spoken said took about a few seconds of Small-stature’s comprehension, but their underl
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Chapter 37 (part 3)
Two presences from the premise disappeared when the small-statured creature sensed the sensation of an optimal sound and light came from underneath the ground. There was a pause as they waited for the arrival of this, oh so, comforting resonance.Anticipation. Tension. Pause.There was a definite halt in their senses when another sensation overpowered their most awaited event, that was just been triggered moments ago. Because of this, they knew that there was something wrong. Something that would bring them great demise and abandonment, even if they know they could survive without this “thing.”Grasping this “thing” was an answered prayer they knew would be something that could help develop their comrades and these sweet-scented underlings of theirs. Telling them that they would grow and develop into better creatures that could well benefit each other. Without words, just sounds and resonance, deeds.Still, they could not help but waver in tenacity when they felt the loss of this “thi
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Chapter 37 (part 2)
Waking up in another body is hellish beyond comparison. Imagine opening your eyes to blindness you didn't know existed, with the light coming from nowhere and everywhere. You don't see with your eyes, but you feel the world ten times stronger with nothing but your body who is sensitive to every kind of noise. Magic would have been more believable than realizing that your blindness is not caused by pain of any internal kind, but by your eyes absorbed inside your skull, sunken deep. Protected by a layer of skin thin but tough, while a substance within shakes and serves to stay it in place. Something moved within their skull, surreal but they could feel it moving with every shake and stir as if a jar of pickles with one pickle inside swimming in its vat of juice. Why am I comparing pickle to my situation? Calming themselves was easy, they “breathed” slow and steady, through a nose they could not feel or sense its presence on their face, but they know its there. Wildly adjusting their t
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Chapter 37 (part 1)
Chapter 37Skies don’t rain beans or bacon, but Horaz, who’s gotten himself used to the way the Primer identity roams his mind, sees that this Primer sure knows how to mix the setting they stand in by displaying all food he’s been craving for. Nothing beats being human and wanting nothing but to satiate your day with all the good comfort food that lives in your head, at least the ones you’ve tasted before.He has been yearning to eat more than raw meat, which his tongue and throat burned from the bitter taste, not sweet or delectable, but bitter and tangy at the same time. The youth of sixteen years has not tasted flesh the same way it’s described with a raw steak, though he prefers well done, he probably would have had the chance to taste raw steak in the time his family would celebrate special occasions.But he prefers well-done steak, baked beans, and the occasional tacos on the weekends. Softshell because he needs to cater to his girlfriend’s taste for cleanliness, hence food with
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Chapter 36 (part 7)
“Stand… down,” Akyl said slowly to the escorts. Her eyes watched the one arm that clung to the tail.She could tell that the tail, or the identity that controlled it, is strong today. There must be a correlation between their method of physical examination and their tail’s response to their body. Rather, she could sense that Horaz is just realizing that there was more to the process happening in his Primer body and just noticing it now.The other escorts, with guns that bore metal ammunition, followed through but the tranquilizer bearer did not ease his aim. The escort shook his head in rejection of her request and Akyl had to acknowledge this.Purce stood still, feeling her tension, more from fear, stiffen her body. The only part that could move was her eyes and she watched in anticipation if the doctor would do something first, or the Primer’s tail.Because, by now, she could see that the Primer is not just fighting the tail but struggling to keep its hold. The twitching stopped for
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Chapter 36 (part 6)
The confines of Horaz’s room remained cold with the sprinkle of “nature’s touch,” meaning the occasional soil and other debris that could serve as “entertainment options.” Noticing the Primer consciousness be a creature of boredom was one the laboratory did not expect, and so did Horaz.Discovering this was not hard to conclude when the Primer tends to play and hunt the staff and escort that enters its domain whenever they feed or try to clean his “room.” At most, if they didn’t leave any kind of living creature to distract the Primer during its stay in the laboratory, the likeliness of it trying to destroy their place seemed likelier.Reina remembered the kind of creature the first Primer was, despite staying for only a few days in their presence. This alpha Primer did things in calculated actions as if, the creature itself wanted things to go their way so it could pretend to give them what they want.She concluded this according to how the staff then felt its actions were much devis
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Chapter 36 (part 5)
Purce had to double take, knowing that the answer used, one thump of any body part meant “no.” Hastily, she signaled to Elbi that Horaz – the human consciousness, did not agree to the next procedure.Because of this, Moss suddenly wondered why the electrical current request they were aiming to control, and monitor stopped. She saw from her peripheral that Dr. Akyl left her post, the other touchscreen panel, and approached Elbi and Purce.Elbi was adjusting the program, already on its way to booting up enough electrical charges in the ideal percent, but an abrupt stop in this charging requires a reset for the application and machine. Because if it did not stop and proceed to use for its intended purpose, it would go haywire or overflow.The very machine of the gurney can only hold enough electrical charge, the extra energy that flows through the needles are nodes that cannot let one charge in it stay still. It must go through and ride the sails and winds or else it will burn. This is n
