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My Atomic System
By: EricOngoing
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‘So this is death?’ Sal thought as he stared at darkness, at least that was what his brain told him. Something flickered, it looked tech, it was blue. ‘Uhn?’ Sal stared at it after it materialized. [Initiating Atomic System] [Do you wish to accept, if you do so, you will be moved into a distinct universe] [You have ten seconds] A countdown panel appeared. “What is this?” Sal asked confused as he stared at the countdown on the panel. “A distinct universe?, meaning I get to live another life? It's worth it, even if a demon's taking control of my soul, I still get to live again, I guess I'll go with it” Sal contemplated. “I accept,” Sal murmured. [Host complies] [Atomic System activated] [Searching for suitable world…] [Suitable World found] [Initiating all settings] [Initialization complete] [You will now be sent to your world] ‘what?’ Sal's Vision darkened.
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Chapter 1: Prologue
“Kill him! Kill him!!! Kill him!!” It sounded like the chorus of a song. It was too much noise. Wasn't it?. Does it even matter? I'm going to die anyways. The people in front of me, I wondered what I did to them. Wasn't it that small crime?. That bastard! He caused this whole thing. My head hurt badly, my ears were so hot. Yeah….a few rods landed on it while they dragged me here. I looked around slowly….and sighed. Wasn't the sky beautiful? Resting on a wall and staring at the starry sky, wasn't it?. I licked my blood off my bleeding lips. First time tasting blood. What did it taste like again? Sweet? No, metallic. Yeah metallic. My lips curled upward a little…. almost unnoticeably. My whole being vibrated, and…..I could already sense it. Death. It was on it's way. Who would've thought that I would be it's victim today?. ‘I regret it…’ I gritted my teeth and a heavy pain seemed to find solace in my soul. ‘...I regret it!!!’ I groaned a little, a pain that came from shutt
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My Atomic System Chapter 7: Burning Resolve
Haruto's eye shot open. He grunted aloud and sat up, a soft head ache lashing against his sanity as he did so. He twitched his eyes brows involuntarily. How did I get here? He looked around, the whole place was just the way he left it—the table and chair on the left side, the shoe rack and hanger as well as a wardrobe on the left and a book shelf in the right corner just beside his bed—He was in his room. Last thing he remembered, he was almost killed by the so-called Lord Khai. Oh crap! Haruto stole a glance at the ticking wall clock ahead of him. 11:50 AM. Hell no! I won't make that mistake again. The moment he remembered how he had gotten into the penalty zone and almost died, he shivered. There's still time. Haruto wearily called up the system's interface. [ Daily Quests Push ups: 0/100Sit ups: 0/100 Squats: 0/100 Inclined Push ups: 0/100 Leaps: 0/100. Jog laps: 0/10 km Run laps: 0/10 km Swim: 0/10km Obtain drops of pure liquid hydrogen: 0/10 dro
Last Updated : 2025-03-10My Atomic System Chapter 6: Penalty Zone
Sweat. There was lots of sweat. And Haruto sat in it, only concerned by what just happened to him. It all seemed like the world had quickened up for him alone. Before it's too late? Who are they? After the whole event, he had rushed home in an instant. Clearly frustrated. First I died once, then resurrected in a dead body at the brink of death. And now, THIS!! Haruto rested his back, a deep frown etched on his face. Am I going to die? Again? What the frack is all these? Damn it!. Ting! Haruto suddenly paused. That sound… I've not heard it the whole day. He quickly glanced at the clock on the wall. It was half past eleven. “It's half past eleven already?!” The screen flickered quickly and materialized in front of him. [You have failed to complete your daily quests in 24 hours, you will now be transferred to the penalty zone.] [00:00:05 ] He stared at the screen blankly. Haruto gulped hard, his throat suddenly dry. And unknown fear suddenly attached itself to
Last Updated : 2025-03-10My Atomic System Chapter 5: Death.....Again
Haruto walked out of his apartment and left the building. His apartment was near the main road, so the constant blaring of horns was deafening . But of course, it was something that shouldn't be taken away, it added liveliness to the city. The moment he left the building, a feeling gripped him, one that caged his soul. It was fear!. (Indistinct Whispers). He could hear them, the whispers, it was louder than any other thing. He couldn't actually pick what it was saying. He could just hear it. He stopped and looked back. He could hear his heartbeat, it was loud and though it wasn't that fast, it was pacing up. Seeing only the bustling street and nothing out of the ordinary, he concluded he was just afraid as a result of the series of events that had happened to him lately. Sigh… He resumed his advance. After a while, Gasp!! He halted abruptly and glanced behind him, his pulse racing. What was that just now?!! His heartbeat quickened. He started to walk briskly, he had
