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Zane was very furious when he left the organization. He kept wondering who could have betrayed them and for what reason the person did so. He called one of his trusted guards to keep an eye on everybody in the organization. He went on to set all fourteen elders up as spies on themselves without their notice. First elder’s house "Son, I think we have a problem on the ground," the first elder said. "What's the problem dad? What are you talking about?" Romeo asked "I think we will be caught soon by Zane. That boy is just too smart," the first elder said. "Caught for what? Are we criminals? Did we steal from him or something?" Romeo asked, feigning ignorance. "Stop playing dumb and be sensible for once. The deal we did with Charles has made Zane suspicious, and now he is suspecting there’s a mole in the organization," the first elder said. "I’m not playing dumb; you are just acting up. He is not going to find out; just act normal when you go for meetings and anywhere you find yourse
"It’s alright, dad," Romeo said. "No, it’s not; I’ve tolerated him for too long. Let me let it out, like he said. You want to know what I’m keeping inside me, right? The whole truth is that I hate you to the core, and I have never considered you the leader of this organization; never will I do that," he said, his anger getting the best of him already. "Bring in the culprit," Zane ordered. A guy was dragged in, looking horrible from the torture he has received since last night. The guard he assigned to keep an eye on everybody in the organization had seen this guy making weird moves outside the organization; he moved closer to him and got to know he was calling someone from the organization. The guy was still on the phone when the guard knocked him out; he lost consciousness immediately, and he was dragged into the torture room. The guard called Zane, who came rushing over, tortured the spy so badly that he wasn’t able to take it any longer, so he had to spill the truth. Zane re
A silent road Charles had a lot of fear in his eyes as he came out of his car and saw something in a black box beside the dusty road. Though he acts tough, the little he has heard about him is just too scary for his liking. Zane had actually called him to come there for a surprise. He was aware Zane had caught his spy, who happened to be his right-hand man, and he was in his custody now. He came with a few of his men in case of any emergency, and they walked to the package slowly, not sure of what was in there. Charles bent beside it and slowly but carefully opened the mysterious box. His eyes widened, and he fell heavily, hitting his butt on the ground. Inside the package are the heads of both his right-hand man and the first elder of the royal organization, the man who helped them get into the organization to cause havoc. He was scared to the bone because Zane didn't think twice before killing an important elder in his own clan, not an enemy, so be ready. "Goodness!, No!! Zane!!
*** Blood organization*** Charles began to get restless, it seems all his efforts to ruin Zane, and tarnish his image have gone to waste. There's not even one time he has gotten Zane, he always gets defeated one way or the other. After a lot of thinking, he decided to find a way to persuade Vivian to assist him get rid of Zane. He was sure whatever wrong Vivian had done to Zane, Zane would surely forgive her since she was his first love. Vivian is definitely his weakness, and he is going to take advantage of that to bring him down. He had the plan laid out already, but what he needs now is how he is going to convince Vivian to join forces with him after what he did to her. He knows she must hate him right now for betraying her and all that, but it was partly her fault they lost the company. If she hadn't betrayed him first, they would still have the company. He set off to Vivian's house to see her with the hope that she might agree to work with him since she equally got sacked fro
Vivian leaned on the door, thinking of what Charles just said. In part, she knew he was telling the truth, but if there's anything she regrets, it's betraying the love of her life, Zane, for riches. She knows very well that he is handsomely rich now; if only she had been patient for a little bit longer, she would have been by his side enjoying life with him now.She sighed and moved back to her dining room to eat. She took her spoon, but just as she was about to start eating, she lost her appetite and threw the food into the waste can. Charles just ruined her day for her by his presence.She stomped her foot on the floor and headed to her room. She made up her mind to pay Zane a visit the next day; maybe her stars will shine and he will pity her and take her back at least, if not as a girlfriend, at least as a friend. She sighed one last time and went into the bathroom to do her business. She came out minutes later and wore her nightgown; she laid in bed and sleep took over.Next mor
Vivian kept pacing back and forth; she must get to his good side by all means. She was still thinking when she spotted Zane's car in the parking lot. A funny idea popped into her head, and she looked around to check whether the coast was clear.She saw Zane talking to someone on the phone and walking to his car. She quickly got into Zane's car boot and hid there. She had the intention of going along with him when he gets into his car to go home."What do you mean by saying you don't know? Send me his location right now; I don't care how you do that, but I need you to find him now!" Zane said angrilySomeone messed up in the organization again, and he is definitely going to deal with him.He got to his car and felt there was something odd, but he ignored it since he was in a rush.He zoomed off at full speed, and Vivian kept hitting her head against the sides of the car due to the rough drive. "Why is he driving so fast? Where is he going anyway?" She wonderedWhile she was still wond
Jesse tried to help her stand up, but Zane stopped him."Why are you here?" Zane asked in the video Vivian, who was still shivering"I wasn't stalking you; I promised to stop coming to you, and I was gonna stop. I... came in your... car. I thought you were going home, so I hid in your car boot since I didn't come with a car. When you drove here, I tried finding my way to... the main road, where I'll board a cab... Please don't kill me. I promise to stop following you forever. I don't want to... die, I beg you. Vivian starred, still crying."Who am I?" Zane asked"You are Zane. Zane Chucks," she replied tearfully."What's your name?" Zane asked"Vi... Vivian," she replied, shaking from time to time."Good. If you fail to keep your promise of staying clear of me, I'll kill you," Zane said."I promise not to tell anyone; I promise to stay away from you forever; I promise to avoid you in any possible way; no one will know about what happened tonight, I swear," she said, rushing her words