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Chapter 12: Card Counting
Author: Sam Shelby
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Zack wasn’t relying on luck at all. His loud personality, his flashy shirt, and all the jokes—every bit of it was a carefully crafted distraction. Beneath the surface, Zack’s mind was a well-oiled machine, calculating every move, tracking every card, and silently stacking the odds in his favor.

Card counting.

Peter’s jaw tightened as he realized what was happening. Card counting wasn’t illegal, but it was heavily frowned upon, and for good reason—it gave players a significant advantage over the house or their opponents.

For those unfamiliar, card counting was the art of keeping track of the cards that had been played to predict the ones that remained in the deck. It wasn’t about memorizing every single card—that was impossible. Instead, players assigned values to the cards and used basic math to maintain a running count in their heads.

For example:

Cards 2 through 6 were “low cards” and assigned a value of +1.

Cards 7 through 9 were “neutral” and given a value of 0.

Cards 10, face cards (Jack, Queen, King), and Aces were “high cards” and assigned a value of -1.

Why did this matter? Because blackjack heavily favored the player when there were more high cards left in the deck. High cards increased the chances of hitting a 21 or busting the dealer. Low cards, on the other hand, made it harder to win.

As the deck was played, the counter would add and subtract these values to track whether the remaining cards were “rich” with high-value cards or “poor” with low ones. If the deck was “rich,” the counter would bet aggressively, knowing the odds were in their favor. If it was “poor,” they’d bet conservatively.

And Zack was a master at it.

Peter clenched his fists. He could see it now—Zack wasn’t just guessing. He was tracking every card that left the deck, using his mental count to predict what was coming next. The cheerful banter? The “lucky” shirt? All smoke and mirrors to distract from the fact that he was systematically dismantling the game.

Zack leaned back with his trademark grin. “What’s the matter, buddy? Cat got your tongue?”

Peter didn’t respond. His mind was already racing.

If card counting is Zack’s weapon, I have to find a way to break it.

The semi-transparent screen of Peter’s System Panel lit up.

…..

[HINT: USE PATTERN DATA TO PREDICT OPPONENT’S BLUFF WINDOWS.]

…..

A slow smile spread across Peter’s face.

“Hey, Zack,” Peter said, his voice calm for the first time. “You said luck’s always watching, right?”

Zack blinked, caught off guard by Peter’s sudden confidence. Then his grin widened. “Damn right, buddy! Lady Luck and I go way back.”

Peter leaned forward slightly, his eyes gleaming. “Let’s see how much she loves you.”

…..

[ACTIVATE: Probability Vision.]

[ACTIVATE: Pattern Recognition Detector.]

…..

The world around Peter shifted. The table became a glowing map of probabilities and data. Each card’s likelihood of appearing hovered in his vision like neon signs. Percentages flowed over the deck, the dealer, and Zack himself.

But Peter didn’t stop there. He synchronized Probability Vision with Pattern Recognition Detector.

…..

The detector analyzed Zack’s movements and decisions, creating predictive patterns based on his playing style. Peter could see it now—Zack wasn’t just counting cards; he was timing his bets to exploit the deck’s balance.

Peter smirked. “You’re right, Zack. Lady Luck must really love you.”

Zack chuckled, his grin faltering just slightly.

The game shifted.

Peter disrupted Zack’s rhythm with erratic moves—standing on risky hands, doubling down when the odds seemed unfavorable. He hit aggressively when the deck was low on high-value cards, confusing Zack’s count. He stood unexpectedly, forcing Zack to second-guess his calculations.

Zack’s grin began to waver.

“What are you doing, buddy? You can’t play like that! That’s… reckless!” Zack exclaimed, his voice rising.

Peter shrugged. “Just following Lady Luck’s lead.”

The dealer revealed the next hand.

“Bust,” Zack muttered under his breath, his chips sliding back to Peter.

Zack fidgeted, his cocky demeanor cracking. What the hell was happening? Was this kid counting cards too? Even if he was, there was no way this kid was better than him. Zack had spent years perfecting his craft. His card-counting skills were sharp enough to make professional gamblers nervous, all so he could have an insurmountable edge when he finally decided to go pro. Now was the time he had decided to go pro and there was no way in hell or heaven he was going to let a puny grey sweater kid stand in his way.

The sixth game began.

Peter played unpredictably, making bold bets when the odds seemed against him and cautious ones when the deck was favorable. Zack’s eyes flickered with frustration as Peter’s erratic moves made it harder for him to maintain his mental count.

In one hand, Peter stood on a risky 16, baiting Zack into overplaying his hand. Zack hit twice, going over 21.

“Bust,” the dealer announced, pushing the chips toward Peter.

….

The final hand arrived.

Both players were down to their last chips. The air in the room felt heavy with tension as the dealer shuffled for the final hand.

Peter’s cards landed—a seven and a six. Thirteen.

Zack’s eyes flicked to his cards. He had a ten and a five. Fifteen.

The dealer revealed her face-up card—a queen.

Peter’s System Panel lit up:

[DRAW LIKELIHOOD: 73% FOR AN EIGHT.]

Peter took a deep breath. “Hit me,” he said.

The dealer dealt the card. It flipped through the air and landed softly on the felt. An eight.

Twenty-one.

Peter exhaled, keeping his face neutral. Zack hesitated, his fingers twitching against the table. The card counter in him was screaming to stop.

“I’ll stand,” Zack said at last.

The dealer revealed her hand—a nine beneath the queen. Nineteen.

“Twenty-one,” the dealer announced, sliding the pile of chips toward Peter.

Peter leaned back, his heartbeat pounding in his ears. He’d done it.

Zack’s chair screeched as he shot to his feet, slamming his hands on the table.

“You cheated!” he shouted, his jovial mask completely shattered.

Peter raised an eyebrow. “Cheated? Or did Lady Luck finally leave you?”

Zack growled, his fists tightening. He lunged across the table, aiming for Peter’s throat.

Before he could make contact, two guards appeared like shadows, grabbing Zack by the arms and hauling him back.

“Let me go! He cheated! I’ll—”

The guards dragged him out, his shouts echoing down the hallway.

Peter exhaled slowly, his hands shaking slightly as he collected himself.

The dealer gave him a respectful nod. “Well played.”

Peter didn’t reply. His thoughts were already on his next challenge.

Peter’s watch beeped. He glanced at the screen, and his breath caught.

ROOM: E2. GAME: CHESS.

OPPONENT: GRANDMASTER JONATHAN MYERS.

Peter froze, his stomach twisted. The name wasn’t just familiar—it was a shadow from his past. He’d faced Jonathan once before, and it had cost him more than he cared to admit. Now he had no choice but to confront him once again, he was his next opponent... the next obstacle to saving his mother.

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