Last Updated : 2025-02-25My Atomic System Chapter 4: Secret Combat Force
The nurse approached a ward. As if anxious to meet her patient, she checked her attire a few times before she entered the ward.Huh?Where's Mr Haruto?The nurse stared at the empty bed. She wanted to believe he was in the bathroom but there was not a single sound of water.Suddenly, her eyes rounded up into circles.What if?...“Mr Haruto!!” The nurse dropped the tray in her hand.She quickly pressed the emergency button on the wall.“Patient 05, ward 10 has left the hospital!!!” The nurse cried out in alarm.***Sal attracted multiple gazes and toured the streets of Tokyo. “Is he mad?”“I think so”“You don't see this in Tokyo all the time”Sal totally ignored their whispers. He didn't have a hard time sneaking out of the hospital. All in the name of going out to check something, he left. Though he did know if they'd come for him or NOT.This really doesn't get old. It even looks more beautiful from below here.Sal stared at the tall buildings.Currently, he was still wearing th
Last Updated : 2025-02-23My Atomic System Chapter 3: A second chance
Memories flashed at intervals, all in smooth and seamless transitions. Memories of past occurrences, of both pain and happiness. However, they soon faded. Lazily, Sal opened his eyes. He could hear a constant buzz of electricity all around him. And the surrounding air reeked of…tech?. Droplets of sweat had formed on his forehead. ‘Am I dead?’ thought Sal. The surroundings seemed rather strange and foreign. It wasn't like what he was normally used to seeing anywhere in the world. He sat up slowly, holding his head and squinting his brows in the process. With one eye closed, he surveyed his current surroundings. ‘Where am I? Where's Lily?’ thought Sal. There was a machine on a table beside the bed he was currently lying on. It had strange uneven lines constantly changing shape but in a uniform direction on its screen. The machine just made a constant beep sound. He wondered what it was used for. There were many sharp objects and large machines — he was currently
Last Updated : 2025-02-18My Atomic System Chapter 2: Death? Again?
[You will now be sent to your world.] ‘What?’ his vision darkened… What's happening? Sal felt immense emptiness. It lingered for a moment. But after some time, he started to feel his surroundings faintly. Strangely, He felt a little comfort and discomfort at the same time. His sense of touch, conflicting itself. The comfort, as he could tell, came from what he was currently sitting on, it was a little foamy. The discomfort on the other hand, was something he couldn't fully understand. Subsequently, his sense of smell kick started itself. At first, he couldn't fully tell what his nose picked up. But after sometime, he recognized it, it was a familiar aroma. Back at home, when he was living with Lily. On one occasion, he had killed three rats so ruthlessly after they ate the little supplies he managed to steal, and left them somewhere around the hut to rot. Sal suddenly felt like throwing up. His mouth opened up without his permission but nothing came out. Still yet, his throat
Last Updated : 2025-01-31My Atomic System Chapter 1: Prologue
“Kill him! Kill him!!! Kill him!!” It sounded like the chorus of a song. It was too much noise. Wasn't it?. Does it even matter? I'm going to die anyways. The people in front of me, I wondered what I did to them. Wasn't it that small crime?. That bastard! He caused this whole thing. My head hurt badly, my ears were so hot. Yeah….a few rods landed on it while they dragged me here. I looked around slowly….and sighed. Wasn't the sky beautiful? Resting on a wall and staring at the starry sky, wasn't it?. I licked my blood off my bleeding lips. First time tasting blood. What did it taste like again? Sweet? No, metallic. Yeah metallic. My lips curled upward a little…. almost unnoticeably. My whole being vibrated, and…..I could already sense it. Death. It was on it's way. Who would've thought that I would be it's victim today?. ‘I regret it…’ I gritted my teeth and a heavy pain seemed to find solace in my soul. ‘...I regret it!!!’ I groaned a little, a pain that came from shutt
Last Updated : 2025-01-24
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Dear readers, this is not really a review, it's a message from your dear author, OgWriter, to all his readers. Just so you know, I would be creating a group of books all grouped into what I termed the infinity series. Buckle up and let me take you on a chaotic journey. You might miss a few meals.